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Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by yohru Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:20 pm
Hi there i was Bjorn Pitschon the leaf smith from the first site but things have changed and i Too.
Name:
Yohru Obarame AKA "the cannibal of the hidden leaf"
Age:
22
Gender:
Male
Village:
Ex-Hidden leaf
Rank:
Neo akatsuki Medic
Looks:
Yohru is a well toned good and kind looking guy. He has bright green eyes and long/medium black hair and has a almost noble and gentle expression on his face that hides the madness behind it. The only thing that reveals something else are his extreme sharp teeth that he already had from when he was still a baby. Another remarkable features is the ANBU tattoo on his left arm but that's always covered by his clothes. He mostly is dressed in comfortable black pants and a black shirt whit a white long coat over it. The long coat is reinforced whit metal but still very light. The long coat has several pouches that contain several items (mostly cigarettes, summoning scroll's, medical tools, pain killers and antidotes) and also a pouch strapped around his right leg that contain several ninja tools. He wears his scarred headband still around his neck and he is quite often seen smoking. One last special characteristic is that when he gets truly mad or angry the white of his eyes turns red giving a even more fierce look. Why this happens is unknown but it doesn't has a additional effect and because he is almost always balanced and calm this rarely happens. Ever since he joined the neo akatsuki he wears their typical cloak's instead of his long coat but he reinforced his cloak too for extra defence.Also his body has now changed a bit because of the typical effects of the Earth grudge fear. His chest arms and legs are now covered by black stitches and the black treads fill his complete body now always growing new ones.
Personality:
Yohru has a complex personality that has grown darker and darker over the years. To the outside he looks always polite and kind and treats everybody whit respect even his greatest enemy's but actually it is the complete opposite. He only thinks of himself and even tough he has a advanced medical training he enjoys to see people suffer and die before or by his hand. He is highly intelligent and always keeps his real motives for him, he can suddenly help or turn on somebody without any real reason. He won't hesitate to dispose him of anybody who gets in his way, and as a cannibal he does that gladly. Also he is addicted to any kind of strong drinks. People can easily tempted him in having a conversation whit them by offering him sometimes as he seldom declines that.
Special Characteristics: The Earth Grudge fear
Special effects: This is a kinjutsu that originally came out of the hidden waterfall village but was stolen from it by 1 of its members. Yohru found the scroll whit this technique on his travel and used it. This technique turns the user's body into a rag-doll like body, held together by hundreds of thick black threads. Yohru is able to manipulate these threads for many purposes. He can detach his limbs and manipulate them for long range attacks, as well as sew up any injuries that he suffers. He can also use these threads to sew up damaged bodies of others. The threads are very sharp and can easily tear trough a human body. They can be cut apart but over time his body will generate new threads. Since he only recently obtained this he needs to develop the more advanced ability's still.
Elements:
Primary : Wind
Secondary : Lightning
Skills Specialties:
Primary : Medical technique's
Secundary : Ninjutsu
Medical technique's:
Name: Dark medic gun
Rank: S
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
A skill yohru developed when studying his medical ability's. If somebody is able to heal the they are equally able to damage as much. This skill consists of Yohru charging medical chakra in his fist and places his wrists against each other. Then for this technique to work he needs to close to the enemy and slam his fists in there chest or stomach. Just before it hit the user reverse the chakra's working and blasts it into the opponents body. When it hits it will cause extreme pain from the internal organs as it slowly starts to work in on them. The person who is hit will be in extreme pain for a few minutes and starts to cough up blood. After a few minutes the chakra is dispersed and the effect stops. This can result to some internal bleeding when the user is able to hit the chest instead of the stomach.
Name: Secret Healing Wound Destruction
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
Secret Healing Wound Destruction allows the user to concentrate their chakra to a prepared area on their body and begin the cell recreation process the very moment the targeted area becomes damaged. This will save the user from getting deadly wounded but because of the huge chakra drain it can only be used once. After that the user will be weakened and very low on chakra
Name: Chakra scalpel
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle. This technique remains until it is dispelled. A additional way to release the technique is to place the users hands on the chest of the target and then releasing the energy stored in his hands in one shot blasting them away. This is called Chakra scalpel : Strong beam. Using this technique is Yohru's preferred fighting style.
Name: Mystical Hand Technique
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.
Name: Healing Resuscitation Regeneration
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is an advanced medical Ninjutsu technique. The technique allows the medical ninja to use the hair of the one injured as a medium to reconstruct damaged body tissue. The extent of the damage will control how difficult and long the procedure is. The injured person will be placed in the center of a square marked with rites for the procedure. The healer will need 4 assistance, 1 in each corner of the square to supply chakra. The healer will use precise chakra control to turn it into medical chakra and heal the body.
Name: Important Body Points Disturbance
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none/lightning
Description:
By converting his chakra into electricity, Yohru is able to flip the opponent's nervous system signals to any part of the body. For example, if someone tried to move their right arm, a different part of the body would move in the way they wanted their right arm to move. However this technique can be overcome if a person manages to relearn how to use their limbs.
Name: Medical battle barrier
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
The problem for medical nin's is that while on the field they have a lot of trouble to keep themselves and others out of harm. That's why this technique was developed. After setting up 4 scalpels around the area the user can generate a strong square barrier around the patient and him. This barrier can only be broken after applying enough strength. Some A rank techniques or 1 s rank should do the trick.
Name: Dead Soul Technique
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
Using this jutsu, a person can temporarily reanimate a corpse, creating the illusion of a living person. This is achieved by causing the heart to beat once more, allowing the user to control the corpse. The reanimated corpse can serve as either a short-time ally or an effective decoy. Yohru uses corpses of people he killed and has medical adjusted their appearance so that they perfectly resemble him at first sight. (One major difference is that they don't have black threads in their body)
Name: Poison extraction
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
By infusing his chakra in some liquid he can inject it into his patient to find any poison in their body and remove it. For strong poisons the patient still needs to take a additional antidote. Yohru can make a more specific antidote out of the poison when he gets it out of the patient.
Name: Poison Mist
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
Because of the Bactria's in his body because of his cannibalism, the smoke in his lungs from his smoking and his medical knowledge yohru is able to create a purple toxic gas in his body. If he exhales it a large purple fume will come out that's very intoxicating and very flammable. It ignites very easily. He can change the composition of this poison every time he uses it to make it harder for people to find a cure.
Name: Pulse Acupuncture
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
This is a advanced technique that requires a lot of accuracy. It is known to Advanced medical nin's and Hunter nins. This technique involves the user throwing a senbon at a certain spot at the neck that stops ones pulse and kills you temporarily, but by simply removing the senbon, the pulse returns.
Name: Reanimation shock.
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: Lightning
Description:
A reanimation technique. When a patients heart stopped beating the user can charge his hands up whit electricity and then whit a precise accuracy hit a specific spot on the patients chest. This sends the gathered electricity directly to the heart in a attempt to make it beat again.
Name: Thermal body control
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
By injecting his chakra in the patients bloodstream the user can slow down or speed up the blood flow to control the temperature of the patient. This technique is very useful to treat burn wounds or under cooling. This will generate a normal body temperature for a small while.
Name: Bone regrowth
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
By using their own medical chakra the user can channel it into broken bones of their patients and kick up the healing rate of those bones. By maintaining this chakra the user can heal broken bones in 10 minutes but the healed arms will still be very fragile for a few days.
Name: Blood transfusion
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a very delicate skill used by medical ninja's. After forming hand seals they can tap blood from themselves or others whit a matching blood group over to a patient who has already lost a lot of blood. This is a basic first aid skill but requires extreme concentration to do it well.
Name: Diagnosis pulse
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
The user injects a small chakra pulse into the patients body. After traveling trough the body it will come back and give the user more info about the state of the patients body. The more skilled the users are the more information they will get out of it.
