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Post by Sorrow Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:24 am

Basic Character Information:
Name: Sorrow
Nicknames: The Dwelling Demon, The Crying Knight, Jin Rasseru
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Clan: N/A

Looks: The Sorrow (APPROVED)LT Emo_Grim_by_sakura_studio
Sorrow is about 6'9". He weights in at 145lbs. He always wears his long black cloak that goes down to cover his feet. His hair is jet black and falls down slightly on the side of his face as some of his hair kicks up on that side. His eyes are a darkish yellow color but his pupils are thin black slits. His skin is pale due from keeping his face hidden from the sun all of the time.

Rain, Snow, Hail, Sun, no matter what the weather Sorrow always wears the same cloak with his face hidden by the hood. When his hood comes off you could see a gleam in his pitch black hair that reflects slightly off of any light. Within seconds of his hood coming off you would see all of his hair cover the majority of his face leaving a small gap in which his right eye is visable. His headband that he was given by the hidden leaf village on his arm on top of his cloak.

Personality:Sorrow has no feelings he left behind all his emotions except for the Sorrow. When he speaks with people that he would not consider his enemies he would be a friendly person that you would enjoy having a cnversation with. When with people he would rather kill than talk to he would torture them not only physically but mentally. He would speak of all the Sorrow he faced in his lifetime and even the Sorrow of a random person just to further their torture.

When he meets people he could care less of what they think of him or even that they exist. He cares not for anyone or anything that will futher hone his abilities. If he meets someone he would treat them just like everyone else but he will have a small interest in them that would not be shown. He seems friendly but he isn't as friendly as he would normally seem. He's an almost depressing person to be around, it feels tht each second your with him you feel the seconds of your life drifting away.

Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure
Land Of Birth: Land Of Fang
Rank: Jounin

Special Characteristics: N/A
Special Effects: N/A

Elements: Katon & Doton
Skills Specialties:
Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu

Jutsus
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History and RP Sample
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Rp Sample: (The Sample Is for a Rinnengan user to lazy to make another)

Joy looked back at the hidden leaf village as he jumped from tree to tree further away from it. Slowly tears flew from his eyes as he stopped in his tracks. He stood on the branch of a tree as his last tear fell to the grass below he smiled gently and continued to move away from the village. The moon light guided him into an open field, the gentle breeze blew against the tree's.

As he glided from the trees gently into the open field his eyes looked were illuminated by the moon light and the doujutsu, the Rinnengan, became visable. While he stood there in the field he saw everything that the others were seeing. Fury stood in the hidden mist village his face hidden by his hood he was prepared for a trip. Anguish was leaving the Raikage's mansion when he quickly jumped onto a rooftop to stay hidden from the view of anyone in the cloud village.

Regret was hiding in a tree somewhere, he had just finished his research on the Akatsuki. In the tree after Regret, Woe stood on a branch waiting silently for the to move. Fear was walking around the hidden stone village and knew it was time so he slid into an alley way to keep hiself hidden from sight.

When Joy saw that Sorrow was ready he quickly performed handsigns with one hand as he pulled a kunai from his pouch. Joy gently pressed his finger against the cold blade allowing his blood to be caught in his hand as he returned his kunai to his pouch. He gently pressed his hand against the moist grass of the field and whispered "Summoning Jutsu."

Suddenly Fury disappeared from his place on a rooftop in kiri. Anguish, Regret, Woe, and Fear all disappeared from where they where hidden. The all converged on Joy's position instantaniously. Sorrow stood in the field as he slowly disperssed from the area, all six of them going their seperate ways.


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Normal Jutsus:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description:A Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name:Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description:A ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name:Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description:A very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name:Kakuremino no Jutsu
Rank:E
Element: N/A
Description:A very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description:Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name:Oiroke no Jutsu - Sexy Technique
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description:Oiroke no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uzumaki Naruto. This technique is a variation of the Henge technique. Naruto changes his form into that of a nude, sexually appealing young woman. This technique is normally used to titillate and knock unconscious perverted adults or get Naruto's sensei Jiraiya to do what Naruto wants.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi & Otoko no Ko Doushi - Sexy Technique • Girl Companions & Guy Companions
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Konohamaru. After learning Kage Bunshin, Konohamaru further refined his Oiroke no Jutsu. Konohamaru will first create a Kage Bunshin, and then each will transform into a voluptuous young woman who will press their bodies together seductively. Konohamaru claims the jutsu is used to distract his target, giving it a worthwhile purpose. Sakura claimed that only perverts like Konohamaru and Naruto would fall for the jutsu. So he used another variation "Otoko no Ko Doushi" involving a naked Sai and Sasuke, which revealed Sakura's true perverted colors as well.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Jutsu Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

NamE: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

Name: Konbi Henge no Jutsu - Combination Transformation Technique
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Konbi Henge is a Ninjutsu technique that allows two ninja to transform themselves temporarily into another person or thing. While in the form, they can use the physical characteristics of the one they are impersonating.

