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Post by Saruno Kazura Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:17 pm

Basic Character Information:
Name: Saruno Tazunara Kazura
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Clan: Kaosu -Kazura Branch-

Looks:

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Saruno stands about 7 feet, 4 inches tall, with a large cloak surrounding his upper torso and his lower part of the leg area. Yet this is his Kazekage uniform. In other cases, the cloak can be a nice shade of black or white, maybe a hint of blue in the center of the large hat he wears on his head out on the desert sands. With his feet of the uniform, he wears a pair of dense-wood sandals, keeping sand from his feet, he uses a small bit of a white sock on the sides of the wood-area, the straps hooking upwards around the large toe and the medium-area toe. These straps are mostly a blackish or a red color, depending on his mood. On another occasion, he can wear a short cloak, a nice shade of red or crimson, the hat he wears a streak of white and red. This is when he feels in the mood for some free time or some 'Other' ways of his entertainment. He also wears a small set of sealed bandages on his right optical, in which has a powerful 'Bloodline' sealing tag on the front of the optical, in which keeps back all effects of it. Because Saruno is of the Kazura clan, and possesses the ability to shape the hair color, wing colors, etc. with the temporal change of his emotions, his hair is mostly a nice shade of black when he is in his 'Kazekage' sort of way. And last but not least, the wings on his back, when in a Kazekage sort of way, are a nice shade of black, which absorb a lot of heat, in an obvious sort of way. The feathers on each of the wings are purely real, grown from birth and can have the ability to fly. When Saruno had the wings to a point where the cloak he was wearing didn't hold the wings all so snugly, he fitting the back of his cloak to two large zippers, where he can slip the wings from under his cloak to out upon his back, out of the snugness of the cloak.
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When in such a state in a casual kind of an 'Advanced' battle state, he has the ability to . His eyes are just a plain crimson, or maybe a few streaks of white and black in between. He wears a full-length jacket that wraps around his torso all so snugly. This jacket contains a vast amount of chain, crossing over his shoulders and the sides of his stomach. With these chains at hand, he can swirl them off the jacket and use them for offensive of defensive purposes. There are also two bucklers that hand out in a 'U' like fashion, acting like small balancing area. In other parts of his body, he wears a small eye-patch on his right optical, keeping it from anyone sight. This eye patch is a nice black hue and covers his entire optic to the eyebrow and a small bit below. A string is attached to both sides to keep the patch stable. Due to a condition, he cannot remove the eye patch unless certain doom is upon him. Besides that, Saruno also wears a small gauntlet, on his left and right wrists, holding each a mechanism inside of them. These mechanisms are made purely of a steel-like substance, and can be utilized for the Raiton Elemental Release. The mechanisms can be hidden in the socket of it, and be retracted to over 2 feet in length. These metal spikes can also be used in offense and in defensive purposes.

Shy: When Saruno is in a shy state of mind, he tends to wear a set of white or brownish clothing, best suited for this kind of emotion. This clothing is best made as a arched-open shirt or jacket, and a set of brown/white pants, which have at least 2 or three side pockets on the end of the leg areas, below the main pockets. His hair is mainly shifted to a brown-type of shade, a bit within a shiny-sort of way. And a scary part of this state of Saruno's being, a set of pure 'Neko' ears lift up on his head, obviously making it a shy state. In this state, and saruno's type of emotion, Neko's are prematurely extremely shy, thus, being in this state of mind. He continues to wear the bandage over his right optical, nothing in between or anything else.
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Berserk/Battle: With Saruno's 'Berserk' or simple battle style, it's a simple set of emotions. Obviously, within his Berserk state, he tends to be incredibly angered and the power of his Yuui blade kicks in. The Armor of Yuui, when the power sets contains the body in a wave of energy and forms various amounts of shapes around the Shoulders, elbows, knees, legs, feet, hands, wrists, and torso area. His head is left uncovered to the fact the blade cannot utilize the power to move armor that far up in the body, besides for a small trinket of metal going from the bandaged-eye area and moving backwards around the head until it connects with the other side of the trinket. This armor is mainly a black-sort of color and has the design of a Crow or a black bird, mainly just a first option of a Phoenix. On some other types of battle-course, he can utilizing massive abilities, like summon up power beyond his mortal understanding, due to the blade taking over his very mind.
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Normal/Everyday Life: Within Saruno's everyday life, which is his usual, emotionless state. He mainly has just his regular clothing, a typical white and crimson shaded jacket and bandages around his right eye.(Not in tone with pic.) The jacket contains of a small scroll in the center pocket in the left flank of the jacket, holding his Tou no Ranmyaku quite steadily. Just in case he needs to use it. Also, he keeps a steady amount of kunai and Shurican in his right sleeve, in case he needs to use it out of bounds. And that is the appearance of this type of emotional setting.
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Personality: Saruno is the kind of person who has a bit of 'Mixed' emotions, he can shift from his Shy state to his emotionless state in just a speck of time, no doubt. He can immediately shift his berserk state into his shy state, but takes a bit of time with that, it's his kind of being born that way, his hair, his wings, everything on his just says his mood, his emotions, almost everything about him. He is a mysterious kind of kage, in almost every way possible. His kind of work is different in ways that not even his sister or his brother know about. Saruno tends to think on his own behalf, and mostly for the villages', he can listen to the problems of each of the people, tend to them in a manner that all will enjoy, and much more to his taste. Even when a crisis may pop up in the great village he is protecting, he is the first one to know, and the first one to strike, even when it's a minor threat, he will take care of it with much needed ease and care for that type of emergency. A small bit of information he will not enjoy to hear, will be handled in a way, most people won't like, in the least of their worries. If an enemy will not talk during an interrogation, he is still calm, and just unleashes something that might help the situation, and may help in some other way. If someone gets hurt and gets sent to the Hospital, he will know about it and send something or someone to help the hospital work it out a bit faster. In his shy kind of way, he will do things that will not allow mostly anyone to see him, all ways around.

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Basic Clan Information
Kekkei Genkai: Ayatsuriryoku -Power of Manipulation-
Description: The Ayatsuriryoku was developed by the highest ranking members in the Kazura clan around the time of the First shinobi war in the Continent. The members discovered the Ayatsuriryoku to be able to manipulate the surrounding chakra, their own chakra, into a formation of many designs and patterns to fit the need of the Kazura, and being able to use Genjutsu and Ninjutsu along with it. Similar to the Leaf ninja's Sharingan, the Ayatsuriryoku is able to use devastating Genjutsu and Ninjutsu. The Members of the Kazura clan are to be able to use Earth and Lightning elements in a well-patterned format if able to go to the ranking of Adulthood (Like the Uchiha, they had to be able to spit fire from their mouths in a great fireball to become an Adult.). The vision of the Ayatsuriryoku user was set up into Three different stages, the First state, the Second state, and the Third state.
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Ayatsuriryoku - Manipulation Power

First State: Life Finder - Itonami Fainda

Description: The first state was known as the 'Life Finder' (Itonami Fainda [Japanese format]), which is able to manipulate the seen chakra around the area into a weapon of choice, not made by Jutsu of any kind, and marking of veins show up on the arms of the user, the chakra network working it's way towards the manipulation process. The process of the Manipulation is draining to the user of it's chakra, reason, the Chakra expelled from the body cannot be placed back into the user because of it's use, even with the greatest of chakra control cannot do so.