Name: Strong Arm Technique
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a technique utilised by medical nin's and it requiring precise chakra control, the user focuses chakra into the fist and discharges it at the moment of impact. The resulting force is enough to turn stone to rubble, create huge craters in the ground, and shatter human bones with ease.
Name: Rebreathing technique
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: wind
Description:
By using his wind chakra the user can gather up oxygen and rapidly move it in a patent's body when he stopped breathing. A basic first aid skill that is none the less of vital importance sometimes. This is more effective then doing it manual since the oxygen travels faster into the body.
Name: Dark operation
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
A assassination technique used by Experienced medical ninja's. After knocking their opponent out the can preform a operation on them that will surely kill them. They can then make it seem as if the victim just dropped death , the real cause will only be found if they preform a autopsy on them.
Name: Advanced basic medical skills
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
These versions of basic medical skills are improved over the years by Yohru so that he could do them whit much higher skill and speed. these skills include : Bone Setting (the user resets broken bones to prevent further damage or he could dislocate a enemy's bones), Rapid bandaging (the user only requires a few seconds to bandage a patient perfectly),syringes (the user can instantly locate correct vein and inject it, either to heal a ally or inject a enemy whit something harmful.), stitching (the Yohru can stitch somebody up correctly in a few seconds), scalpel (the use of a normal scalpel in emergency operations or battle), amputation (the skill to remove a limb from a patient to secure there life and then maybe later reattach it) and the herbal knowledge (to rapidly gather antidote and medical ingredients).
Name:
Yohru Obarame AKA "the cannibal of the hidden leaf"
Age:
22
Gender:
Male
Village:
Ex-Hidden leaf
Rank:
Neo akatsuki Medic
Looks:
Yohru is a well toned good and kind looking guy. He has bright green eyes and long/medium black hair and has a almost noble and gentle expression on his face that hides the madness behind it. The only thing that reveals something else are his extreme sharp teeth that he already had from when he was still a baby. Another remarkable features is the ANBU tattoo on his left arm but that's always covered by his clothes. He mostly is dressed in comfortable black pants and a black shirt whit a white long coat over it. The long coat is reinforced whit metal but still very light. The long coat has several pouches that contain several items (mostly cigarettes, summoning scroll's, medical tools, pain killers and antidotes) and also a pouch strapped around his right leg that contain several ninja tools. He wears his scarred headband still around his neck and he is quite often seen smoking. One last special characteristic is that when he gets truly mad or angry the white of his eyes turns red giving a even more fierce look. Why this happens is unknown but it doesn't has a additional effect and because he is almost always balanced and calm this rarely happens. Ever since he joined the neo akatsuki he wears their typical cloak's instead of his long coat but he reinforced his cloak too for extra defence.Also his body has now changed a bit because of the typical effects of the Earth grudge fear. His chest arms and legs are now covered by black stitches and the black treads fill his complete body now always growing new ones.
Personality:
Yohru has a complex personality that has grown darker and darker over the years. To the outside he looks always polite and kind and treats everybody whit respect even his greatest enemy's but actually it is the complete opposite. He only thinks of himself and even tough he has a advanced medical training he enjoys to see people suffer and die before or by his hand. He is highly intelligent and always keeps his real motives for him, he can suddenly help or turn on somebody without any real reason. He won't hesitate to dispose him of anybody who gets in his way, and as a cannibal he does that gladly. Also he is addicted to any kind of strong drinks. People can easily tempted him in having a conversation whit them by offering him sometimes as he seldom declines that.
Special Characteristics: The Earth Grudge fear
Special effects: This is a kinjutsu that originally came out of the hidden waterfall village but was stolen from it by 1 of its members. Yohru found the scroll whit this technique on his travel and used it. This technique turns the user's body into a rag-doll like body, held together by hundreds of thick black threads. Yohru is able to manipulate these threads for many purposes. He can detach his limbs and manipulate them for long range attacks, as well as sew up any injuries that he suffers. He can also use these threads to sew up damaged bodies of others. The threads are very sharp and can easily tear trough a human body. They can be cut apart but over time his body will generate new threads. Since he only recently obtained this he needs to develop the more advanced ability's still.
Elements:
Primary : Wind
Secondary : Lightning
Skills Specialties:
Primary : Medical technique's
Secundary : Ninjutsu
Medical technique's:
Name: Dark medic gun
Rank: S
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
A skill yohru developed when studying his medical ability's. If somebody is able to heal the they are equally able to damage as much. This skill consists of Yohru charging medical chakra in his fist and places his wrists against each other. Then for this technique to work he needs to close to the enemy and slam his fists in there chest or stomach. Just before it hit the user reverse the chakra's working and blasts it into the opponents body. When it hits it will cause extreme pain from the internal organs as it slowly starts to work in on them. The person who is hit will be in extreme pain for a few minutes and starts to cough up blood. After a few minutes the chakra is dispersed and the effect stops. This can result to some internal bleeding when the user is able to hit the chest instead of the stomach.
Name: Secret Healing Wound Destruction
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
Secret Healing Wound Destruction allows the user to concentrate their chakra to a prepared area on their body and begin the cell recreation process the very moment the targeted area becomes damaged. This will save the user from getting deadly wounded but because of the huge chakra drain it can only be used once. After that the user will be weakened and very low on chakra
Name: Chakra scalpel
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle. This technique remains until it is dispelled. A additional way to release the technique is to place the users hands on the chest of the target and then releasing the energy stored in his hands in one shot blasting them away. This is called Chakra scalpel : Strong beam. Using this technique is Yohru's preferred fighting style.
Name: Mystical Hand Technique
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.
Name: Healing Resuscitation Regeneration
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is an advanced medical Ninjutsu technique. The technique allows the medical ninja to use the hair of the one injured as a medium to reconstruct damaged body tissue. The extent of the damage will control how difficult and long the procedure is. The injured person will be placed in the center of a square marked with rites for the procedure. The healer will need 4 assistance, 1 in each corner of the square to supply chakra. The healer will use precise chakra control to turn it into medical chakra and heal the body.
Name: Important Body Points Disturbance
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none/lightning
Description:
By converting his chakra into electricity, Yohru is able to flip the opponent's nervous system signals to any part of the body. For example, if someone tried to move their right arm, a different part of the body would move in the way they wanted their right arm to move. However this technique can be overcome if a person manages to relearn how to use their limbs.
Name: Medical battle barrier
Rank: A
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
The problem for medical nin's is that while on the field they have a lot of trouble to keep themselves and others out of harm. That's why this technique was developed. After setting up 4 scalpels around the area the user can generate a strong square barrier around the patient and him. This barrier can only be broken after applying enough strength. Some A rank techniques or 1 s rank should do the trick.
Name: Dead Soul Technique
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
Using this jutsu, a person can temporarily reanimate a corpse, creating the illusion of a living person. This is achieved by causing the heart to beat once more, allowing the user to control the corpse. The reanimated corpse can serve as either a short-time ally or an effective decoy. Yohru uses corpses of people he killed and has medical adjusted their appearance so that they perfectly resemble him at first sight. (One major difference is that they don't have black threads in their body)
Name: Poison extraction
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
By infusing his chakra in some liquid he can inject it into his patient to find any poison in their body and remove it. For strong poisons the patient still needs to take a additional antidote. Yohru can make a more specific antidote out of the poison when he gets it out of the patient.
Name: Poison Mist
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
Because of the Bactria's in his body because of his cannibalism, the smoke in his lungs from his smoking and his medical knowledge yohru is able to create a purple toxic gas in his body. If he exhales it a large purple fume will come out that's very intoxicating and very flammable. It ignites very easily. He can change the composition of this poison every time he uses it to make it harder for people to find a cure.
Name: Pulse Acupuncture
Rank: B
Type : Medical
Element: None
Description:
This is a advanced technique that requires a lot of accuracy. It is known to Advanced medical nin's and Hunter nins. This technique involves the user throwing a senbon at a certain spot at the neck that stops ones pulse and kills you temporarily, but by simply removing the senbon, the pulse returns.
