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[Ave Uchiha]

Basic Character Information:
Name:Ave Uchiha
Age:27
Gender:Male
Clan:Uchiha

Looks:My Avatar. Has sleek medium length black hair. Has hazel eyes. Wears a black cloak with a red trim. Also wears a red scarf.

Personality:Calm most of the time. When he goes into training he is determined to excel. He loves the village and all of his friends and he couldn't bear to part with them. But sometimes Ave is very sad from all the critiscism about his father he received. Ave is kinda irresponsible at times, ussualy forgeting to do things, but he is very smart.


Basic Clan Information
Kekkei Gekkei:Sharingan
Description:Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Mangekyou Sharingan is a legendary doujutsu ability which has only emerged in a few clan members in its history. There is still mystery surrounding the eye and the Uchiha clan itself. Each user develops their own unique looking Mangekyou. The requirements for gaining the Mangekyou are very controversial in nature. After Uchiha Itachi murdered his best friend Shisui he gained Mangekyou. He told his younger brother Sasuke that to gain the Mangekyou, he too would have to kill his closest friend. Itachi told Sasuke that a scroll in their clan shrine revealed the true original purpose of the clan doujutsu. This scroll and Itachi himself revealed that the former leader of their clan, Uchiha Madara and his younger brother Izuna were the first to obtain Mangekyou. Madara himself did this by killing his friend, it's assumed Izuna also killed a close comrade.

Usage of the Mangekyou techniques drains quite a bit of a user’s chakra, more so than any other normal technique. Also as a result of Mangekyou usage, the bearer will slowly lose their vision. Madara lost his vision before his brother and sought to regain his power. To do so he removed Izuna's eyes and made them his own. With these new eyes, his Mangekyou took on a combined appearance of his original Mangekyou and Izuna's. These "Eternal" Mangekyou eyes returned his vision and gave him unbelievable strength. With this strength it was said Madara used Sharingan's normal ability to supress the Kyuubi and tame it.

Itachi originally told Sasuke that if he gained the Mangekyou, then there would be three people who could handle it. After the time skip in the series, Hatake Kakashi revealed he too had gained Mangekyou Sharingan. Later it was revealed that Uchiha Madara himself was still alive, and was the "third" user in Itachi's statement. What part, if any, that Kakashi and Uchiha Obito's eye plays has yet to be determined.

Itachi's three named Mangekyou techniques are Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi and Susanoo, all mythological deities. Kakashi's Mangekyou technique is named Kamui.

The Amaterasu or Goddess of the Sun technique is generated by the right Mangekyou eye. It is a Ninjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form to create a powerful black fire which can burn through most anything. As it has been said that anything within the Mangekyou's vision will burn to ash if consumed by the fire. The fire itself is said to burn for 7 days and 7 nights. The fire is also regarded as the strongest of Mangekyou's physical attacks.

The Tsukuyomi or God of the Moon technique is generated by the left Mangekyou eye. It is a Genjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form to initiate a mentally and physically harmful illusion. To utilize the illusion, the clan member will look into the eyes of his opponent and cast a Genjutsu spell on them. The spell takes place in the mind of the one affected, while the jutsu is cast the one it was cast upon is at the total mercy of the Uchiha clan member. The clan member has full control over space and time in the jutsu and can place the one affected through any hell they desire for any length desired. The technique itself only lasts for but a second in reality, but the one affected could have lasted through several days of pain. It is said only a natural born member of the Uchiha Clan can defeat it, this may mean either an Uchiha also holding the Mangekyou or one fully skilled in the three tomoe Sharingan form.

The Susanoo or God of the Sea and Storms technique is generated by both Mangekyou eyes. It is a technique which uses the Mangekyou form to create a sword wielding specter which will surround the user. This specter wields a shield for defense and a blade known as the Totsuka Sword. Anyone or anything cut by the blade will be sealed away into a Genjutsu of blissful oblivion until the end of time.