Second State: Life Flower - Seimei Kusabana

Description: The second state was known as the 'Life Flower' (Seimei Kusabana [Japanese format]), because of it's shifting chakra that can be the shape of a flower in come cases. This state is able to use chakra in a Genjutsu and Ninjutsu more effectively and more powerfully. Within the use of the Second state, the veins of the user begin to show as the chakra network's flow of chakra begins to flow faster, at a more-productive pace, being able to use the Chakra-consuming Ninjutsu and Genjutsu a bit more powerfully, and with more drawbacks on the matter. With each Ninjutsu and Genjutsu used, the amount needed for them are timed by the amount needed by the size of the chakra flow through the body.

Third state: Life Giver - Jinsei Ataenushi

On the Third state, the right or left eye is permanently sealed to become a bringer of annihilation to the mind and body. The color of the eye is mainly Grey or a dark crimson, and the flow of chakra used in manipulation is automatically doubled by the amount given off by any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. By the same marking the Chakra used in both terms are doubled to it's highest state. The eye is also used in some of the clans' forbidden Genjutsu, used to call forth a power which is harmful to the target and the user. The eye will become more and more blurred with each use of Genjutsu, degrading it to it's lowest state, and to blindness. The chakra network, of overuse of the Chakra manipulation, will cause in a complication of the chakra network, and be less able to do Ninjutsu and Genjutsu.
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Special Effect: Immense amounts of chakra/Chakra control.
Link: N/A


Skill and Rank Information
Village: Sunagakure no Sato.
Rank: Rokudaime Kazekage.

Special Characteristics: 1. Vast amounts of chakra 2. Shukaku Bijuu 3. Angelic wings. 4. Third state Kekkei Genkai.
Special Effects:

1. 75% more than Shinobi chakra standards
2. Manipulation of the Doton elemental release
3. Ability to fly.
4. Ability to Conjure 'Shitsunen Kurai' without the specialty of Genjutsu.

Elements: Doton[Earth Release], Raiton[Lightning Release], Fuuton[Wind Release], Suiton[Water Release].
Skills Specialties:
Primary: Ninjutsu
Secondary: Kenjutsu.
Sub: Weaponry.


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Post by Saruno Kazura Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:50 pm

Weapons:

Basic Weapons:

Soldier pills: x30
Kunai Knives: x100
Shurican: x100
Paper Explosives: x3000
Invisible Wire: x30 Reels
Normal Scythe: x01
Narusu Crystal: x05 shards(Kept in special pouch)
Arrow: x100
Quiver: x01

Advanced Weaponry:

Name: Yuui -Purple Flame-

Description
    -Looks: Yuui is about nine feet in length and is carried in a sheath that allows the effect of it's chakra draining still. Within the sheath's internal structure is small crystals of Narusu, making the unsheathing of the blade glow a small red light. The blade's color is mostly a silver to a black, depending on the state it is in. Within the armor state, the hilt, and the blade of the sword shift to a Crimson/Black mix, affecting Saruno by shifting onto his body and creating an armor that allows him to deflect most elemental ninjutsu. But when this state is active, it takes an enormous amount of chakra to actually pull off. When the state is done, all the parts of armor is instantly decreased back to the blade and returns to it's normal color/shade.

    Within it's technique state, it begins to shift to an abnormal color, a shade of crimson, the hilt of a blackish color. It has an opposite effect of the armor state. It actually begins to absorb the elemental chakra from a technique, but takes the same amount of chakra from Saruno himself. It can utilize this to deflect and throw back the chakra with almost twice the power.

    -Capabilities: Charged with enough chakra, the blade can fire bolts of concentrated chakra towards an object or person. Within the bolts, are Katon Elemental fires, which can burn through some high-density steel, but not all. Within it's 'Technique' and 'Armor' states, it can affect Saruno within moment's of it's direct contact. In a state of pure chakra, it begins to emit a purple-like flame from it's blade. All the rest shown above.


Story: Being centered within the depths of the cavern of sorrow, it was mended with the stone and material known as 'Materite', known for it's almost unbreakable nature. It is said that many have tried to break the accursed blade with many of the strongest man-made weapons in the world. But all have failed. Only a small damage has been dealt to the blade on it's great strain. This was thousands upon thousands of years ago. It was sealed away in the darkness of the cavern of sorrow for fear of it's great power. Only one who has mastered the art of the sword, and has power beyond any normal shinobi can wield the blade and be bestowed it's power of the darkness and Oblivion intent power.

About a millennium later, the Kazura clan began to find out the Tou no Ranmyaku, the blades of chaos and started to use them to their power in combat. Within the darkness of the blade's power, Yuui, was named the Second most powerful sword in the nine blade arsenal. This particular sword is named for it's almost limitless power, but also for it's chakra draining effect which drains the chakra of the wielder until they have little to none left in their system.

Name: ShiseiKuro Longbow - Dark Nova Longbow -
Type: Bow
Length: 9 Feet.
String: Dragon skin Wire.
Material of Bow: Wood(Center), Dragon tooth(Far edge/outer area).
Description: Being made of such hard-to-find substances, this bow can shoot arrows over 500 yards with absolutely no problem. Only one drawback on the matter. It utilizes chakra to shoot an arrow, so the bow string can move even the slightest inch. Within the bow's interior, cannot be penetrated by any mere substances with just a slight touch of the rare material. The bow can withstand along, so can the string. This bow is definitely, hard to break.

Name: Violin
Type: Musical Intrument.
Description: A Basic, non-harmful musical intrument that can make beautiful music.

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[Suiton • Water Release Ninjutsu]

Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The user will first generate a whirling sphere of water to utilize this technique. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale the target.

Suishuu Gorugon - Water Attack Strong Current Torrential Rain
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Suiton • Suishuu Gorugon is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The will use the water element to generate a mass of water. This can then be sent towards the target as a biting serpent.

Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Mizu no Muchi - Whip of Water
Rank: C
Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.

Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank: B
Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
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[Raiton Ninjutsu • Lightning Release Ninja Techniques]

Name: Lightning Release • Lightning Burst -Raiton • Raikou Ba-suto
Rank: B
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Lightning Release • Lightning burst is an advanced ninjutsu Technique. Utilizing massive amounts of chakra within the chakra network, with the proper chakra control, the user can burst out a surge of lightning elemental chakra. This expelled chakra can push away most weapons and attacks in a blast from the body, and can block most Metal-type weaponry, Ranged attacks, and Close range attacks equal or lesser than the Rank of this technique. This technique takes a massive amount of chakra to utilize, and is not intended for extreme use. Techniques with Fast-paced fighting styles, and higher speed-like techniques can get past this technique. Also with the protection of the lightning it can block off most metal-like weaponry, anything else besides metal is a big weakness against it, which it means, anything heavier than a 150lbs. blade can get past the extreme amounts of energy.

Name: Lightning Release • Shadow Lightning -Raiton • Kage Raikou-
Rank: A
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Raiton • Kage Raikou is utilized by Saruno Kazura. With the massive chakra Saruno possesses, he can use this jutsu without flaw. Moving a large portion of chakra within his left or right index and middle finger, he can form it into a condensed blast of chakra, in the form of lightning. Utilizing the lightning element, it can be almost matched with Ranmyaku Shitsunen. The Kage Raikou takes a large amount of Saruno's chakra, making it only necessary to use in a battle.

Name: Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen 混乱忘却-
Rank: A - S
Element: Raiton[Lightning Element]
Description: Ranmyaku Shitsunen is utilized by Saruno Kazura. Forming the needed hand seals, Saruno can use his chakra control along with this jutsu. Once active, tens, to hundreds of bolts of lightning would course through the ground or sky above him within moments, and the movements of the lightning can be controlled at his will. The lightning can still be dodged, but only with high speed equal to his own. Since this is such a high-leveled technique, it takes a large amount of chakra for each bolt of lightning to be conjured.