Name: Reanimation shock.
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: Lightning
Description:
A reanimation technique. When a patients heart stopped beating the user can charge his hands up whit electricity and then whit a precise accuracy hit a specific spot on the patients chest. This sends the gathered electricity directly to the heart in a attempt to make it beat again.
Name: Thermal body control
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
By injecting his chakra in the patients bloodstream the user can slow down or speed up the blood flow to control the temperature of the patient. This technique is very useful to treat burn wounds or under cooling. This will generate a normal body temperature for a small while.
Name: Bone regrowth
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
By using their own medical chakra the user can channel it into broken bones of their patients and kick up the healing rate of those bones. By maintaining this chakra the user can heal broken bones in 10 minutes but the healed arms will still be very fragile for a few days.
Name: Blood transfusion
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a very delicate skill used by medical ninja's. After forming hand seals they can tap blood from themselves or others whit a matching blood group over to a patient who has already lost a lot of blood. This is a basic first aid skill but requires extreme concentration to do it well.
Name: Diagnosis pulse
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
The user injects a small chakra pulse into the patients body. After traveling trough the body it will come back and give the user more info about the state of the patients body. The more skilled the users are the more information they will get out of it.
Name: Strong Arm Technique
Rank: C
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
This is a technique utilised by medical nin's and it requiring precise chakra control, the user focuses chakra into the fist and discharges it at the moment of impact. The resulting force is enough to turn stone to rubble, create huge craters in the ground, and shatter human bones with ease.
Name: Rebreathing technique
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: wind
Description:
By using his wind chakra the user can gather up oxygen and rapidly move it in a patent's body when he stopped breathing. A basic first aid skill that is none the less of vital importance sometimes. This is more effective then doing it manual since the oxygen travels faster into the body.
Name: Dark operation
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
A assassination technique used by Experienced medical ninja's. After knocking their opponent out the can preform a operation on them that will surely kill them. They can then make it seem as if the victim just dropped death , the real cause will only be found if they preform a autopsy on them.
Name: Advanced basic medical skills
Rank: D
Type : Medical
Element: none
Description:
These versions of basic medical skills are improved over the years by Yohru so that he could do them whit much higher skill and speed. these skills include : Bone Setting (the user resets broken bones to prevent further damage or he could dislocate a enemy's bones), Rapid bandaging (the user only requires a few seconds to bandage a patient perfectly),syringes (the user can instantly locate correct vein and inject it, either to heal a ally or inject a enemy whit something harmful.), stitching (the Yohru can stitch somebody up correctly in a few seconds), scalpel (the use of a normal scalpel in emergency operations or battle), amputation (the skill to remove a limb from a patient to secure there life and then maybe later reattach it) and the herbal knowledge (to rapidly gather antidote and medical ingredients).
Last edited by yohru on Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:38 pm; edited 3 times in total
yohru- Akatsuki Member
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Age : 34
Location : Belgium
Country : Konohagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Element #2 : Lightning
Registration date : 2008-10-18
Re: Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by yohru Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:26 pm
Jutsu's:
Name: Weapon growth technique
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
A special technique that is used in combination whit a trowing weapon. After throwing the weapon the user does some hand seals and then the weapons increases in Size up too 10 times its original size.
Name: Shadow clone technique
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
A technique that Creates solid clones. These clones can also use low level techniques of the user but they will poof when they get damaged.
Name: Cannibal tongue
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
The user channels chakra into his mouth. This allows him to stretch out and freely control his tongue. Yohru uses this to catch the enemy and draw him close to him. This attack is mostly followed by Yohru biting the enemy as part of his cannibalistic hunger to feast on them when they are close.
Name: Endless hunger
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This is a technique that is developed by yohru in combination whit his cannibalistic nature. After using this technique the users jaws can stretch open further and become extremely strong. In combination whit his extreme sharp teeth he can crush even stones between his teeth.
Name: Finger gun
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. He created this skill as a mean to defend himself. This skill channels chakra in the finger of the user hardening it up incredibly. The user is able to slam his finger into the enemy to cause a puncture wound that seems like a gun shot wound.
Name: Iron mass
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. This skill is used to defend the medic against taijutsu attacks. By channeling chakra to their muscles they will instant harden up to almost a steel like hardness. Taijutsu attack up to c rank ones will be ineffective against the user. The user can't move until the technique is released and they can be still cut by sharp weapons or hurt by ninjutsu attacks. B rank or higher taijutsu skills can also break trough this skills defence.
Name: Dash
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. By increasing the overall chakra flow trough the body equally somebody is capable of moving much faster for a short period of time. This will slowly drain away at the users chakra.
Name: Paper drawing
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that Yohru developed while studying medical technique's. This skill can be used whit a single one handed hand sign. This will relax the muscles of the user so that he can better dodge in desperate situations.
Name: Painless sleep
Rank: D
Type : Genjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This is a technique that the medical nin's use on their patients. By putting them whit a genjutsu in a hypnotic state they can reduce the pain they suffer from their wounds.
Name: Academy student basics
Rank: E
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This involves all the basic ninjutsu techniques that a ninja has to know before they can graduate from the academy.
Wind release :
Name: Wind step
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:
This is a handy skill he developed in his time as a ANBU. The user channels a bit of his wind type chakra in his feet. This allows the user to kick himself of of wind currents to keep himself in the air. As long as the user keeps jumping he can keep himself in the air by launching himself around. This can be used to dodge attacks in the air or set up for aerial attacks.
Name: Scalpel charge : Wind
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:
This is a technique invented by Yohru. After using the chakra scalpel skill he can charge the energy up whit wind chakra turning it green instead of blue. This greatly enhances the raw cutting power of the scalpel making it able to cut trough wood and stone and even block blade attacks whiteout harming the hands. If you want to release the chakra scalpel chakra in one blast now it is called the chakra scalpel : cross slash. After crossing your arms the user slashes out in the shape of a cross and releases the chakra. The green chakra will travel out in a x shape and slash trough anything it touches on its way before disappearing.
Name: Storm leg
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A skill that was developed by yohru himself when he was still a genin. This is one of his favorite techniques. The user starts by charging his leg up whit wind elemental chakra. After that is done the user kicks and releases a bit of his chakra. This will cut the air and create sharp wind. This will take the form of glowing green cuts that will travel out of his leg. These can cut trough wood and damage stones but they can be deflected by metal. One chakra charge allows him to release 3 cuts. Then he has to charge his leg up again.
Name: Storm leg - Dragon tooth
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is a variation on Yohru's original storm leg technique. First for this the opponent must be in the air above the user. The user charges his legs up whit wind chakra and lets himself fall backwards while kicking up whit both legs. Then he releases all the chakra at once creating two large green glowing cuts of sharp wind that travel upwards. The enemy will have more trouble dodging them since the cuts are larger then the normal storm leg and because they are airborne.
Name: Rotating shuriken
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A handy skill that yohru created when practicing whit ninja tools. He first takes 10 shuriken and charges them up whit wind chakra. He then throws them and by using the chakra he can control them and keep them spinning for 2 posts. If the shuriken would get hit by fire the chakra controlling them is instantly dispersed and they fall down.
Name: Storm leg - War
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A stronger variation on yohru's signature move : The storm leg. The user will first launch himself high up in the air and charges his legs up whit wind type chakra. The user starts kicking sending multiple green glowing cuts of sharp wind to rain down on the enemy below. They are less damaging then the original storm leg attack but they cover a large area making it pretty hard to dodge them all.
Name: Storm leg - Lotus
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A variation on Yohru's signature move : The storm leg. This also started by charging both his legs up whit wind chakra. The user kicks whit both legs sending a few green glowing cuts of sharp wind towards the opponents. When they hit they will only cause small cuts but over the next two posts after they hit the wounds will slowly get larger creating eventually large cuts.