The Kamui or God's Majesty technique is used by Hatake Kakashi. With this technique, Kakashi forms a handseal to activate the Sharingan in his left eye and change it into his Mangekyou form. Kakashi then focuses on a point on the body of his target. The area around the target will then begin to warp and collapse in on itself, resulting in that area being quickly "sucked" out of existence and transported to another location.
Special Effect:Usaly Uchiha members first activte their sharingan at the age of 10-12.

1 Tomoe:All Uchiha that are academy students start out like this(Sasuke atained his sharingan shortly after he graduated.. Can track down some high speed moving objects.

Two Tomoe:Can track down high speed objects with less dificulty. Can see through some minor genjutsu. Can copy some low level taijutsu, and predict some movments.

Three Tomoe:(I have three tomoe in each eye)Can track down very high moving objects with little or no diffculty. Can see through most Genjutsu, and copy them. Can copy most ninjutsu and taijutsu. Can predict most taijutsu movments. (assuming your character is fast enough to dodge them)

Mangekyo Sharingan:You must kill your best friend, witness someone very close die, or get a transplant. Can track down extremely fast moving objects, can copy tons of genjutsu and taijutsu. Design unique to individual. Technique(s) unique to individual.


Skill and Rank Information
Village:Konoha
Rank:Jonin

Special Characteristics:Has Sharingan eye, 3 tomoe
Special Effects:Allows him to see his oponents attacks mroe clearly.

Elements:Fire, Water
Skills Specialties:Ninjutsu, weaponry


Jutsus

Name:Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child

Name:Water Fang Projectile
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

Name:Water Dragon Projectile
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Name:Burning Ash Accumilation
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.

Name:Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name:Housenka no Jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name:Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:None
Description:Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name:Ho Bunshin no Jutsu(Custom)
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:The user will make a clone(s). If the clone(s) are injured they will be engulfed in flames and make a small explosion. Like mizu bunshin, it cannot stay far away from the original body.

Name:Water Encampment Wall
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Name:Great Explosion(Custom)
Rank:B-A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:The user will do a string of handsigns. Small little balls of fire the size of marbles will apear around the oponent and surround them and slowly close in all around the opponent. The user will close thier fists, making the small balls of fire explode all at once. Each explosion is enough to tear up plants and such.

Name:Ryuuka no Jutsu
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target. It could also be used as a wide range attack

Name:Water Collision Destruction
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

Name:Gouryuuka no Jutsu
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Name:Fire Wave(Custom)
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description: The user will do a large string of handisgns. Then the user's hands will light on fire easily. The user will begin doing very quick and precsece movements, which will send the flames off thier hands and onto the ground. The flames should make a small circle around the user. The user will then stomp a foot on the ground, sending all the flames up into the air into a large wave. The user can make the wave fall onto of thier opponent.

Name:Daibakufu no Jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name:Flaming Energy Bomb(Custom)
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:The user will do a string of handseals then force chakra into his hands and began moving his hands in a circular motion. Immediantly a large glowing sphere around 3 ft wide will emerge in front of the user. The user will be abe to punch the sphere and send parts of the large fire ball hurling at the opponent.

Name:Mizu no Tatsumaki
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Name:Demonic Illusion • Tree Binding Death
Rank:B
Type:Genjutsu
Element:None
Description:Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai will disappear and approach her target. Once near her target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Kurenai will appear from the tree itself and stab her target with a kunai.

[Ave Uchiha]

Signature Jutsu

Name:Pyro Haretsu Kyuu (Fiery Explosive Sphere)
Rank:Between A and S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:A move that Ave's father invented, but passes onto Ave. Ave first builds up an uneven and wild amount of fire chakra in his palm. The flames coming from Ave's palm would then start to surround his arm in the form of a spring, but inside of the spiral it is still a roaring, flaming, sphere of fire chakra. So when Ave hits his target with the jutsu, not only would it cause alot of damage but it would cause the target to be burned and fly outward at high and violent speeds from the spining spring around his arm. Ave's signature jutsu.

Step One:
The user must be able to contain a high amount of wild fire chakra in their palm for at least one minute. The catch is is to not let the ball of fire chakra explode and fall apart. The reason why it is one minute is because that is probably how long you would need to execute the jutsu. At the end you should be able to keep the wild spining sphere of fire chakra contained in your palm for 3 minutes.