Name: Shadow Nova (Kage Shisei 影新星)
Rank: S
RP post: 2 (1 Charge)
Range: Short (5 ~ 10m) Medium (10 ~ 15m) Long ( 20m+)
Element: ~
Description: Kage Shisei is an Advanced form of the Raikou Ba-suto technique. Forming the needed hand seals, the user will begin to channel great waves of lightning elemental chakra through their chakra network, and condensing it around their body, but keeping a precise amount per part of the body. If the technique does not keep a balance of chakra throughout the body, it will cancel, along with the chakra used in it. The body will release a large blast of Lightning elemental chakra throughout the area in a massive explosion around 25m-40m in diameter, using a large amount of chakra with the blast, but will burn or destroy everything in it's path.

Name: Shadow Pulse! -Aneiparusu!-
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into many patterns and formats, Saruno can channel a small amount of Raiton chakra into his left or right palm and release it in massive streams of chain-like patterns. This pattern can knock back other types of techniques, equal or lesser to the rank of this technique. But if charged with higher amounts of chakra, the rank can double and block higher amounts of attacks with just a simple Pulse. Since this is condensed chakra, it will look like black waves of energies, instead of the regular blue and yellow coloring.

Name: Shadow Wave! -Aneinami!-
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into various patterns and shapes, he can condense a small sphere into the palm of his left or right hand and utilize it to it's fullest potential. He can smash his other hand, or smash it against an object or person and send a massive surge of dark lightning towards that area. Since it is a lightning elemental release technique, it takes a large amount of chakra to use.

Name: Shadow Pulse • Omega -Aneiparusu! • Omega-
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the same abilities as the regular Aneiparusu, it can channel farther amounts of shadow-like Raiton chakra, otherwise known as condensed chakra. Saruno can make the sphere of chakra spin and channel massive amounts of Raiton chakra. Similar to his Kage Raikou technique, he can unleash force beyond many of his other techniques. This sphere can he pushed against an opponent and send the person flying within moments of impaction. This can also use the elements around itself and charge it with that type of charge. Since this is such a high-leveled technique, it takes a large amount of chakra to use.


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[Non Elemental Ninjutsu • Regular Techniques]

Name: Kawarami No Jutsu -Replacement Technique-
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Nawanuke No Jutsu - Rope Release Technique -
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5-10
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu that allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature.
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
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[Kekkei Genkai Ninjutsu + Genjutsu • Bloodline Trait Ninja Techniques + Illusionist Arts]

[Genjutsu • Illusionist Arts]

Name: Dark Oblivion - Shitsunen Kurai
Rank: S
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu/Doujutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the greatness of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, this can only be used in the third state, with the right or left optical of the member. With intense control of chakra, the user can spark this genjutsu to automatic envision, meaning that the user can use it by looking into the others optics. The Genjutsu is supposedly to create a darkness, all around the user and the target, the user fading away, memories from the target's mind is extracted, the nightmares and terrible memories from long past is extracted, making them see it more realistically. The memories will tap into the nervous system of the target, making them see, feel, hear, and smell real, no matter what it is. The Genjutsu will degrade the will of the target by each memory or nightmare extracted from the target's mind, making almost every last piece of will vanish as they see what they fear and quiver in pain and suffering. With increased usage of the Doujutsu, the user's optical will become more and more degraded along with a higher chance of Blindness after each usage.
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[Ninjutsu • Ninja Techniques]

Novice-Level

Name: Kakuhan no Chakra -Chakra Whip-
Rank: C-A
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m) Medium (10 ~ 15m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a short-stemmed or long-stemmed whip with a little flaw in the technique. A constant flow of chakra in the brim of the whip can keep it's painful strikes in a constant motion. A simple crack of the whip, charged with enough chakra can snap through skin in a second, and only a small density-kind of steel. Higher amounts of chakra and great amounts of training can easily increase the strength of the whip, being able to do as a member pleases.

Name: Tou Chakra -Chakra Blade-
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: On the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can create a blade of pure chakra. The blade can be as hard as steel, and as sharp as a dagger. The chakra of the member will begin to flow out from the desired point of the body, (arms, palms, etc), and begin to take shape into a blade. The amount of chakra used, depends on the size of the blade, and can be cast away by a higher-level technique.

Intermediate-level

Name: Chakra Blade Slash - Chakra Tou Tateru
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m) Medium (10 ~ 15m)
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra Manipulation, a member can use this along with the Chakra Blade Technique. Within the Blade, a member can slash a large amount of chakra with the blade, causing a slash made of pure chakra, and can be cut through a small density steel, but travels in a straight line, making it easy to dodge. The length of the Slash depends on the amount of chakra within the body.

Name: Ultima Chakra Sword Slash - Kyuukyoku Tou Tateru 尾音節中心輪剣斜線〔カット〕
Rank: A
Range: Far (15m+)
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the efficiency of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, a member can use this along with the Chakra Sword Technique. With the sword, the member can use a large amount of their chakra to create a slash of chakra more powerful than the normal chakra slash technique, being able to use it in a circular formation of the slash, not along the ground, but also in the air, if used in a circular slash. With the intense amounts of chakra being given off, the user may feel a bit worn out with the slash if used alot of chakra beforehand.

Master-Leveled

Name:Angelic String Smash - Ultimate Pull
Rank: A
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the abilities of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, they can conjure this technique with little flaw. Channeling a large amount of chakra within the user's left or right fist, or a desired area, the strength of the muscular system will increase. If smashing into an opponent, the user can send the chakra into the impacted area of the opponent, creating a chakra string in the process. When pulled, the strength of the user with the chakra still channeled, can easily snap a bone, muscle tissue, etc in a slight movement of a wrist.

Name:Angel Strike - Ultimate Pound
Rank: B
Range: Short (0 ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: N/A
Clan: Kazura -Kaosu-

Description: With the abilities of the Kazura Clan's Chakra manipulation, they can channel chakra into a desired part of the limbs and induce a large amount of more striking damage than a normal hit to the desired area. If holding the channeled chakra too long or too short, it will disappear if not in a constant motion of chakra.


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[Doton Ninjutsu • Earth Release Ninja Techniques]

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile
Rank: B
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.

Name: Doton • Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Doryuu Jouheki - Earth Style Rampart
Rank: B
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doryuu Jouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals. Then a large earthen wall will erupt from the ground. The ninja can use this technique in conjunction with a Water Style Takitsubo Jutsu. This can allow this to form a large waterfall.

Name: Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Name: Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: B
Element(s): Doton[Earth Release]
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.
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[Ryoku no Jutsu • Power Technique]

Name: Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage -Ninpouton • Natsuin Dankai-
Rank: C-S
Description: There are 5 Stages in the Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage Ninjutsu.

-First Stage: Seal of Chaos - Natsuin Ranmyaku -
Rank: C
Description: The seal of Chaos is set on the ground below the user, glowing with the color of the chakra used to place it down, creating a larger long-range radius for attacks based on the user's performance. The user can channel chakra through the area of the seal and throw small sphere-like chakra blasts through the air.


-Second Stage: Seal of Destruction - Natsuin Toukai -
Rank: B
Description: After setting the seal of Chaos down, the Seal will enlarge to a farther diameter, further increasing power over 2 fold. The ground around the seal will begin to shatter upwards and the user can use them to the advantage of throwing them at the opponent. If the opponent is within the boundaries of the Seal, the user can impact several hits against them when they form a large amount of chakra into their palms.