Name: Storm leg - Shuriken
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is a much stronger variation of Yohru's original storm leg attack. The user first charges a lot of wind chakra in his leg. Then he jumps up and kicks while spinning around. This will create glowing sharp wind that takes the shape of a shuriken spinning around violentley. Because of the rotation speed this attack is able to cleave even trough steel a good bit.
Name: Eye of the storm
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
After forming a huge string of hand seals a huge typhoon is created but Yohru and his opponent are still inside the eye of it. This drastically shortens the area where they can fight and the first one who gets knocked into the typhoon will receive terrible cuts all over their body. Yohru can use his other skills to keep himself out of it.
Name: Storm leg - Great cutting circle
Rank: S
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is the strongest variation of yohru's storm leg technique. He charges his whole body full of wind chakra and starts to spin around. The spin generates a tornado whit him in the eye of it. the tornado itself is already dangerous since it has sharp wind that cuts anybody who gets to close but when he ends the technique he channels all wind energy into one feet, jumps up and kicks in a circle while still spinning around. This generates a glowing green circle of sharp wind that is enhanced whit chakra. The ring will expand outwards then and rapidly cuts trough anything that it meets on its path. After traveling quite a while the chakra will disperse.
Lightning release :
Name: Electromagnetic murder
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
A pretty basic ninjutsu that releases some blue electricity out of the users wrist after making a hand seal. This can turn out devastating when used in combination whit water.
Name: Scalpel charge : Lightning
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This is a technique invented by Yohru. After using the chakra scalpel skill he can charge the energy up whit lightning chakra turning it yellow instead of blue. Now it doesn't only cut trough things but it can also give the opponent a nasty shock at the same time that can temporarily paralyze the attacked body part. If you want to release the chakra now it is called the chakra scalpel : shocking field. This is a defensive skill where the user holds his hands in front of him. When he releases the energy it turns in a electric barrier that can block one incoming attack. If the enemy hits the barrier he gets a massive shock. The barrier is dispersed after it is touched by something.
Name: Lightning Orb
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user holds his hands in front him and gathers chakra to form a ball of electricity. Then he can throw that ball as far as physically possible. Who gets hit by it gets a nasty electrical shock.
Name: Lightning disks
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This techniques gathers electricity too the hands of the users and creates two flat spinning disks of electricity that can be thrown. The user con control their path a bit and they can both cut and electrocute a enemy if they hit.
Name: Lightning Binding
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This technique lets the user create a three sided wall of electricity to bind their opponent. The user must have three conductors to stick in the ground to create the points. Furthermore, once the enemy is inside, if they come into contact with the wall they will be electrocuted. The only way the jutsu can be broken, is if an outside party were to strike it or by using a strong wind attack against it from the inside.
Name: White Lightning
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This is a technique that is developed by Yohru and uses his lightning element. The user does a few hand seals and pumps a lot of lightning based chakra in 1 index finger. The user makes sure that he gets close to the enemy and puts 1 finger on the enemy. Then he releases al the Lightning in one small and compact beam of lighting that generates a burn wound trough the enemy's body the size of his finger.
Name: Lightning storm
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This technique releases a lot of electrical chakra into the air. Over time it will gather more electricity and it will create a lightning storm above the battle field. The user can tap into the natural generated lightning above him to power up his normal lightning attacks.
Name: Thunder fang
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user forms a string of hand seals and releases a lot of electricity. This will take the form of a wolf and will rush over the ground towards the enemy. When it gets close it will jump and bite the enemy, as soon as this happens the enemy will receive a nasty shock.
Name: Flying thunder
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user forms a string of hand seals and releases a lot of electricity. This will take the form of a hawk and fly over towards the opponent. When it gets close enough it dives down and turns itself in a lightning bolt. This causes a explosion when it strikes the ground.
Name: Thunder soul destruction
Rank: S
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning/wind
Description:
This is his strongest lightning technique and can onley be done in a lightning storm or after using the lightning storm technique. The user has to preform a long string of hand seals. After finishing them he raises his hands above his head and channels almost all his lightning and wind chakra that he has left in the sky. This will gather a large portion of the thunder clouds in a huge sphere of highly charged clouds and extreme wind pressured. This takes about a bit too charges and after that it will slowly drop down from the sky and when it hits something it will created a devastating electrical blast that can wipe a entire area out. The user has to flee himself after using this as after preforming this he wont be able to survive it.
Name: Weapon growth technique
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
A special technique that is used in combination whit a trowing weapon. After throwing the weapon the user does some hand seals and then the weapons increases in Size up too 10 times its original size.
Name: Shadow clone technique
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
A technique that Creates solid clones. These clones can also use low level techniques of the user but they will poof when they get damaged.
Name: Cannibal tongue
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
The user channels chakra into his mouth. This allows him to stretch out and freely control his tongue. Yohru uses this to catch the enemy and draw him close to him. This attack is mostly followed by Yohru biting the enemy as part of his cannibalistic hunger to feast on them when they are close.
Name: Endless hunger
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This is a technique that is developed by yohru in combination whit his cannibalistic nature. After using this technique the users jaws can stretch open further and become extremely strong. In combination whit his extreme sharp teeth he can crush even stones between his teeth.
Name: Finger gun
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. He created this skill as a mean to defend himself. This skill channels chakra in the finger of the user hardening it up incredibly. The user is able to slam his finger into the enemy to cause a puncture wound that seems like a gun shot wound.
Name: Iron mass
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. This skill is used to defend the medic against taijutsu attacks. By channeling chakra to their muscles they will instant harden up to almost a steel like hardness. Taijutsu attack up to c rank ones will be ineffective against the user. The user can't move until the technique is released and they can be still cut by sharp weapons or hurt by ninjutsu attacks. B rank or higher taijutsu skills can also break trough this skills defence.
Name: Dash
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that yohru developed while still on the anbu squad and requires a precise chakra control. By increasing the overall chakra flow trough the body equally somebody is capable of moving much faster for a short period of time. This will slowly drain away at the users chakra.
Name: Paper drawing
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu/taijutsu
Element: None
Description:
A skill that Yohru developed while studying medical technique's. This skill can be used whit a single one handed hand sign. This will relax the muscles of the user so that he can better dodge in desperate situations.
Name: Painless sleep
Rank: D
Type : Genjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This is a technique that the medical nin's use on their patients. By putting them whit a genjutsu in a hypnotic state they can reduce the pain they suffer from their wounds.
Name: Academy student basics
Rank: E
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description:
This involves all the basic ninjutsu techniques that a ninja has to know before they can graduate from the academy.
Wind release :
Name: Wind step
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:
This is a handy skill he developed in his time as a ANBU. The user channels a bit of his wind type chakra in his feet. This allows the user to kick himself of of wind currents to keep himself in the air. As long as the user keeps jumping he can keep himself in the air by launching himself around. This can be used to dodge attacks in the air or set up for aerial attacks.
Name: Scalpel charge : Wind
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description:
This is a technique invented by Yohru. After using the chakra scalpel skill he can charge the energy up whit wind chakra turning it green instead of blue. This greatly enhances the raw cutting power of the scalpel making it able to cut trough wood and stone and even block blade attacks whiteout harming the hands. If you want to release the chakra scalpel chakra in one blast now it is called the chakra scalpel : cross slash. After crossing your arms the user slashes out in the shape of a cross and releases the chakra. The green chakra will travel out in a x shape and slash trough anything it touches on its way before disappearing.
Name: Storm leg
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A skill that was developed by yohru himself when he was still a genin. This is one of his favorite techniques. The user starts by charging his leg up whit wind elemental chakra. After that is done the user kicks and releases a bit of his chakra. This will cut the air and create sharp wind. This will take the form of glowing green cuts that will travel out of his leg. These can cut trough wood and damage stones but they can be deflected by metal. One chakra charge allows him to release 3 cuts. Then he has to charge his leg up again.