Step Two:
For step two you must create a spinning spiral of regular chakra around your arm for at least ten minutes. You must emit chakra from half of the chakra points of the selected arm and keep it going. This training session is dangerous for it could use all of your chakra if you push it to hard.

Step Three:
Step three is when you combine steps one and 2. Being able to control chakra in two different ways at the same time is an incredible feat.

The Result:
When you use the jutsu for the first time you should perform it on an ordinary tree. When the tree is hit with the jutsu it should be engulfed in flames and sent flying 20-25 meters through the air. After you perform the jutsu observe the remains of the tree. All that should be left is a pile of ashes. Ave can only use this jutsu ONCE every three days because of the exhaustion. You might also have a burnt palm and a possibly broken finger.


History and RP Sample
History:

Beginning:Ave was a lonely boy, a victim of loss to The Fourth Great Ninja War that included the legendary sixth Hokage, Naruto Uzamaki. Let's start this tale before the war. Ave was like any other boy. He had two loving parents and wanted to become a ninja....or so he thought. Ave and his family were very pore, but they stuck together and got through it. "Never get upset about how much money we have, only how much happiness we have, and we have a lot of that" Ave's father would tell him. Ave loved his father and mother and all of Konohagakure very much, with all his heart. But The Fourth Great Ninja War was coming...It happened. Akatsuki ordered their rain ninja to attack Konoha. The battle was blood shed and gore and many deaths. Naruto was amazing, he saved many lives, but he couldn't save his two older cousins in time. After the first battle of the war, Ave was greatly depressed about the fate of his two cousins, Sakumo and Ashley Uchiha. His father wasn't cheery for a while either. But Ave was soon bright again when he discovered he was going to the Ninja Academy the very next day.

Academy:When Ave was at the entrance ceremony the Hokage, Naruto told every student there that he knew that they would all became fine ninja one day. Ave aced every one of his classes and got top grades. After Ave brung home his report card, he immediatly showed to his father. "That's my boy, go on like this and you'll be great" his father said to him. His father beamed with pride and gave Ave back the card. The very next year, Ave graduated.

Genin:In his genin squad, squad number 4, he was placed with his two closest friends, Kantamaru Nara and Hashi Hyuuga. His sensei was a powerful Jounin named Mitsuhide Aketchi. They went on 10 D ranked missions, 3 C ranked, and 1 B ranked. On the B rank mission, it would be intense, When Ave first found out that he was going on a much more challenging mission, Ave got real excited. But then he became worried. What if one of my friends die? Ave thought already knowing the pain of loss. Relax Ave, your sensei will be with you Ave would think. One of them did die. The squad was ambushed by the nin, and Hashi Hyuuga was decapitated. Ave, looking down at the dead body, was horror struck. Ave's eyes turned red, and two tomoe erupted from each. He had awakened his Sharingan. With the help of his teamate, Ave took down the nin's mysterious pawn. Mistu impaled the missing nin. They all went home with a feeling of loss. Their replacment was Gabe Murabi, fresh from the Academy.

Learning a new Jutsu:When Ave got home from the mission, he went back home to see his mother and father. His father was proud that Ave had awoken his Sharingan, but, as with everyone else, felt sorry for the death of Hashi Hyuuga. "From this experience, I think you are ready to learn my signature jutsu" Ave's father said (See signature jutsu in my app). The training was intense. A few times Ave had to go to the hospital because of either a broken limb or lack of chakra. After all the training, he became chuunin, he completed the chuunin exam. Finally, Ave got it, and his father was proud.

The boy named Darkarro(Chuunin Arc):Ave met an Academy student named DarkArro, he truly loved Darkarro, one of the best friends he had ever had. They went on a mission together and fought other chuunin. Ave wiped out most of them without much effort. During the climax of the battle, somthing happened to Ave. A voice was in his head that said My name is RIP, and I bring you death. Ave said back No, the Sharingan let's me manipulate demons. Ave pushed the demon out of his mind and faked death, Darkarro would think him to be dead...until next time they met.