-Third Stage: Seal of Havoc - Natsuin Sangai -
Rank: B
Description: After setting the Seal of Destruction down, the seal will further enlarge to a diameter of 30 meters, increasing power to over 8 fold, causing major damage to the muscular system and chakra network after the use. Utilizing the abilities of the First stage, the user can cast more powerful channels of chakra blasts, more fierce than the last.


-Fourth Stage: Seal of Annihilation - Natsuin Kaimetsu -
Rank: A
Description: After setting the seal of Havoc, the user will have 4 more seals of Annihilation around them, setting on the four edges of the seal, further increasing power to over 20 fold over, causing major harm to the muscular system and chakra network to over half of what the user used in the activation of the technique. Utilizing massive power, the user can perform a larger amount of power to the opponent, the aim of the user increased to a point where they can pinpoint the target and
utilize power beyond their normal standards. The spheres of chakra blasts will further increase in power as the aim increases as well.


-Fifth Stage: Seal of Oblivion - Natsuin Shitsunen -
Rank: S
Description: After utilizing the Seal of Annihilation, the diameter of the seal will increase to over 500 meters, increasing power and aim 90 fold. This will cause major damage on the muscular system, actions of the user, nervous system breakdown, chakra network destruction, etc., Causing more harm to the user than the other four seals. The power of the user, within it's inhuman state can impact heavier blows to the opponent with ease if the target is within range of the seal, seven more seals will show upon the user, utilizing the chakra of that user and place it to a setting where the strength and power is increased to a point where they can shift strength to smash a boulder into oblivion with ease. The chakra blast spheres will increase in a size that a single sphere can cause a crater in the ground with absolute no problem, but takes a larger amount of chakra to utilize. Aftermath problems with utilizing a technique along with this one, will result in massively overpowering that technique to it's fullest potential, and will include the breakdown of the nervous and muscular system, along with the destruction of the chakra network, thus, killing the user in it's place.



Additional Information: When utilizing the chakra sphere function, you cannot just 'hit' an opponent and throw a sphere at him/her. There is a distinct time limitation in which the user can hit and throw a sphere at a time. When using the Hand-to-hand Combat style of the Seals, you cannot use the Function of the spheres unless shifted to a Ninja art stage of the
seals, thus separating the amount of chakra usage ad the amount of power bestowed upon the user.

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[Fuuton • Wind Release Ninjutsu]

Name: Oblivion Wind Slash -Bokuyaku Tateru no Kaze 忘却風斜線〔カット〕-
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton[Wind Release]
Description: Bokuyaku Tateru no Kaze is utilized by the missing ninja, Saruno Kazura. Utilizing his ability of the Fuuton element, and his Blade of chaos, Yuui, he can form a powerful slash of Fuuton chakra towards his opponent with great speed. Because of Yuui's advanced power, this can be deadlier than a normal slash of wind. The wind can be at speeds around 900mph, but nothing is certain, depending on the chakra usage. The slash can pierce through medium-density armor and some kinds of shields, but can also be advanced with another type of elemental, like Raiton.

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A swift wind entered through the great Kirigakure no Sato, the mist around it beginning to shiver with fear as a sound of surging lightning and pounding thunder roared over it's bays. The lightning surged forward and backwards, towards a small house in the middle of the river, on a small isle in the middle of the great area. Thunder roared over it's bays once more as a great storm of thunder, none of himself was creating this storm, it was natural, all it's own. Another swift wind began to overflow the area, curdling through the open shade windows of the small house, making them 'Bang' against the plating of the house outside of it. A dark figure began to stand at the edge of the closed doorway, unable to be seen by normal light. His dark cloak covered his features, all that was showing was his dark, black hair, swaying in the cool breeze.

A simple movement of his palm touched the door. Nothing for a moment.

A blast of lightning rippled through the door, shattering it in a millisecond. It was Saruno Kazura himself, taking on the revenge he had so longed for. He began to walk within the confines of the doorway, into the small house of a man and woman. The man was part of the army that killed his clan, he was ready. Ready to kill him to no end.

The sword on his back simply stayed where it was, not a single motion of energy, not a single movement of it's form. Nothing. Saruno's emotions were raging with anger and oblivion. He wanted to kill this man, no matter what it took. Fierce amounts of chakra ripped around his arms, looking around the open doorways of the room he was in. He simply wanted to kill this man, with all his strength.

He took a small notice of a shadowed figure in the distance of the night-lit house. It was the man, carrying a small sword in his palms. A simple notion of that raged the power in his blade, making it glow with a fierce purple lighting, lighting up the entire house as if the sun had set on the horizon. He lifted his left palm to the crimson hilt of his blade, his optics set on the man's shadow before him.

The man had seemingly large muscles for a man of his age, white hair, a small, semi-shaved beard, a simple uniform, he seemingly wanted to live out his military days for the better. But it didn't matter. He was going to die, either way.

Saruno Lunged forward in a great battle cry, the blade in his palms simply growing in length, surged with chakra from the center of the hilt to the very tip of the blade. The man's eyes just widened, watching the blade come forth to him as he raised his blade in attempted resistance to spare his life, but it was absolute. Yuui Tore through the man's blade like a knife through butter, shattering it's metal with just a touch of it's silver shine. A moment passed, blood spattered onto the floor, on furniture, dishes and silverware, this was absolute.

The man before him lay dead, the sword he holds in his hand is now just a simple black hilt. The blade in Saruno's palm lay in the man's severed body, a great deal of disgust and triumph in Saruno's gaze, Yuui was slashed into the man's heart area, blood spurting onto the ground with an eerie sense to just toss the man into the river. But he wouldn't, he wanted to make the man's soul just suffer into the confines of this house. He picked up the man's heart, placing in his palm as he looked at it, a dead man's heart, then just threw it onto the ground, stepped on it with his great shoe, spikes on it's end. Blood continued to flow onto the floor, sealing the man's soul in the house with just a small step of his foot. No Technique. This was a common tale told in his clan, step on a dead man's heart in his home, his soul is trapped there, forever.

A loud crack of thunder roared through the great hidden mist, a surge of lightning roaring down from the heavens, smashing into the ground just outside of the house. His rage was unrelenting, it was like nature was copying his movements, his emotions, his anger.

Rage was building inside of him, his nails growing to a length where he would be able to scratch someone's heart out of their chest cavity. He was breathing heavily at the moment, then a brisk motion of his lungs inhaling, then out, settling down all too lightly.


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Other Advanced Weaponry-based Items

Name: Spike Mechanisms
Type: Weaponry
Size: 3x1 |Spike Length: 2'|
Description: These weapons are placed on each of Saruno's arms when he is in his 'Advanced' battle state. These mechanisms hold each A large spike in the space within the center of the structure. Since these are purely made of a Raiton-Amplifying metal, it is used to charge and/or release Raiton-elemental techniques with much more power than it usually would. These can also be used as lightning rods, and combine other attacks against him, to work as his own. This will only work with techniques A rank and lower.
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History Of Saruno Kazura