Katon Jutsu

Jutsu Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name:Katon Faia Kasui No Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Katon
Description: An ability where the user creates a small mass of fire in its hands. It doesn't have a true form, only a wild flame. The user then throws the flame at medium distance. This will cause small burning.

Name:Katon Faia Tama No Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Katon
Description: An ability where the user uses fire and envolve it in his projectile weapons

Name:Katon Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Katon
Description:The ninja will breath out an imflamable mist, which can be used to cause explosions arround the enemy

Jutsu Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.


Doton Jutsu
Name: Doton no Jutsu - Earth Release Technique
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: Doton no Jutsu, the act of using the Earth Element, allows the ninja to change their chakra into earth. This allows the ninja to go into the earth and hide from his opponents, manipulate the earth in attacks or create earth to use against their opponents.

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.

Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: Doton
Element: B
Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Name: Iwa Yado Kuzushi - Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.


Doton Kenjutsu
Name: Earth Blade Jutsu
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 40
Element: Doton
Description: A Doton ninjutsu used by the Shuushou Tsurugi. After Performing the Snake, Monkey, Ram, Snake handseals the sword wielder must thrust the blade into the earth. Once that happens four stone swords with erupt from the ground around the target.

Name: Earth Dome Defense
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 60
Element: Doton
Description: A Doton ninjutsu used by the Shuushou Tsurugi in reaction to Sorrow's blood. After performing the Snake, Bird, Snake handseals Sorrows blood must be placed on the inscription of the sword. Once that happens the sword wielder must thrust the blade into the ground, this will cause the ground around the user to create a dome of stone to protect him from harm.

Name: Earth Disruption Jutsu
Rank: A
Chakra Cost: 160
Element: Doton
Description: A Doton ninjutsu used exclusivly by Shuushou Tsurugi. After performing the Snake, Bird, Dragon, Snake handseals the sword wielder must thrust the blade into the ground. Once that is done the blade can change the properties of the ground into any Solid Transition Metals which aren't a radioactive element of the periodic table of elements, at the users choice in a 25 meter radius.

Name: Swirling Earth Implosion Technique
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 300
Element: Doton
Description: A Doton ninjutsu used exclusivly by the Shuushou Tsurugi in reaction to Sorrows blood. After performing the Snake, Horse, Ram, Ram, Dragon, Monkey, Bird, Snake handseals Sorrows blood must be placed at both the tip, the hilt and the inscription of the Shuushou Tsurugi. Once that is done the wielder must thrust the blade into the earth, this will cause the ground around the target to twist and turn until their entire body is engulfed in the earth. Then the earth will begin to compress inself in towards the target imploding their body as Stone swords pierce through them within the ground. To signal the completion of the jutsu's use three stone swords will erupt from the ground signifying the implosion of their heart, mind, and body. If two, one, or no swords appears then it will show that at least one part of their being still exists.


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Taijutsu
Name: Dynamic • Entry (Dainamikku • Entorii)
Rank: D
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.

Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind
Rank: C
Element:Taijutsu
Description: Konoha Dai Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Like the normal Senpuu, Lee uses his quickness and agility to deliver a series powerful spinning kicks to his opponent.

Name: Konoha Gouriki Senpuu - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
Rank: B
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Konoha Gouriki Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Maito Gai. Like the normal Senpuu, Gai uses his quickness and agility to deliver a powerful roundhouse kick to his opponent.

Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
Rank: C
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. Rock Lee uses the Konoha Kage Bayou to place his opponent into a position to do his Omote Renge technique. Uchiha Sasuke would go on to copy this move to set up his opponent for his Shishi Rendan technique.