Name: Storm leg - Dragon tooth
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is a variation on Yohru's original storm leg technique. First for this the opponent must be in the air above the user. The user charges his legs up whit wind chakra and lets himself fall backwards while kicking up whit both legs. Then he releases all the chakra at once creating two large green glowing cuts of sharp wind that travel upwards. The enemy will have more trouble dodging them since the cuts are larger then the normal storm leg and because they are airborne.
Name: Rotating shuriken
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A handy skill that yohru created when practicing whit ninja tools. He first takes 10 shuriken and charges them up whit wind chakra. He then throws them and by using the chakra he can control them and keep them spinning for 2 posts. If the shuriken would get hit by fire the chakra controlling them is instantly dispersed and they fall down.
Name: Storm leg - War
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A stronger variation on yohru's signature move : The storm leg. The user will first launch himself high up in the air and charges his legs up whit wind type chakra. The user starts kicking sending multiple green glowing cuts of sharp wind to rain down on the enemy below. They are less damaging then the original storm leg attack but they cover a large area making it pretty hard to dodge them all.
Name: Storm leg - Lotus
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
A variation on Yohru's signature move : The storm leg. This also started by charging both his legs up whit wind chakra. The user kicks whit both legs sending a few green glowing cuts of sharp wind towards the opponents. When they hit they will only cause small cuts but over the next two posts after they hit the wounds will slowly get larger creating eventually large cuts.
Name: Storm leg - Shuriken
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is a much stronger variation of Yohru's original storm leg attack. The user first charges a lot of wind chakra in his leg. Then he jumps up and kicks while spinning around. This will create glowing sharp wind that takes the shape of a shuriken spinning around violentley. Because of the rotation speed this attack is able to cleave even trough steel a good bit.
Name: Eye of the storm
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
After forming a huge string of hand seals a huge typhoon is created but Yohru and his opponent are still inside the eye of it. This drastically shortens the area where they can fight and the first one who gets knocked into the typhoon will receive terrible cuts all over their body. Yohru can use his other skills to keep himself out of it.
Name: Storm leg - Great cutting circle
Rank: S
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:
This is the strongest variation of yohru's storm leg technique. He charges his whole body full of wind chakra and starts to spin around. The spin generates a tornado whit him in the eye of it. the tornado itself is already dangerous since it has sharp wind that cuts anybody who gets to close but when he ends the technique he channels all wind energy into one feet, jumps up and kicks in a circle while still spinning around. This generates a glowing green circle of sharp wind that is enhanced whit chakra. The ring will expand outwards then and rapidly cuts trough anything that it meets on its path. After traveling quite a while the chakra will disperse.
Lightning release :
Name: Electromagnetic murder
Rank: D
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
A pretty basic ninjutsu that releases some blue electricity out of the users wrist after making a hand seal. This can turn out devastating when used in combination whit water.
Name: Scalpel charge : Lightning
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This is a technique invented by Yohru. After using the chakra scalpel skill he can charge the energy up whit lightning chakra turning it yellow instead of blue. Now it doesn't only cut trough things but it can also give the opponent a nasty shock at the same time that can temporarily paralyze the attacked body part. If you want to release the chakra now it is called the chakra scalpel : shocking field. This is a defensive skill where the user holds his hands in front of him. When he releases the energy it turns in a electric barrier that can block one incoming attack. If the enemy hits the barrier he gets a massive shock. The barrier is dispersed after it is touched by something.
Name: Lightning Orb
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user holds his hands in front him and gathers chakra to form a ball of electricity. Then he can throw that ball as far as physically possible. Who gets hit by it gets a nasty electrical shock.
Name: Lightning disks
Rank: C
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This techniques gathers electricity too the hands of the users and creates two flat spinning disks of electricity that can be thrown. The user con control their path a bit and they can both cut and electrocute a enemy if they hit.
Name: Lightning Binding
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This technique lets the user create a three sided wall of electricity to bind their opponent. The user must have three conductors to stick in the ground to create the points. Furthermore, once the enemy is inside, if they come into contact with the wall they will be electrocuted. The only way the jutsu can be broken, is if an outside party were to strike it or by using a strong wind attack against it from the inside.
Name: White Lightning
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This is a technique that is developed by Yohru and uses his lightning element. The user does a few hand seals and pumps a lot of lightning based chakra in 1 index finger. The user makes sure that he gets close to the enemy and puts 1 finger on the enemy. Then he releases al the Lightning in one small and compact beam of lighting that generates a burn wound trough the enemy's body the size of his finger.
Name: Lightning storm
Rank: B
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
This technique releases a lot of electrical chakra into the air. Over time it will gather more electricity and it will create a lightning storm above the battle field. The user can tap into the natural generated lightning above him to power up his normal lightning attacks.
Name: Thunder fang
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user forms a string of hand seals and releases a lot of electricity. This will take the form of a wolf and will rush over the ground towards the enemy. When it gets close it will jump and bite the enemy, as soon as this happens the enemy will receive a nasty shock.
Name: Flying thunder
Rank: A
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:
The user forms a string of hand seals and releases a lot of electricity. This will take the form of a hawk and fly over towards the opponent. When it gets close enough it dives down and turns itself in a lightning bolt. This causes a explosion when it strikes the ground.
Name: Thunder soul destruction
Rank: S
Type : Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning/wind
Description:
This is his strongest lightning technique and can onley be done in a lightning storm or after using the lightning storm technique. The user has to preform a long string of hand seals. After finishing them he raises his hands above his head and channels almost all his lightning and wind chakra that he has left in the sky. This will gather a large portion of the thunder clouds in a huge sphere of highly charged clouds and extreme wind pressured. This takes about a bit too charges and after that it will slowly drop down from the sky and when it hits something it will created a devastating electrical blast that can wipe a entire area out. The user has to flee himself after using this as after preforming this he wont be able to survive it.
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yohru- Akatsuki Member
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Age : 34
Location : Belgium
Country : Konohagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Element #2 : Lightning
Registration date : 2008-10-18
Re: Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by yohru Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:20 am
History:
Do people get evil, or are they born evil ? When people look back at Yohru Obarame they would surely say the last. The Obarame can was a diplomatic family who is in charges whit the contact's whit the hidden rock village. Yohru was the second son of the head of the family and immediately they saw that he was different then any other child. He was born whit a full set of sharp white teeth and instead of crying the first thing he did was biting of a finger of one of the caretakers. They where utterly shocked but Yohru's parents calmed them down. They proudly said that this was a sign that he would become a great shinobi one day where. Later you would see that this would be true ... But not in a good way.
Yohru grew out to be a handsome kid whit a lot of natural charm and intellect but already at a young age the mind of the charming boy grew darker and darker. His father who liked Yohru more then his older and younger brother always spoiled him wishing that he could later his succeedor and not his older brother. He was often given animals as pets to amuse himself whit but they soon ended up dead in his hands and buried in a secret spot while he told his dad that they had run away. His first kill was at the age of 4 where he choked his little brother when he was crying too much. When his parents found there dead son they blamed the caretakers of not doing there jobs well and Yohru remained unnoticed whit the taste of his first kill.
At the time that he was send too the ninja academy he already had shown potential of a incredible intellect and charm that soon conquered the hearths of his fellow students. He started to learn at a high speed resulting in him become top of his class. In these times he was thinking a lot about life and death and grew more and more interested in it. In that time several students where found death outside the village walls and they thought that the cause was a wild beast but no. Using his charms he easily managed to lure somebody with him to the forest and killed them. This is also where he discovered his cannibalistic nature as during a struggle he had bitten the other student and he liked it. When they found the corpses of the dead students it looked like a large beast had killed and eaten large parts of them.