Childhood Arc
Saruno was born at a ninja hospital in the Shichiyougakure area, with unusual traits in mind, even the medical ninja had problems with that kind of infant. He had markings of a soon-to-grow wings on his back, a seemingly inhuman amount of chakra, even though he was just born. It was amazing that a member of the Kazura clan had such traits when they were born, several of the members of the clan had respected Saruno for many years of his life. At the time he was 2 years old, he was already walking and talking, wandering about the streets of his clan's housing ring, only to be picked up by his mother, who took him back to their house. He lived with alot of his family, including his 3 brothers, 4 sisters, his father and mother, and two of his cousins, they lived in a rarely large house in the center of the clan housing ring, which was the home of the great Leader of the clan, known as Toshiro Kazura, who had mastered hundreds of jutsu in his time as leader of the clan. His wife was known as Sasina Kazura, named after the great hero of the clan hundreds upon thousands of years before their generation, she had a shy kind of personality around her family and friends, but not so much when she was exposed to a certain kind of crystal, which affected Saruno as well, due to his traits. The crystal was known as 'Narusu', a crystal found deep in the ground under a certain mountain in the Crescent moon country. It affected Sasina and Saruno by turning their emotions to rage and fierce power, it scared most of the members of the clan because of their power, banishing the crystal from the use of the clan, for fear of spread of the trait. At the time of 5, he had a half-set of wings, they had only grown so much as at the point where the feathers are beginning to grow, but not being able to fly yet. He was just starting to learn how to use his chakra as a source of his power, moving it around to move rocks, pebbles, and leaves around the streets of his clan housing area, moving them to make patterns in the dirt like a drawing, which impressed his father, Toshiro, on his use of his chakra. His brother, Kuroyami Kazura, showed him to use a simple technique to use with his chakra, a small sphere, about the size of a marble. He showed him how to play with the marble in games and such, telling him it was a great thing to learn farther in his life. He practiced it alot in his spare time, out of sleeping and eating, training his power with the fun he has, he used his marble trick to fool around with cats and dogs, laughing with joy as he did that.

Academy
About the age of 7, he had began his days at the academy. It was rough for Saruno in the days of the academy due to his, 'Condition'. His hair changed color with each mood he has, but only keeps the color by being one emotion, it changed from Light colors to Dark colors, and everything in between. This started to happen when he was first exposed to the 'Narusu' mineral when he was 5 years old. During the academy days, he began to train his chakra control to try and master a couple of the jutsu, like Bunshin no jutsu, and E rank jutsu like that. His older brother, who was a Chuunin at the time, taught him to use a couple E rank jutsu to work with great chakra control, and use them to the advantage of his chakra. Days past, then weeks, his chakra levels rose, and so did his chakra control, fulfilling the way of his clan. He had learned the ways of his clan's Ayatsuriryoku techniques and began to train them to his advantage. His power was unrelenting to whatever he practiced on, but got tired out too easily, he was still a young boy. His sister, Kairi, his oldest sister was always helping him out with his medical problems, and tried to help him out when he was practicing too advanced moves for his type of level. Even though his chakra was outstanding, he used it mostly up when he was training, but he never gave up on anything he trained on. This impressed his father very much. Around the third year at the Academy, when he was only 10 years of age, they put him to the test of the Bunshin jutsu test. When he came up to do his Bunshin, he was practicing a B Class move for years, even though it was only to call upon a single clone. He performed the Kage Bunshin no jutsu at such a level, even his teachers were impressed by this level of chakra. He had passed his days at the Academy. A person from the Konohagakure no Sato area had been visiting the area for the past few months, and teaching Saruno that technique, since he had the chakra for it, and for what he would and could do. Since this was such a high-level technique for an Academy student, he was rushed to the hospital for a such a number of times, his sensei had trouble teaching him.

Death to the Kazura (Story)

The night was young, trees were swaying the breeze, leaves floating down on the air, towards the ground as it flew off the branches, a peaceful night, so or people thought of this full-moonlit night. The cerulean moon shined above the houses in a safe-like housing ring just outside a village twenty miles from the area, the place was calm, peaceful, lights in people’s houses off, the dark showing from the moonlight of the sky. It was the thirtieth of May, in the springtime of the country; flowers were blooming in the gardens of young gardeners, in window boxes of people’s houses, showing their bright, cheerful nature, it was a perfect season, for the perfect clan. Footsteps race across the ground, pounding against the brown dirt of the road before hundreds upon thousands of armored men. The men were running at high speeds, giant twin blades strapped to their back, shining with the blue moonlight above. They were headed in one direction, the housing ring of the Kazura Clan.

Darkness fell heavily onto the night, the moon blocked out by the clouds overhead, it was seemingly going to be the worst night, in the history of the clan. Two figures stand at the top of the Wall surrounding the housing ring, guards, each holding a large spear on their back, a blade in a sheath on their sides, ready for any encounter they may face. A sound of unsheathing swords was heard by one of the guards, ready for battle, the guard held onto the crimson hilt of the blade he had on his right side. Before he could even so much as move a muscle in that arm, blood fell. An arrow struck onto the center of the chest plate of the guard, piercing his heart in an instant; Amazing accuracy for the deadliest shot. Hundreds more begin to strike out onto the plain of the hills around the clan, striking the guards that surround it, but only few begin to strike back. Power is unleashed upon the attackers, smashing through the hills like a knife through butter, heads roll, blood flies; it was the battle for life and death.
Few remained with the attackers of the clan; many remain for the guards that protected it, worn out from the use of their energy, swords shattered in their palms. Bodies of slain guards and attackers litter the ground around the clan housing ring, blood soaking into the ground, it was a blood fest, and nothing could have stopped it, only destruction comes of fighting.

Two hours pass, the guards reform with new recruits, only in the dead of night, the sound of a wolf howls over the night, towards the moon above. A powerful surge of energy was felt by one of the guards at the top of the wall, feeling great pain with the power growing near. Two of the guards near him come forth to him, to try and calm him, but just left him alone, because of the calm he claimed to have, saying it was nothing. But it wasn’t, his arms were burning, the power growing near the area, making him just feel like he is on fire, screaming in pain with all the power he was feeling, crouching onto the stone floor below.

A blast of power ripped through the trees of the area around the guarding ring, shattering through the ground. Two guards stepped forward to the blast of energy, slashing their blades to the ground as another slash of power ripped through the other one, canceling it out in an instant.

The man who was in pain stepped up, his eyes as white as the purest snow, a large sword in his right palm, burning with large amounts of crimson energy, He jumped from the tower, stepping onto the ground below the area he was, 100 feet above where he is now.

Two guards on the ground ran to the man, asking what he was doing. Ten seconds later, blood flies on the ground below, limbs fall onto the ground, staining it crimson with the blood flowing out of them, two guards lay dead on the ground. Nothing could stop this man; his power was inhuman to any standard, power rushing through his veins, crimson energy flowing around him with an eerie red glow. This was the beginning to the end of the Kazura.

Days later, the man returned to the area, hundreds of men behind him, ready and armed for combat, swords in their hands, adamant armor surrounding them, protecting them from the pouring rain around them, the mud covering their boots. Clouds covered the sky, the moon shining above them, shining against their armor, brightening them up. The leader of the set of warriors stepped up to the front of them line, giving a war speech that frenzied them into a war cry, running towards the wall that protected the clan housing ring with swords raised.

A messenger bursts through the door of the clan leader’s house, the leader already sitting up on his bed, his right eye covered in a bandage, already knowing about the attack. He quickly got dressed in his battle clothing, swords on his back, two fingerless gloves on his palms, ready to go in an instant. After a few moments of thinking what to do, he immediately vanished from the room, appearing on top of his house, looking towards the flames of war at the other end of the housing ring, his cloak swaying in the cool evening breeze.