Name: Omote Renge - Front Lotus
Rank: B
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Omote Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's case, he was able to increase his speed and power. To utilize the Omote Renge, Lee first loosens the bandages around his arm. With a quick dash he is suddenly below his target and a quick upward kick sends his opponent skyward. Lee then jumps into the air to place his chest to the back of his opponent. He then wraps his arms and the bandages around his opponent to prevent escape. As the pair begin their fall back to earth, Lee begins to spin downwards at a high rate of speed, driving his opponent head first into the ground. At the last moment Lee himself releases the bandages and jumps to the clear. Though the technique injures his opponent, it also takes its toll on Lee's body as well.

Name: Kabenuke no Jutsu - Wall Pass Through Technique
Rank: C
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Ninpou: Kabenuke no Jutsu is a "ninjutsu" technique used by Rock Lee. Trying to impress his teammates, Lee developed this fake ninja art to allow him to pass through walls and enter a room. The technique is best described as simply taijutsu, Lee using his ultra movement to move from one side of the building to the other and then open the door to enter the room.

Name: Ura Renge - Reverse Lotus
Rank: S
Element: Taijutsu
Description: Ura Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. To complete the technique, Lee had to open the first five of the Celestial Gates. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's case, he was able to increase his speed and power. By opening the second gate, the Heal Gate, Lee was able to temporarily increase his stamina. With the opening of the Third Gate, the Life Gate, Lee's body turns a shade of red and he is able to perform the Ura Renge. When Lee performed the technique though, he also opened the fourth gate, the Harm Gate, and the fifth gate, the Limit Gate. Opening the gates removes the limiters placed on the body, and by opening these gates Lee was given a great increase in power in speed. The technique was forbidden though because as each subsquent gate is opened, the body faces more and more strain. When Lee opened the fifth gate, his muscles began to snap.

To utilize the Ura Renge, Lee will open the first three Celestial Gates. Then, like Omote Renge, he quickly moves beneath the target and kicks them upwards. While in the air Lee will then pummel his opponent throughout the air with high speed Taijutsu attacks to weaken them. Then at the apex of his attack he will strike his opponent in the chest towards the ground. Lee then moves in close to his opponent and attaches his bandage. Lee will then allow his opponent to get some distance, he then pulls his target back to his body and does a hard downward palm strike to their chest causing them to crash into the ground with massive damage.

Name: Hachimontonkou - Eight Celestial Gates
Rank: A
Element: Taijutsu
Description:
1. Opening (Initial) releases the brain's limit on the total strain on the muscles, giving the user five times their normal strength.
2. Rest (Heal / Energy) releases the brain's limit on the body's stamina, making a battle-worn person become miraculously ready to fight as if the fight had just started.
3. Life is located on the spinal cord, and releases the limit on the nervous system, which makes information travel at a faster rate and creates even more stamina. As a side effect, the user's skin turns red, indicating an increased blood-oxygen level.


Genjutsu
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: C
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.

Name: Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.


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History/Background Story:

Rouge Arc
Sorrow was once a young Orphan in the land of Fang. During his youth in a country nearing War, he meet a leaf ninja named Shakiiru Rasseru. Sorrow was a quiet child who admired Shakiiru's abilities and friendship. Shakiiru took a liking to this child and decided to take him back to the village.

Shakiiru promised to train the orphan so he could defend himself from any threat he faced. They trained for years while they traveled from the land of fang to the hidden leaf village. At the rate that they moved it took them 5 years to finish their training and reach the village gates. At this time Shakiiru had taught Sorrow all of the Jutsu that he could teach him for now.

When they arrived in the village Shakiiru took him in as his adopted son and taught him how to get by in the village. At this point Sorrow was 13 and his father, Shakiiru, decided that he should continue to practice his skills in konoha's ninja academy. Before he joined the academy though Sorrow pleaded with his father to sign him up under a different name. Since Shakiiru's last name was Rasseru, Sorrow asked that he should be called Jin Rasseru. Why he wanted his name to be kept a secret at the time was a mystery at that time. Well finally after all that he's been through Jin, Sorrow, finally joins Konoha's ninja academy and was ready to begin his first day of classes.

Academy Student Arc
Jin Rasseru's academy days was a short period. During his days as a student in the academy Jin stay secluded from all the other students never speaking unless he had to. He never liked anyone in the village the only person he knew he could trust was Shakiiru and he kept secrets even from him. Jin often speant his time training and making sure that he didn't hold back in anything that he did.