He graduated from the academy at a the impressive age of 6 and decided to continue his study's to become a medical nin. The next few years he trowed himself at studying the medical arts whenever he was not busy with his genin team. There he was mostly busy refining his ability's whit his wind element. This kept going until chuunin exams. In the early parts of the chuunin exams he didn't draw much attention as he stayed behind as the healer of his team and their back up. But later in the exams he made quite a name of himself by showing of his use of the chakra scalpel skill at such a young age. In the final round he won by cutting one of his opponents limbs of whit one of his wind technique's. Then to everybody's surprise he stopped the match himself and helped the healers to reattach his opponents limb. His actions gained him huge amounts of respect and soon he got the rank of chuunin.
Now life became much calmer for him. Mostly he was just busy helping his father whit his charms in there negotiations whit the Igawe clan, the most important diplomatic family of the hidden rock. During his meeting he met Lya , the heir of the Igawe clan. As soon as she saw him she fell in love whit him. He only accepted their relationship out of interest as he had no real feeling for her. Between all his work he already became a master in medical techniques and now too he had mastered his wind and lightning element to a extreme high level. That's the reason why he was asked to become a ANBU at the same time when he became jounin. He immidietly accepted this and came in the same squad as his older brother was. Actualey Yohru used his missions as a excuse to get more human meat for him to consume as everybody as his other squad members arrived at the scene, the only thing that remained was a bloody mess so it was impossible to say if there where some pieces missing.
It couldn't stay out and after a while his own brother started to suspicion him of the mysterious disappearance of several Leaf ninja's and targets during missions. Until one day he confronted Yohru in the forest whit some ANBU members. There he happily confessed everything he had done to them who could only listen in shock. When they then moved in to capture and arrest him he killed them all without remorse, even his brother. Whit this done he wounded himself and layed down between his killed team mates. When they found him he told them that they where attacked by a enemy ANBU squad and that they wiped the team out completely and that he did his best to safe his teammates and his brothers but failed. Because they didn't knew what his brother knew they praised him for his bravery and then he quited his post at the ANBU to take the place of his brother as the future head of his family.
After mourning for his elder son his father had huge plans. He would set up a marriage between Yohru and Lya to connect the two family's together and bring the villages even closer together again. Around this time Yohru started to get sick of the village and all of the tricks he had to use to explain his behaviour. After thinking it over a bit he decided to too go along whit the wedding plans, he had a idea that would allow him to be remembered by the other villagers for a very long time. Together whit his father he went to a family part at the rock village to meet his bride. In the middle of the party he snuck out and managed to kidnap Lya's little sister and drugged her whit his painkillers he had whit her and hide her. Afterwards he helped looking for her to guide the search in a complete wrong direction and eventually he smuggled the young girl to the hidden leaf when he , his father and Lya went back since they had agreed to continue with the wedding there. Everything went according to plan.
Lya was still still upset about what happened to her sister and Yohru offered to fix her a dinner to relax a bit. It was a beautiful evening as he made everything extremely romantic and she completely calmed down in his presence. He smiled as he realised that it was time to put his plan into action. He walked over to her smiling "I hope that you enjoyed the dinner then dear." She looked up at him smiling and telling that it was delicious. Suddenly the charming smile became darker as he picked up a dish and put it on the table. "Good then because i only took the finest pieces of meat for you ... From your little sister" He raised the lid of the dish revealing the head of her little sister to her. The scream of the girl was heard over large parts of the village and attracted the attention of ANBU members who came to rush in to check out what was going on. When the elders of the two family's arrived they found the ANBU members dissected on the table and Lya traumatised in a corner hugging the severed head of her sister. Yohru laughed as he left the village whitout a problem. This was 4 years ago when he was still 18 years old. Now he wanders around the world taking any asignement he likes to earn his living and taking a random person now and then to statisfy his hunger for human flesh. Latley he has joined the Neo Akatsuki. What his motives are are still unknown.
Rp Sample:
It is a rainy day as a lonely traveler makes his way trough the lands. Yohru didn't minded it because he was one of the people who could really enjoy it on his travels. His white long coat was drenched and so was his long white hair hanging down drenched on his shoulders. He had put his headband in his backpack since he didn't wanted to draw any attention to himself for the moment since he came close to the hidden rain village. He didn't had to fear anything in his opinion but a man like him has to earn his living too so lets keep it quite for now. He politely nods at the guards as he walks in and makes his way to the nearest in to warm up a bit. While he enjoys himself whit a glass of wine he thinks of the assignment that he took a few days ago.
A few days ago he was resting in a tavern in the hidden mist village as a rather old man whit two bodyguards approached him. "Are you the one they call Yohru from the hidden leaf." He smiled looking looking up at the three. "That depends old man, Who is asking?" The old man sat down treating him a drink as he did his story. "I am a very important business man around these parts but lately i have a problem since more and more rivalary comes from the hidden rain out of the person of a guy named Gato yoshi." Yohru finished his drink and listened more interested to what the man had to say. "So what do you want from me then?" The man handed him over a scroll and smiled while Yohru took a look inside. "Since your expertise maybe you could help me get rid of him? As you see in that agreement you have there, we are willing to pay you well for your trouble." Yohru smiled and nodded "For that money i think we have ourselves a deal sir."
Getting inside the hidden rain was even easier the he taught. Under a false name he took a job as a healer for a few days and his natural charms did the rest. After resting up a bit and taking a drink he headed for his temporary work. On his way he passed a mansion that was heavily guarded. That was where his target resided. Yohru took his time to earn his money by backing up the main healer for a few days he prepared himself to do the assignment. After gathering all his equipment he needed he was of. From a blind side he detected he was able to get into the place unseen by the guards as he opened the window of the bedroom only to notice that there was a puppet laying there.
"Well well Yohru Obarame, so we finally meet." He turns around noticing that several hidden rain ANBU members had come into the room and smiled. "Finally, i was wondering when you gentlemen would arrive. This whole set up is for my bounty i presume. "Amused he looked at them knowing that this was just a ambitious plan of a young captain to regain reputation in his village. They didn't answered as they just attacked, yohru neatly avoided the first attacks while forming some hand seals to activate his chakra scalpels. After they appeared he spinned around hitting several muscles in the legs of two ANBU members disabling them to stand on it again. He smirked as the captain attempted to do a water style attack using the rain outside. He jumped and used his storm leg technique to cut trough it and land outside in the rain.
"Oh well i might as well amuse myself a bit... i haven't had so much fun in ages lately." As he looked around him he noticed that the guards had gathered to check it out too. He didn't want to waste his time on people like them. Thanks to the water around him he could easily use his electric murder skill to to attack everybody around him. Electrified but still alive the guards fell down around him as he heard in the distance that the ANBU where gathering whit other squads to take him down. He couldn't help it but to laugh at there attempts to stop him. Over the years that he had been traveling around he had seen almost anything and still it kept amusing him. "Oh well, i better not keep them waiting for me... That wouldn't be polite at all." Whit a grin that revealed his sharp pointy teeth in the moonlight he dashed towards the ANBU squads.
Soon he had activated his chakra scalpels as he they charged in to attack him. Gracefully he dived and dodged the attacks and the blades of the Anbu members while cutting trough the lungs of two of them. After a while he launched himself in the air raining down several wind based attacks on the people below him. When the smoke around the area subdued the body's of wounded ANBU members where scattered over the place all whit heavy cuts or even whole limbs dismembered. In the puddles of rain mixed whit blood only one of them still stood up. The young ANBU captain managed to evade all the attacks by retreating rapidly to a safe distance and now he watched shocked over what remained of his teammates. Angry he gritted his teeth and clenched his fists as he looked at the grinning Yohru. "Damm you ... you monster."