The biggest of the attackers ravaged through the gate of the housing ring, flames setting through the burnt areas. The adamant armor they were wearing had large spikes on their shoulders and torso area, bloodstains on them all, after killing over 50 guards on the wall, a bloodied sword in their palms. They were obviously the best of the attackers, meaning they were captains and commanders of the force. They had also large symbols on the fronts of their helmets, the symbol of another clan, a large dragon wrapping around a symbol of peace and war, meaning they were the Varino clan, the clan of war and oblivion.
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The wife of the leader, who was lying on the bed with the leader, noticing the coverings on the other side of the bed, was uncovered. She quickly sat up, looking through the window on her side of the room, watching the flames of war rage through the gates around the clan housing ring, a horrified expression showing. Soon after, she ran out of the house, in only her nightgown, showing with the black outlining, a white trim around the neck and arm area, she was scared of what might happen to the rest of the clan if the guards of the clan didn’t protect them well enough to escape. Her name was Sasina Kazura, named after the hero of the clan hundreds of years ago, who helped save the clan from war, and from ultimate destruction. Soon after, she went back in the house; slamming her fist on the table she had near the door, alerting three children in the house, which they knew something was wrong.

Three of the children walked down the stairs of their two story house, their names were; Kairi, Saruno, and Kuroyami Kazura, three of the five children of the leader, which was of royal clan blood, each of their strength more powerful than the next. Their mother was tearing away at the sight of the flames of war she saw with her two cerulean eyes, watching the other clan members die off from the blades of the attackers, blood spurring onto the ground, heads rolling, limbs being ripped from their bodies, it was true blood shed. Saruno Kazura was the first to watch this happen, his heart sank, even at this young age, when he has mastered some of the clan techniques, he never knew about this attack until now.

Frightened at the sight of the flames of war, they began to run up to their rooms, only for their mother to stop them, beginning to speak to them what to do next. She told them to run from the area, making sure they get somewhere safe while the clan members begin to run out the attackers, even if they have to die to do so. Tears were streaming down her cheeks, looking back out to the flames of war and began to run out in her battle-like clothing, ready to fight to the end.

Kuroyami, the oldest of the Kazura family members, began to run upstairs to the bedrooms of the other two Kazura, waking them up and getting them out of bed and dressed, he was getting ready to leave. They took out their bags and filled them up with some of their clothes, a basket of food and stuff to find food with, and many other necessary items, ready to set out on their journey.

A scream was heard from downstairs of the four bedrooms, it was Kairi, screaming as she passed out on the floor of the living room. Saruno immediately ran down the wooden steps of his house, finding a large man in a crimson and black cloak, holding his unconscious sister in his left arm, facing the other way than him. The man was about seven feet tall, a normal sized muscular man, a sword on his back, about half of his normal size. As the man turned around, he noticed Saruno behind him, turning to face him as he let up a small chuckle, a demented chuckle.

Saruno knew he had to save his sister from the man, so he drew his blade from the side of his robe, charging forth to the man; in a single second, the man slamming his right palm upon the blade, sending Saruno back to the wall behind him, shattering it slightly. He knew he was powerful, very powerful, so he had to use one of the clan’s forbidden techniques, the Dark Oblivion technique, used in interrogation to make the target fear what they see and hear, almost like oblivion itself.
A large spark of pain ripped through him as a crimson scar began to rise up towards his right eyes, covering it over in a dark eerie light. He was still laying on the ground, partly unconscious as the scar began to burn with great pain on his eye, making him scream in pain, in a new, darker voice, covering his eyes with his palms. The man looked over to Saruno, beginning to wonder what he was doing; beginning to take the blade out of its sheath on his back, the silver of the blade was burning with a cerulean energy, aiming the tip of the blade towards Saruno.

It was too late to figure an attack from afar when Saruno was activating the Clan’s secret technique, which was turning the right or left eye into a weapon of the mind, turning a deep Grey. When Saruno stood up from the floor, his arms limp at this side, he looked to the man before him, his right eye just making even demons themselves cry in pain. The glare of Saruno just pierced through the man, the iris of the eye swirling around with lines to the iris, as I the eye was a weapon itself. The man began to feel limp with his arms and legs, the room around him just seemed to melt away he stepped back, dropping Kairi and the sword in his palm, stepping back once more, towards the flame he had created when he broke in, the man was in the deep state of the dark oblivion technique, making him scream in fear as demons roamed around him, strapping his arms and legs in chains worst than hell. Only this was in his mind, everything was normal, just Saruno turning the man’s fears against him and turning hell to him through his mind, making him see, feel, hear, and even smell the fears, making it seem all too real.

Saruno took advantage of this moment, calling his siblings, who were already watching the scene, running out the door on an instant, going through their secret passage from their house to outside of the ring, which they made when they were younger. Kuroyami held Kairi in his arms, jumping from tree to tree, trying to outrun the flames of war behind them, leaving small footprints in the bark of the wood. Not too soon from their home, a large warrior stepped up in front of the, stopping them as they stepped on a branch on a tree near the edge of a stream, looking at them with the warrior’s crimson eyes. Saruno stepped up, still in pain from the technique he used earlier, he was going to risk himself for the safety of his family, and he told them to keep going while he held up the warrior. Kuroyami and the other fled the scene, the warrior looking at Saruno with a dark glare, telling him it was foolish for a boy to fight a warrior; which wasn’t all too foolish for Saruno, he was ready, even if it cost him his life.

The warrior moved up in his attack stance, moving towards Saruno with a dark glow of energy surrounding him. Saruno quickly moved his palm to the air, a blinding white light, beginning to tear through the trees, he was performing a dark move, which was only used when in extreme danger and only used by an older part of the royal family. Blasts of lightning surrounded the area, blasting through the ground, heading itself form the sky, energy was bursting from the heavens, smashing through trees, the leaves and grass around were burned, it was an ultimate attack, for the ultimate destruction. The lightning pierced through the guards armor, blood began to splatter onto the bark of the tree he was standing on, burning the blood as it passed by, this was the worst of fate, a small spark of the lightning began to charge, beginning to surge forwards, then sideways. Saruno didn’t expect the attack to go this far. Soon after, a large explosion ripped through the trees, burning through the grass, causing a large pillar of energy flowing up through the heavens, breaking through some clouds overhead, sending Saruno through hundreds of trees, heading in the direction of the running siblings.

A swift breeze begins to take place, Kuroyami and his siblings begin to walk through an open area in the dead center of the forest, after escaping a large blast of white energy behind them. It was madness. Fighting a person who was much stronger than he was, high above his normal level. This wasn't the end of it, nor was the beginning, this was the beginning of the end.

Aftermath
Moments later, Kuroyami began to enter a large, green plain the middle of the great forest, tired a bit from the sprint they had to do, away from the blast of energy racing towards them only moments ago, but vanished as soon as they found someone in that plain, it was Saruno. He gave the last of his strength, putting him into an unconscious state of mind, for defeating one of the strongest opponents he had faced in months to come. He had a small smile on his expression as he slept, his energy slowly building inside of him, he had defeated a strong opponent, one who could release ones’ self from the ‘Oblivion Darkness’ technique, which was to restrain someone into a deep, terrifying kind of trance, putting one’s fears onto that person. They had escaped the rein of terror, and the destruction of themselves, but had to run, from their own family.

This was the end of the rain of the Kazura clans’ greatness, and the downfall of the greatest clans in the world. Blood was splattered on the walls of the houses, or what was left of them. The great leader of the clan, slashed his way through hundreds of the attackers, not a single injury, blood on his blade, he was faced with one of the highest ranking members in the Varino clan, Azunara, the great master of oblivion. Toshiro was the great leader of the clan, master of chaos art, and the great master of the blades of chaos. Yuui was his blade of chaos*, the second most powerful blade in the nine blade arsenal.
The great battle commenced, the blade of Azunara was great in power and in speed, and it slashed through Toshiro’s armor with ease, making blood spatter on the ground below them. A cheating instinct kicked Toshiro into one of his clan’s houses, smashing through the brick walls of the great household. It was the end of the greatest Kazura, but also, the end of the great oblivion. Toshiro was not going to give up without a fight, not one bit.