An attack on Konoha: Days later, the leader of Akatsuki, Pein, and his partner, Konan, attacked the village. Many, many, lives were lost. Lord Uzumaki was amazing and was in combat with Pein himself, using his new teleportation technique. Ave, desperate for revenge, foolishly charged at Konan. Ave was punched hard in the gut, coughing up a large amount of blood. His father apeared right beside Konan with a frown. "Father!!! Please help me!!" Ave pleaded. His father still had a frown on his face and said, "I'm sorry Ave". Ave's father lowered his sword on a woman: Ave's mother. SHING, SPLAT. His mother was dead, blood was everywhere, and Ave's father and Konan disapeared. Naruto eventually killed Pein, and drove his forces out of the village.


The Future:25 years later.... Ave was now a Jonin. Konohamaru was the next Hokage, but he then became old. The current Hokage was Lady Natsuki Haruko, a fine choice indeed. Ave never knew what became of his father. After the battle with Pein, alot of villagers disgraced him and made fun of him in those 25 years. But he's not gonna quit.

Rp Sample:Ave was walking through the lush green forest that he loved ever so. Ave loved Konoha and all of his friends and couldn't bear to part with them. Ave was taking a walk through the forest.

The forest and Ichiraku Ramen were Ave's two favorite places in the Leaf Village. The forest because you can always train there, enjoy nature and battle your friends in a lovely, but fierce, spar. Ichiraku Ramen because you can get the best ramen ever!!!

Ave kept walking through the forest making more prints in the dirt. He was getting bored that day. He went to the training area with the three logs standing upright. Ahhh, this bring backs memories Ave said with a big grin. He remembered when he was a genin with his squadmates, Kantamaru Nara and Hashi Hyuuga. Squad number 4....

But they were all grown Jonin now. Ave threw a few kunai at the log just for fun. They hit the center directly with a thud. Ave truly had grown into a splendid ninja. Ave laughed with joy. He could'nt beleive he had remembered all that in one trip to the forest. Now it's time to go get some Ichiraku with my coupon!! Ave thought with a smile and ran towards the village.

When he finally got to Ichiraku, he licke dhis lips at the smell of resh ramen. OH YEAH!!! Ave thought. He sat down at one of the chairs at the ramen bar, another man was sitting next to him: Kantamaru Nara. "What's up Kant?" ave said casualy to hid fellow Jonin. "Nothing much, just thought I'd come down here for some good ol' ramen. "So am I, mind if I buy?" Ave said back. "Sure, Ave". with that, avee ordered two barbecue prok ramen bowls with shrimp.

Ave slurped his ramen noisily, loving the scrumptios taste. Ave picked up a shrimp with his chopsticks and said "Got any genin for a squad?". "Nope, not yet" Kanta replied. "Their still rebuilding the vilage from the war" Kanta added quickly. "Me neither" said ave with a mouthful of broth.

[Ave Uchiha]

SOMEONE PLZ CHECK MY APP

[Lady Tsunade]

1.) Too young to be a Jounin. I'd say be a Chuunin.
2.) RP sample needs to be longer.
3.) Need to explain more on the sharrigan.

[Ave Uchiha]

Ok i think Iv got it, I've changed my age so I can still be Jounin

[Saruno Kazura]

(1) Yeah, would help, and please, fix a couple of your Katon ninjutsu, it gets annoying with little detail in the posts, please fix that.

(2) Use http://www.leafninja.com/ninjutsu.php for all Cannon Ninjutsu techniques if you would.

(3) Rp sample needs to be a bit more than just a paragraph, make it more readable, along with your history.

(4) Add a bit more detail to your History, we need to know alot about you, not just little details.

[Ave Uchiha]

I quite dont understand what your saying

[Saruno Kazura]

(3) Make it so it's easier to read. Put the History into Arc's, like 'Academy' 'Genin' 'Chuunin', Etc. in the arcs, makes it like a story.

[Ave Uchiha]

I think Im done

[Saruno Kazura]

Well so far it's pretty good. Yet the Personality and the looks could do some work, but i'll make an exception.

Welcome to the RP style of 'Beyond the Shinobi'.

You are!

APPROVED!~

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