"Monster ? Now don't start pointing fingers at me, it was you guys who first attacked so i had the right to defend myself." The polite tone on which he said it and the sly smile on his face made the young captain go berserk. In a few seconds he released a torrent of water style attacks after Yohru in a blind rage. Yohru stored chakra in his feet and slammed them into the ground. The shattering stones rose up blocking the path of the water attacks so that he Yohru had time enough to dodge out of the way while the water disappeared in the cracks. Eventually he started to get tired and lost track of him for a moment. Before he realised it Yohru appeared out of one of the cracks that he had made before behind the captain. He smiled as he opened his mouth and bite down.
The young guy screamed at the top of his lungs when he felt the sharp teeth bite down on his shoulder and then rip a large piece out of it whit a tremendous force. Yohro grinned as the warm blood flowed over his chin and slowly chewed on the meat before swallowing it and licking his lips of. "Mmm tasty" He never could get enough of this taste. The Anbu trembled on his feet and fell down because of the blood loss from his wound. He grunted as he looked up at Yohru who was looking down on him. "Go ahead ... Kill me then you bastard." Yohru smiles and crouches down to look in the mans eyes trough his mask. "No i won't kill you ... you are a good shinobi but you lack something. That's why im going to let you live whit the shame of having lost so many comrades to me, but survived yourself. Maybe next time we meet you will have what it takes."
Whit a precise blow to the neck he knocked the young captain out and stopped the bleeding of his shoulder before he got up. Whit a bit rain he washed the blood of his face and hair before he he wiped it out of his face and turned his back too them heading out. He easily get outside since everybody was dead or laid unconscious inside. On his way to the inn he dumped his long coat in a trashcan and went to get another drink before he gathered his stuff and left. At that time the village was already in a uproar over what happened in the mansion. Wearing a cloak now he could easily slip trough the panicking mass and before they closed the village gates he slipped out. The rain stopped as he got a bit away from the village and he took his hood of while he looked at the fresh blue sky. "Now that was refreshing ... now i got only one thing left too do."
A few days later the old guy in the hidden mist was on his way back to his home. He had been a spy and a double agent for the hidden rain for whole his life. When he came back he saw that the door of his house where already open. His guards where already there and pushed the door open walking in. Inside was Yohru drinking some of the man's best sake that he kept in his home. "Ah im glad that you could make it back home in time." The guards stepped forwards but soon fell down screaming whit each a scalpel in there eyes. Yohru grinned as he stood up and grabbed the old man and dragged him inside. "You see I really had fun on that assignment even tough you guys set me up. That's why i found it only natural that i repay the favor..." He grinned revealing his sharp teeth. " By inviting you three for dinner. "The screams of the three man soon died down as Yohru ended his day whit another delicious meal.
Do people get evil, or are they born evil ? When people look back at Yohru Obarame they would surely say the last. The Obarame can was a diplomatic family who is in charges whit the contact's whit the hidden rock village. Yohru was the second son of the head of the family and immediately they saw that he was different then any other child. He was born whit a full set of sharp white teeth and instead of crying the first thing he did was biting of a finger of one of the caretakers. They where utterly shocked but Yohru's parents calmed them down. They proudly said that this was a sign that he would become a great shinobi one day where. Later you would see that this would be true ... But not in a good way.
Yohru grew out to be a handsome kid whit a lot of natural charm and intellect but already at a young age the mind of the charming boy grew darker and darker. His father who liked Yohru more then his older and younger brother always spoiled him wishing that he could later his succeedor and not his older brother. He was often given animals as pets to amuse himself whit but they soon ended up dead in his hands and buried in a secret spot while he told his dad that they had run away. His first kill was at the age of 4 where he choked his little brother when he was crying too much. When his parents found there dead son they blamed the caretakers of not doing there jobs well and Yohru remained unnoticed whit the taste of his first kill.
At the time that he was send too the ninja academy he already had shown potential of a incredible intellect and charm that soon conquered the hearths of his fellow students. He started to learn at a high speed resulting in him become top of his class. In these times he was thinking a lot about life and death and grew more and more interested in it. In that time several students where found death outside the village walls and they thought that the cause was a wild beast but no. Using his charms he easily managed to lure somebody with him to the forest and killed them. This is also where he discovered his cannibalistic nature as during a struggle he had bitten the other student and he liked it. When they found the corpses of the dead students it looked like a large beast had killed and eaten large parts of them.
He graduated from the academy at a the impressive age of 6 and decided to continue his study's to become a medical nin. The next few years he trowed himself at studying the medical arts whenever he was not busy with his genin team. There he was mostly busy refining his ability's whit his wind element. This kept going until chuunin exams. In the early parts of the chuunin exams he didn't draw much attention as he stayed behind as the healer of his team and their back up. But later in the exams he made quite a name of himself by showing of his use of the chakra scalpel skill at such a young age. In the final round he won by cutting one of his opponents limbs of whit one of his wind technique's. Then to everybody's surprise he stopped the match himself and helped the healers to reattach his opponents limb. His actions gained him huge amounts of respect and soon he got the rank of chuunin.
Now life became much calmer for him. Mostly he was just busy helping his father whit his charms in there negotiations whit the Igawe clan, the most important diplomatic family of the hidden rock. During his meeting he met Lya , the heir of the Igawe clan. As soon as she saw him she fell in love whit him. He only accepted their relationship out of interest as he had no real feeling for her. Between all his work he already became a master in medical techniques and now too he had mastered his wind and lightning element to a extreme high level. That's the reason why he was asked to become a ANBU at the same time when he became jounin. He immidietly accepted this and came in the same squad as his older brother was. Actualey Yohru used his missions as a excuse to get more human meat for him to consume as everybody as his other squad members arrived at the scene, the only thing that remained was a bloody mess so it was impossible to say if there where some pieces missing.
It couldn't stay out and after a while his own brother started to suspicion him of the mysterious disappearance of several Leaf ninja's and targets during missions. Until one day he confronted Yohru in the forest whit some ANBU members. There he happily confessed everything he had done to them who could only listen in shock. When they then moved in to capture and arrest him he killed them all without remorse, even his brother. Whit this done he wounded himself and layed down between his killed team mates. When they found him he told them that they where attacked by a enemy ANBU squad and that they wiped the team out completely and that he did his best to safe his teammates and his brothers but failed. Because they didn't knew what his brother knew they praised him for his bravery and then he quited his post at the ANBU to take the place of his brother as the future head of his family.
After mourning for his elder son his father had huge plans. He would set up a marriage between Yohru and Lya to connect the two family's together and bring the villages even closer together again. Around this time Yohru started to get sick of the village and all of the tricks he had to use to explain his behaviour. After thinking it over a bit he decided to too go along whit the wedding plans, he had a idea that would allow him to be remembered by the other villagers for a very long time. Together whit his father he went to a family part at the rock village to meet his bride. In the middle of the party he snuck out and managed to kidnap Lya's little sister and drugged her whit his painkillers he had whit her and hide her. Afterwards he helped looking for her to guide the search in a complete wrong direction and eventually he smuggled the young girl to the hidden leaf when he , his father and Lya went back since they had agreed to continue with the wedding there. Everything went according to plan.
Lya was still still upset about what happened to her sister and Yohru offered to fix her a dinner to relax a bit. It was a beautiful evening as he made everything extremely romantic and she completely calmed down in his presence. He smiled as he realised that it was time to put his plan into action. He walked over to her smiling "I hope that you enjoyed the dinner then dear." She looked up at him smiling and telling that it was delicious. Suddenly the charming smile became darker as he picked up a dish and put it on the table. "Good then because i only took the finest pieces of meat for you ... From your little sister" He raised the lid of the dish revealing the head of her little sister to her. The scream of the girl was heard over large parts of the village and attracted the attention of ANBU members who came to rush in to check out what was going on. When the elders of the two family's arrived they found the ANBU members dissected on the table and Lya traumatised in a corner hugging the severed head of her sister. Yohru laughed as he left the village whitout a problem. This was 4 years ago when he was still 18 years old. Now he wanders around the world taking any asignement he likes to earn his living and taking a random person now and then to statisfy his hunger for human flesh. Latley he has joined the Neo Akatsuki. What his motives are are still unknown.