A blast of power ripped through the ground around the household, knowing no one was in the house at the time, raising the sword in front of him as it aimed towards the man before him. The power in Toshiro was great, and also knew he would die either way, but he chose to die for his clan, and nothing else.

Once more, he pounded his blade against the ground to his opponent, shading a powerful, bright light through the air, sending the waves of power to every corner of the area. The secrets of the Kazura clan was great, he needed to make sure, no one took onto the Kazura’s secret, even though he had to leave the responsibility of reviving the clan in the hands of his five children. He smiled at the thought, letting his children take the torch of leadership. The wave of power rippled towards Azunara, sending the entire scene into an explosion so fierce, it made everything around him in an eighth mile diameter shatter into the air, creating a much larger scale of the dark technique.

As the blast recedes, he lays on the ground, his opponent lying dead before him, himself only partly unconscious. His wife, Sasina runs up to him, putting him in her arms as her tears flowed down her cheeks, telling him she would be nothing without him to comfort her, he was the only one for her, no matter what anyone says. Toshiro lightly grasped her left palm, holding it up to his cheek, saying he loved her, no matter what, and death couldn’t tear the love of them apart, no matter what happened. His grasp lightened as he let down a small cough, this was the end of Toshiro Kazura, the great leader of the Kazura clan.

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Post by Saruno Kazura Fri Dec 12, 2008 8:48 pm

Ten Years Later First person POV.

A dark wind passes through an open window in a large building, made entirely of a solid stone, granite. Tough rock I’ll say; A lab resigns’ in the building, a giant glass tube in the center of the top floor, a man in the center of the massively shaped tube, wire and suctions cups placed no his chest and arms, he lays unconscious, floating in the water surrounding him. He has a small oxygen mask around his nose and mouth, keeping him alive and well in the tube. Saruno Kazura, that is I, and I am the man in that tube. Even though I am half unconscious, a can hear some words that they are saying.
“Lower down the temperature of that water! Keep his power limited!” one of them shouts to the other.
“Stop it! I’m doing that now!” the other one shouts, and then reading the scale of power, it reads normal.
A swift wind enters through the open window of the lab once more, triggering a small mass of mice running silently across the floor. It was dull; they didn’t really see it, since they were so involved in arguing themselves to death. It was slightly annoying listening to them, hearing their damned conversations, every last word, I hated being the one stuck in the tube, and it was annoying. I couldn’t do anything, I was a lab rat. They had found a survivor of the Kazura clan and wanted to test my power to see if they can restore it. Yet I don’t really think so. It’s not that easy reviving such an ancient form the Kazura clan’s hard work just by copying it, it’s not that easy being me or my brothers and sisters.
I begin to close my eyes, drifting off in a deep sleep, which is the only thing I can really do when I’m in there. My charts read normal as I slept. A dream. That’s what I was having until I met a memory which triggered something in my emotions, something bad. A surge in my power showed up on the charts: maxing it out on the red. I didn’t know what that meant on the chart, but in my dream, I saw a mirror, seeing myself in that tube, hearing the men just shouting, “His power levels are off the charts the glass can’t handle the pressure, it’s going to break!”
I woke from unconsciousness, this time completely; my arms were just burning with power, as if they were on fire. My nails just grew to a length where I could tear something out of someone’s chest. I was nothing but a monster. Energy raced across my arms, my legs, and my torso, everywhere. The glass soon shattered my feet land on the moist floor below them. I had broken out of the containment, or so I thought.
Dozens of darts soared from the walls of the room, piercing my skin with an instant of it touching my raw flesh. I felt a bit dizzy with the feeling of a sleeping powder entering my bloodstream, making me fall headfirst onto the floor before him, on a couple pieces of broken glass. I had fallen once more.
Moments pass, then hours, my body just feels limp as I sleep with the poison deep inside my bloodstream. It was pure torture, being a lab rat for a couple of bastards. I hated being a person who could do nothing, even when I could smash through a glass tube like nothing even was there. This was beyond annoying. This was pure torment.
About the next day, darkness out on the night, the full moon shining through the window of the room, I was wondering what time it was, and then looking to the side of the tube, the water around me making a bit of noise, but not too loud. It was midnight, twelve o’ clock. I was so tired, even when I was sleeping the entire day, the whole day, only to be woken up by a dream and gone berserk. Scary, boring, annoying; emotions that I have right now, being in a giant glass tube, doing nothing but floating on the water; An air mask on my mouth and nose, ear plugs in my ears to keep from the water from entering my ears. They sure did want their subject to be comfortable; the water was nice and warm, like a hot spring, steaming delight. It was purely heavenly, but also, like I said, annoying on so many levels. Even though I was being used like this, I actually had time to think to myself, and about my past. I still wonder though…who was that girl at the academy? Why did the Ukiku attack my clan that fateful day?
A blur in my emotions just made me drift off into a deep sleep, my muscles calm, relaxed with the hot water surrounding me, my eyes slowly closing, the crimson shine of them dimming as my gaze blurs to nothing but darkness, black, dark emotions, just, nothing. A memory of the Academy popped up in a dream, it was about the time where I met Rin, and she was so nice to me at the academy days; she always helped me with assignments that were tough on me, kept away bullies and such, and loved me all the same when my hair or my wings just changed color. It was soothing on those thoughts, so very soothing.
A drift of bubbles swept up the tank, through my shorts and to the top of the tank of water, seeming like they were releasing me, but just changing the water. A small bubble popped on my face, awakening myself with that feeling of pain on the top of my nose. My crimson shaded eyes opened immediately, seeing the two men just staring at me, nothing happening, like an illusion.
My right eye was still its normal shade of gray, ever since those years ago. It was a permanent state of mind, the ‘Oblivion Darkness’ technique had to make either the right or left eye gray in all standards, but is permanent either way, it can’t be removed.
A strike of electricity chocked through the tank, I felt nothing, it was powerful yes, over 100,000 kilowatts of pure energy, and I felt nothing. It was like I was immune to the power of that, a powerful jolt of electricity, nothing. The tank was completely filled to the brim with water, except for me, which was inside the tank of course; I could be electrocuted at any time, no matter the situation. I don’t have the power to escape this, no power since the Berserk state kicked in, it’s like it drained him.
I sighed lightly, just feeling like falling asleep once more, my eyes only half open. It was so boring, having nothing to do but float in a tank, nothing at all. Occasional bubbled flowed through the tank when it was time to clean it, as usual. I didn’t eat, I didn’t drink anything, and I only slept when I felt like it, which was a lot of the day, and watch those people just push buttons and look at a screen, maybe eating. It was the worse.
I looked out to the closed glass window on the edge of the room, looking out at the crescent moon overhead, a few clouds covering the lower part of it. A beautiful night, for a person who is powered by the night and the moon above; the fuller the moon was; the higher extent my power was. I was still wondering if my brother, Kuroyami, had found this lab yet, seeing if he would make an escape plan to break me out. Hopefully soon, I can’t do pretty much anything with their traps and containment priorities around. It’s just too hard for me to escape by myself, much too hard.
A surge of lightning struck through the ground outside of the lab, clouds roaming over the moon’s view in just a moment. A storm had been brought to this area, but so fast? How? I asked myself so many times before the thing would be able to strike again. A roar of thunder roamed about the area once more, rattling hundreds of the beakers and test supplies around, even the giant containment chamber I was in, cracking it only slightly. A rumble of earth shook the ground once more, this time, much more violently, cracking the chamber once more, more and more until water started to leak out of it, feeling the flow just pull me towards the crack. My mask flew off like something just pulled it off, maybe something did. The glass shattered once more, this time the pieces flying everywhere, and away so I can walk around without fear of the glass stabbing into my feet.
I knew who was rescuing me, Kuroyami? No. This was my sister, Kairi. She could move clouds to her will and use it to start thunderstorm or create earthquakes to a magnitude of 4.8, which was powerful in her taste, but she never used it. She was all too shy to use it past 2.0. She could turn intangible and pass through objects with ease, not a person being able to see her. She was truly special, that why the man wanted to capture here, all too easily.
Moments pass once more; I walk outside with my left hand in my sister’s right, running down the dirt road with loud, ear-ringing alarms not too far behind us. This was the thrill of the chase, running from the people who captured me, running for my life with my sister helping me along the way. This should be good. The adrenaline rush just waved through me, making me run a bit faster than I would usually, my sister picking up pace as well. Kairi was fast when she wanted to; she was way to shy to be able to do anything on her own. ‘Who sent Kairi to help me?’ I thought within my head. At the last step of the dirt road, I looked out over the cliff before us, and then just tore off the white shirt over my chest, revealing the wings that were on my back. This was a birth trait I had over the years; hiding it from my friends, for fear they wouldn’t like me if I did have them. But they were useful all the same.
Crunching my feet against the ground, I jumped into the air, my pure white wings opening on the sight. A giant fluff of wind opened them in an instant, letting me fly into the air with much ease, my sister in my arms. She didn’t have wings at the moment, yet she would grow them to their full extent soon enough, even though she was a few years older than me. The sound of energy surging towards me caught my attention, turning my direction to the left as I narrowly dodged a blast of crimson energy, burning against a feather on the right wing, making me almost flinch out of control. I kept my distance in the air. The big adrenaline rush was the best, the feeling of power had my control, and the sprint in the air was so very awesome. Kicking my feet together, I felt myself jump through the air, bursting through the waves of speed as nothing was pulling me back, nothing at all.
Kairi was still in my arms as I land over twenty miles away from that accursed laboratory. The grueling tests, the starvation I had to go through, it was pure torture from the very start. I still wonder how I survived.