Jin truely had a unmistakable natural talent for being a ninja it was his spirit that made him so strong. He was always happy with everything that he did Jin enjoyed all that he did in the academy he Aced all of his exams and exceded all the requirements for passing the academy. All that was left was for the graduation exam but even with all that Shakiiru taught him during their time together he neglected the ability to actually create a clone of himself. Jin spent countless days practicing the Clone jutsu but soon time ran out on him and he was forced to take the exam while he wasn't yet able to create a clone.

Jin was 14 he stood before 25 other academy students, and 3 chuunin to take his exam. He stayed completly focused and remembered all of his training and wasn't gonna let his dreams die right there. Jin performed all the necessary handsigns perfectly and as swiftly as a bullet. After the exam Jin stood infront of the academy with tears in his eyes, his father Shakiiru came and asked him what happened. He looked up at him and said "I'm a ninja" with a tearful smile, he created not 1, not 2, not 3, but 10 perfect shadow clones all at once, his tears were not of Sorrow but of Joy. Jin was finally a ninja the next day he would meet his team for the first time.
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Genin Arc
Still under the name of Jin Rasseru he started out his first day as a ninja, his first task was to meet his team. He ventured out from home late in the night before they were supposed to meet to the place they were supposed to be meeting a few hours from then. He stood by the trees near the front of Konoha's Gates and slept there waiting for morning to come.

When it finally did Jin awoke at the break of dawn just so he could go to the top of the gate to get a good view of the village. When he reached the top he looked out across the great beauty of Konoha and swore that Jin Rasseru would do whatever he could for this village. When he dropped down from the gate he meet the 2 other genin that would form his team but he didn't really care about them enough to make any attachments to them or even so much as learn their names.

Well their Jounin Sensai arrived late, this disappointed him thinking that all of this genin work he was gonna do was gonna be a joke. When they all settled in together as a team their sensai announced that they were going to have to go through a second exam to make sure they were worthy of their headbands. This challenge required they capture a bell from their sensai and they only had till lunch to do it or they would have to go back to the academy.

Jin refused to go back to the academy, he would not let all his training go for nothing. His teammates struggled constantly to get the bells while he layed in wait hidden in the shadows. When the jounin let his guard down he quickly struck, throwing kunai at the bells and following after them. He was soon found himself infront of Jounin holding all 3 bells in his hand, he then walked over to his teammates and gave them each one.

After that they were officially a team. They weant on many missions, trained many days, ate many meals. A year after they became a team the Chuunin exams were coming, and Jin's team was to be apart of the exams. His Jounin Sensai said they were going to take part in the exams so they could become chuunin. When they got to the examination building it was time for them to take the first part of the exam. Jin vividly remember part one of the exams it was a written test, when he found this out he was slighty pissed.

When he recieved the test he knew that there ws no chance he would be able any of the questions, the only way he could pass the test by cheating. He was lucky that the person next to him had all the answers and he was a master at cheating.

He quickly wrote down the answers and awaited the tenth question, when i came time for it to be announced they said if you stay and listen to the tenth question but get it wrong you will fail. Then they wouldn't be allowed to take the chuunin exams ever again. Jin made eye contact with his teammates and they all agreed silently they weren't gonna give up now.

When over half the applicants quit the proctor began to announce the tenth question. Then he suddenly said "you all passed," Jin sighed realizing the test was a trick and started to laugh just as everyone else began to laugh. Soon after the second part of the exam began, it was a survival exercise, they sent all the genin from all the lands that passed the first part into konoha's forest of death. They were all in their teams and were given 1 of 2 scrolls, the Heaven or the Earth Scroll, the goal was to reach the tower in the center of the forest with both scrolls and open them but they must not open the scrolls before they reach the tower or they fail.

Jin's squad held a heaven scroll which Jin was trusted to carry. When they entered the forest Jin told them to go straight to the tower, they will find people with the scrolls on their way to it. A day passed while they were in the forest before they found anyone. They were set up against a team from the hidden grass village, Jin easily took care of them and took their scroll which luck had it was an Earth Scroll which they actually need. They made it to the tower without any problems, they were the 13th team to arrive.

They opened up the 2 scrolls in the tower and their jounin sensai appeared from them and told them they passed the second half of the exam. The next day they were brought to a huge stadium in konoha, there were only 24 genin left from the hidden Leaf, Sand, Earth, Star, and Grass Villages.