Rp Sample:
It is a rainy day as a lonely traveler makes his way trough the lands. Yohru didn't minded it because he was one of the people who could really enjoy it on his travels. His white long coat was drenched and so was his long white hair hanging down drenched on his shoulders. He had put his headband in his backpack since he didn't wanted to draw any attention to himself for the moment since he came close to the hidden rain village. He didn't had to fear anything in his opinion but a man like him has to earn his living too so lets keep it quite for now. He politely nods at the guards as he walks in and makes his way to the nearest in to warm up a bit. While he enjoys himself whit a glass of wine he thinks of the assignment that he took a few days ago.
A few days ago he was resting in a tavern in the hidden mist village as a rather old man whit two bodyguards approached him. "Are you the one they call Yohru from the hidden leaf." He smiled looking looking up at the three. "That depends old man, Who is asking?" The old man sat down treating him a drink as he did his story. "I am a very important business man around these parts but lately i have a problem since more and more rivalary comes from the hidden rain out of the person of a guy named Gato yoshi." Yohru finished his drink and listened more interested to what the man had to say. "So what do you want from me then?" The man handed him over a scroll and smiled while Yohru took a look inside. "Since your expertise maybe you could help me get rid of him? As you see in that agreement you have there, we are willing to pay you well for your trouble." Yohru smiled and nodded "For that money i think we have ourselves a deal sir."
Getting inside the hidden rain was even easier the he taught. Under a false name he took a job as a healer for a few days and his natural charms did the rest. After resting up a bit and taking a drink he headed for his temporary work. On his way he passed a mansion that was heavily guarded. That was where his target resided. Yohru took his time to earn his money by backing up the main healer for a few days he prepared himself to do the assignment. After gathering all his equipment he needed he was of. From a blind side he detected he was able to get into the place unseen by the guards as he opened the window of the bedroom only to notice that there was a puppet laying there.
"Well well Yohru Obarame, so we finally meet." He turns around noticing that several hidden rain ANBU members had come into the room and smiled. "Finally, i was wondering when you gentlemen would arrive. This whole set up is for my bounty i presume. "Amused he looked at them knowing that this was just a ambitious plan of a young captain to regain reputation in his village. They didn't answered as they just attacked, yohru neatly avoided the first attacks while forming some hand seals to activate his chakra scalpels. After they appeared he spinned around hitting several muscles in the legs of two ANBU members disabling them to stand on it again. He smirked as the captain attempted to do a water style attack using the rain outside. He jumped and used his storm leg technique to cut trough it and land outside in the rain.
"Oh well i might as well amuse myself a bit... i haven't had so much fun in ages lately." As he looked around him he noticed that the guards had gathered to check it out too. He didn't want to waste his time on people like them. Thanks to the water around him he could easily use his electric murder skill to to attack everybody around him. Electrified but still alive the guards fell down around him as he heard in the distance that the ANBU where gathering whit other squads to take him down. He couldn't help it but to laugh at there attempts to stop him. Over the years that he had been traveling around he had seen almost anything and still it kept amusing him. "Oh well, i better not keep them waiting for me... That wouldn't be polite at all." Whit a grin that revealed his sharp pointy teeth in the moonlight he dashed towards the ANBU squads.
Soon he had activated his chakra scalpels as he they charged in to attack him. Gracefully he dived and dodged the attacks and the blades of the Anbu members while cutting trough the lungs of two of them. After a while he launched himself in the air raining down several wind based attacks on the people below him. When the smoke around the area subdued the body's of wounded ANBU members where scattered over the place all whit heavy cuts or even whole limbs dismembered. In the puddles of rain mixed whit blood only one of them still stood up. The young ANBU captain managed to evade all the attacks by retreating rapidly to a safe distance and now he watched shocked over what remained of his teammates. Angry he gritted his teeth and clenched his fists as he looked at the grinning Yohru. "Damm you ... you monster."
"Monster ? Now don't start pointing fingers at me, it was you guys who first attacked so i had the right to defend myself." The polite tone on which he said it and the sly smile on his face made the young captain go berserk. In a few seconds he released a torrent of water style attacks after Yohru in a blind rage. Yohru stored chakra in his feet and slammed them into the ground. The shattering stones rose up blocking the path of the water attacks so that he Yohru had time enough to dodge out of the way while the water disappeared in the cracks. Eventually he started to get tired and lost track of him for a moment. Before he realised it Yohru appeared out of one of the cracks that he had made before behind the captain. He smiled as he opened his mouth and bite down.
The young guy screamed at the top of his lungs when he felt the sharp teeth bite down on his shoulder and then rip a large piece out of it whit a tremendous force. Yohro grinned as the warm blood flowed over his chin and slowly chewed on the meat before swallowing it and licking his lips of. "Mmm tasty" He never could get enough of this taste. The Anbu trembled on his feet and fell down because of the blood loss from his wound. He grunted as he looked up at Yohru who was looking down on him. "Go ahead ... Kill me then you bastard." Yohru smiles and crouches down to look in the mans eyes trough his mask. "No i won't kill you ... you are a good shinobi but you lack something. That's why im going to let you live whit the shame of having lost so many comrades to me, but survived yourself. Maybe next time we meet you will have what it takes."
Whit a precise blow to the neck he knocked the young captain out and stopped the bleeding of his shoulder before he got up. Whit a bit rain he washed the blood of his face and hair before he he wiped it out of his face and turned his back too them heading out. He easily get outside since everybody was dead or laid unconscious inside. On his way to the inn he dumped his long coat in a trashcan and went to get another drink before he gathered his stuff and left. At that time the village was already in a uproar over what happened in the mansion. Wearing a cloak now he could easily slip trough the panicking mass and before they closed the village gates he slipped out. The rain stopped as he got a bit away from the village and he took his hood of while he looked at the fresh blue sky. "Now that was refreshing ... now i got only one thing left too do."
A few days later the old guy in the hidden mist was on his way back to his home. He had been a spy and a double agent for the hidden rain for whole his life. When he came back he saw that the door of his house where already open. His guards where already there and pushed the door open walking in. Inside was Yohru drinking some of the man's best sake that he kept in his home. "Ah im glad that you could make it back home in time." The guards stepped forwards but soon fell down screaming whit each a scalpel in there eyes. Yohru grinned as he stood up and grabbed the old man and dragged him inside. "You see I really had fun on that assignment even tough you guys set me up. That's why i found it only natural that i repay the favor..." He grinned revealing his sharp teeth. " By inviting you three for dinner. "The screams of the three man soon died down as Yohru ended his day whit another delicious meal.
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Re: Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by Saruno Kazura Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:24 pm
Okay, some problems i saw:
(1) There is a limit on how many S rank techniques you can have. At your rank, i would probably say about 3. (Not Entirely sure)
(2) History and RP sample are Okay, those are approved. So is the First post of this topic.
(3) Chidori and Chidori based moves are strictly to the Uchiha clan, no exceptions.
(4) You have waaaay too many S ranked techniques, remove a couple.
(5) That is all.
(1) There is a limit on how many S rank techniques you can have. At your rank, i would probably say about 3. (Not Entirely sure)
(2) History and RP sample are Okay, those are approved. So is the First post of this topic.
(3) Chidori and Chidori based moves are strictly to the Uchiha clan, no exceptions.
(4) You have waaaay too many S ranked techniques, remove a couple.
(5) That is all.
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Re: Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by yohru Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:02 pm
thanks i now have onley 3 s rank techniques anymore. Thanks for pointing those out and i adjusted the rest too.
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Re: Yohru obarame - -[Approved]- SK
by Saruno Kazura Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:15 pm
Okay, as long as your don't be OP with Thunder soul Destruction, and try and Copy my A ranked, 'Kage Raikou', your fine. It doesn't use condensed chakra, but it's okay.
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