The Sword of Chaos • Yuui
After scavenging the continent for months on end, finding nothing of the existence of the Tou no Ranmyaku(Blades of Chaos), Saruno began to feel the need to give up on the search for something to help him and his family feel a bit safer. Days pass, then weeks, Saruno only finds rocks, pebbles, boulders and empty caverns, nothing. A day passes in December, a deep chilling wind drives Saruno into a large cavern, about 100 times bigger than the caverns he had previously entered to find a Tou no Ranmyaku. A dimming light emanates at the end of this cavern, making Saruno wander slightly to it. Traps are sprung on a small step of a stone, poisonous darts, spears race through the holes in the wall, only to be narrowly dodged by Saruno, steep escapes, almost nothing hitting him. Darts prick into his skin, making him slightly weaker at the notion of pain, numbing at the prick. It was torture for being struck by poisonous darts, the pain of it all. He let out screams of pain as chakra tore through everything around him, making him run, not jog, to the glowing light that seemed to glow brighter and brighter with each motion, getting closer to his target.

Saruno quickly stopped at the edge of a large, dark cavern, looking out to a sword in a large stone across a 5000m drop, 60m across from his location. The hilt of the blade surged with powerful amounts of chakra, purple chakra, and a small purple flame racing across it's borders. It was the blade of chaos, Yuui. Named 'Purple flame' because of it's special characteristic. Seeing the flames from across the cavern, he wondered at the amazement of it. Just keeping his calm, he stepped forward, slightly amused at the sight of the blade.

Smashing his left foot against the ground, he leaped across the great 60m cavern length, landing on the ground where the purple flame just barely touched him, but rages behind him, calm, but fierce. Gazing his eyes upon the great blade before him, he had finally found a blade of chaos, to protect himself and his family. He reached out to grab ahold of the hilt, but surged backwards, falling onto the ground below him. It had a protective barrier around it, keeping it from anyone's touch, unless it was the right person to touch it. Swirling his chakra around below, he stood up, keeping the chakra stable, but moved it around the barrier of the hilt, making it vanish in an instant, along with the chakra used. It shocked Saruno to watch it flicker with no motion of himself. It was simply, amazing. Grasping the hilt of the blade, he was teleported back to the entrance of the cavern, the sun shining overhead. He had the blade of chaos, in his possession.
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Post by Last Temptation Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:15 pm

Before I go over everything like actual jutsu and such there is one big thing that needs to be changed.

' Because he is Kazekage, he is required to behold the Shukaku Bijuu within his body. Thus, a large seal is placed on his upper torso, near the edge of his left shoulder. This seal is a powerful, strong-holding seal that keeps the Shukaku at bay, and can be useful in various situations. This is seal is made of up three separate trigram circles. The First circle is composed of 8 Zodiac symbols, each from a different type of each other, the second is composed of various sealing symbols, including many that was placed on the Kyuubi host not too long ago. And finally, the third seal is composed of extremely powerful, probably S ranked sealing technique symbols, words, patterns, and other types of markings.'

One, the Kazekage isn't required to have a Bijuu sealed in them and two, Shukaku is already sealed away.


Also quick question, where is the explanation to the wings?

Okay, now on to some of the jutsu

'Dark Oblivion - Shitsunen Kurai'

- Uhm, A genjutsu that can automatically be cast on the opponent? Are you serious? No, Add some kind of limitation as to how you get your opponent caught in it.

'Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage'

- Remove for obvious reasons.

'Rasengan'

- Yeah no, not even my character knows Rasengan.


'Shadow Pulse • Omega -Aneiparusu! • Omega-'

- Explain what 'Shadow-like Raiton Chakra' is.

'Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen 混乱忘却-'

- Remove or add some weaknesses.


Okay, fix these things and I'll take a second look.
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Post by Saruno Kazura Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:27 pm

John wrote:Before I go over everything like actual jutsu and such there is one big thing that needs to be changed.

' Because he is Kazekage, he is required to behold the Shukaku Bijuu within his body. Thus, a large seal is placed on his upper torso, near the edge of his left shoulder. This seal is a powerful, strong-holding seal that keeps the Shukaku at bay, and can be useful in various situations. This is seal is made of up three separate trigram circles. The First circle is composed of 8 Zodiac symbols, each from a different type of each other, the second is composed of various sealing symbols, including many that was placed on the Kyuubi host not too long ago. And finally, the third seal is composed of extremely powerful, probably S ranked sealing technique symbols, words, patterns, and other types of markings.'

One, the Kazekage isn't required to have a Bijuu sealed in them and two, Shukaku is already sealed away.

Sigh, i just like the Shukaku so much, oh well, taking that out now. ~


Also quick question, where is the explanation to the wings?

It's in the first paragraph of my history, in the childhood arc...

Okay, now on to some of the jutsu

'Dark Oblivion - Shitsunen Kurai'

- Uhm, A genjutsu that can automatically be cast on the opponent? Are you serious? No, Add some kind of limitation as to how you get your opponent caught in it.

Finite.. ~

'Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage'

- Remove for obvious reasons.

Finite of course...

'Rasengan'

- Yeah no, not even my character knows Rasengan.

Removed....Yawn....

'Shadow Pulse • Omega -Aneiparusu! • Omega-'

- Explain what 'Shadow-like Raiton Chakra' is.

Added...

'Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen 混乱忘却-'

- Remove or add some weaknesses.

Finished.. ~

Okay, fix these things and I'll take a second look.
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Post by Last Temptation Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:42 pm

EDIT: Oh well sense no one seems to want to freakin' do this, I guess I'll just approve it now.


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