The final part of the chuunin exams was a tornament, anyone who showed qualities of a good chuunin here would be promoted. Jin's whole team was ready for this, they won each of their fights elegantly unfortunatly his teammates were taken out before they reached the finals. Jin reached the final round he was faced up against a Suna Shinobi, the battle was quick and beautiful, the Suna ninja fought with heart and determination but was defeated by Jin. After the exams 12 ninja became chuunin including Jin's team. They were officailly a chuunin squad from that moment on.

Chuunin Arc
When Jin's old genin squad became chuunin they were supossed to be a team on their own but they wean't their seperate ways. One of them took up guard duty at the village gates while the other became a ninja doctor. Even his Jounin sensai took up a new genin team, Jin was left alone to take care of himself. Soon after Shakiiru Rasseru his adoptive father died of a disease.

This threw Jin into a world of turmoil within his own mind, he fought between the Joy he had here in konoha and the Sorrow he felt in Fang country. The Sorrow he felt began to return, he still used the name Jin Rasseru while he stayed in the village. As a chuunin he weant out alone on solo sneaking missions, while on one of these missions in the hidden mist village. While their he happened to pick up a few jutsu including the hidden mist technique.

Soon the Jounin exams were coming and Jin felt somewhat happy that he might meet his old teammates again, but before he weant to take the exams he had one last mission it the land of water. He was to complete a solo sneaking mission once again, but this mission required him to take a book of secret jutsu from the hidden mist village. His mission weant off without a hitch except on his way back he accidently opened the scroll and read the jutsu in it. He learned many secret mist village jutsu from that book, but it took him time before he returned to the the viallge to complete his mission because of that.

When he returned to the village he found out that their was a intruder while he was gone who killed the gates guard, one of his old teammates, but he was captured by the ANBU. The ANBU cornered him when he tried to set off explosives but they backfired and killed him. When the intruders body was brought back to the medical lab for testing tere was a bomb in his body that set off killing one of the medical ninja, Jin's other partner. Jin started to lose his mind slowly he felt something that he haven't felt in years, Sorrow. Jin took the Jounin exams and passed them easily and there were no objections to what he could do. After that day he contiued to use the name Jin Rasseru and guard konoha but now as a Jounin.

Jounin Arc
Jin Rasseru was 19 years old when he became a Jounin, the only person he still knew was his old Jounin sensai who was now his partner. They were a two man battle cell, they went on many missions together it felt like the old days when he was a genin. While on a mission in the hidden sand village they were getting information on the criminal organization called the akatsuki when a tradgic turn of events occured resulting in the death of his last friend.

Jin watched helplessly while his partner was obliterated by a former sand shinobi, but he didn't go without a fight he took the sand ninja to the grave with him. Jin walked away with tears in his eyes everyone who he knew was dead. He went on a rampage killing anyone that got in his way for 5 days until he calmed down.

Jin returned to the village and weant on like nothing happened. He continued his life doing missions. During this time he aquired the nickname the crying knight, due that his eyes were full of tears as he fought to protect the lives of the village.
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Post by Last Temptation Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:37 pm

'Ura Renge - Reverse Lotus'
In this jutsu it states that you must be able to open 5 chakra gates, but on your profile you only added 3 of them. Therefore you cannot have this unless you add the next 2 gates.

Also, the three first gates aren't S ranked. The only one that is S ranked would be the last gate.
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Post by Sorrow Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:52 pm

John wrote:'Ura Renge - Reverse Lotus'
In this jutsu it states that you must be able to open 5 chakra gates, but on your profile you only added 3 of them. Therefore you cannot have this unless you add the next 2 gates.

Also, the three first gates aren't S ranked. The only one that is S ranked would be the last gate.
Alright i changed the rank of opening the first 3 gates
and for Ura Renge - Reverse Lotus' it says

...When Lee opened the fifth gate, his muscles began to snap.

To utilize the Ura Renge, Lee will open the first three Celestial Gates....

So technically i only have to open at least the first three gates
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Post by Last Temptation Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:11 pm

I must've over looked that then, sorry about that.

Anyway, The technique is actually an A rank. So please change that.
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Post by Sorrow Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:21 pm

John wrote:I must've over looked that then, sorry about that.

Anyway, The technique is actually an A rank. So please change that.
Don't worry about it and there all fixed
Is that all?
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Post by Lady Tsunade Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:30 pm

Approved.
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