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Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
Basic Character Information:
Name: Pray Moonlight
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Clan: Moonlight
This clan was formed in the early years of the Konoha Village by a single old fool with ambishions to make himself famous and an overabundence of children. The man was rich, being alive for the early years of Konoha gave him alot of opportunities for training ninja and building the reputation. This provided the money, while his age provided the respect and that was all he required. The man started his clan, with intentions to go far in the world. The clan was based upon sound, although frowned upon for not being in the Sound Village, the clan thrived and was very much liked by the people in the Village. The clan would hold festivals every year on the new year, with their musical instruments doing all of the talking. Many would use a Cello or a Lute, whereas others chose a more elegant musical piece such as the violin. The people in this clan were able to manipulate the sound waves from their instruments and send them out at the enemy in the form of weapons. A high note on an instrument could send out a very sharp blade at high speed toward the target of the user. And a very low note could send out a blunt object at high speed toward the target. Both having significant differences, one being used to cut and the other to crush or destroy.
Looks: Pray is a student in Medical and Ninja studies, he is usually seen wearing his black uniform with the white undershirt, his blue hair occassionally covers half his face on the left side. Pray's clothing is always clean unless he has been in a fight recently, in which case he will try his best to prevent it from getting dirty. His shoes are black leather, although well worn in for easier movement. Pray has pale white skin and large seductive blue eyes. He takes a stance with his waist pushed forward when not in combat, otherwise Pray is leaning forward for a better aerodynamic position in combat.
Personality: Pray is a calm and usually tired teenage boy with hormones on his mind. He takes things a step at a time and is usually the last to act in a situation he is forced to kill someone, unless he as full knowledge that he must do what is asked of him. Pray believes if someone is guilty, they should die, he would take his own life if the case was that he had done something horribly wrong. Pray's mind runs on percentages, he calculates everything within moments of though before making a single action, unless he already knows what to do. He is slightly backstabbing in cases where, if one of his allies does something wrong, he may try and stop them with any neccessary use of force.
Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Special Characteristics:
Musical Genius:
Pray is good with instruments, his father taught him about music since he was born, while coping with the blacksmith duties. Pray is still learning many things about music but is becomming grown to it.
Elements: Wind.
Skills Specialties:
Ninjutsu and Medical.
Equipment
Violin:
A violin that can be used with the bloodline sound abilities. The violin can be used to block or strike with in close range, though it may break.
Jutsus
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: Wind
Description: Pray clones himself using this E rank Jutsu, allowing him to distract his enemies with it and possibly save himself if used correctly or trick the enemy by a chance.
Name: Illusionary Technique
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: Using basic ninja skills, Pray can hide using sheets of cloth or shrubery in the area. He is able to blend in by finding the correct places and items to use in the situation.
Name: Basic Healing
Rank: D
Element: Wind
Description: After performing hand signs with one hand Pray is able to place the selected hand onto the injury and mend it over the coarse of a few seconds, he is able to perform other basic actions while doing this.
Name:: High Note Pierce
Rank: D
Element: Wind (sound)
Description: The user plays a high note frequency on their instrument to send out a sharpened kunai at their target.
Name: Low Note Crush
Rank: D
Element: Wind (sound)
Description: The user plays a low note frequency on their instrument to send out a blunt stone of half a metre in width at their target.
History and RP Sample
History: Pray was born into the family at the now late stages of Konoha's development. He grew up surrounded by hundreds of his fellow clan members, each one questing to make themselves better then the rest. This idea was gross to Pray, but he did enjoy competition on the occassion, so he would tend to accept challenges from clan mates or otherwise, less likely characters. Pray first began his training using a Violin at age 6, his father especially made him a Violin the right size for him to carry. Pray began learning about medicine from his mother whom was a practiced nurse, he started at age 6. Although he wasn't able to retain too much information at that age, every year he would start learning the same stuff again, so he came to memorize it. At age 8 he began learning in the local Ninja School, while undertaking advanced medical training at age 9 from the Moonlight Clan Hospital. Many in the clan found it amusing, since the only people who worked in the Moonlight Clan Hospital were women. Although this pressure was put onto him, he accelled in the classes and learnt quickly from his teachers in both Ninja and Hospital Schooling. At age 10 he began correcting other students in his medical training. His parents remained strong in their relationship for him, ensuring he would have a better future then the rest of the people in the Clan. Pray came to the age of 14 and was given his first test, he was challenged by another student who took classes in Rapiers. Pray picked up his customized Violin made by his father when he was 13. Enterring the battle, everything fogging his mind, the Violin's musical tune perfect, Pray was out done and the rapier lunged into his intestine before he could finish. The other students being afraid of someone finding out, ran into the distance leaving him to die. Using his knowledge of medicine, Pray saved himself and carried himself home, his first lesson in taking care of himself without someone supporting him. The next year at age 15 he was given a team of two other students and a Jounin, they were instructed to do missions.
Rp Sample:
Pray began moving his right hand down, slowly creasing his uniform as each finger had it's own crease. The clothing made a slight brushing sound, not an annoying or strange one either, it was slightly calming. Pray's hand reached his waist as he gripped his belt tightly, his left hand already resting on the handle of his Violin. Pray drew the violin slashing his bow accross the strings. His body swayed to the left slightly as he made the attack, becomming overbalanced as he created a stone. His target was a three metre thick stone infront of him, it was hard rock, very dense. The stone collided with a crashing sound as it sparked and smashed through into the stone by one and a half metres. The violin being gripped tightly now by Pray as he panted and sweat dripped from his hair down onto the blade. He stood straight, allowing the cool breeze to brush past his sweating skin. Raising his head to the sky, Pray began stumbling back slightly as he dropped backwards into a patch of grass. He lay still for a few moments before drifting into a deep sleep, resting for the missions to come.
Name: Pray Moonlight
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Clan: Moonlight
This clan was formed in the early years of the Konoha Village by a single old fool with ambishions to make himself famous and an overabundence of children. The man was rich, being alive for the early years of Konoha gave him alot of opportunities for training ninja and building the reputation. This provided the money, while his age provided the respect and that was all he required. The man started his clan, with intentions to go far in the world. The clan was based upon sound, although frowned upon for not being in the Sound Village, the clan thrived and was very much liked by the people in the Village. The clan would hold festivals every year on the new year, with their musical instruments doing all of the talking. Many would use a Cello or a Lute, whereas others chose a more elegant musical piece such as the violin. The people in this clan were able to manipulate the sound waves from their instruments and send them out at the enemy in the form of weapons. A high note on an instrument could send out a very sharp blade at high speed toward the target of the user. And a very low note could send out a blunt object at high speed toward the target. Both having significant differences, one being used to cut and the other to crush or destroy.
Looks: Pray is a student in Medical and Ninja studies, he is usually seen wearing his black uniform with the white undershirt, his blue hair occassionally covers half his face on the left side. Pray's clothing is always clean unless he has been in a fight recently, in which case he will try his best to prevent it from getting dirty. His shoes are black leather, although well worn in for easier movement. Pray has pale white skin and large seductive blue eyes. He takes a stance with his waist pushed forward when not in combat, otherwise Pray is leaning forward for a better aerodynamic position in combat.
Personality: Pray is a calm and usually tired teenage boy with hormones on his mind. He takes things a step at a time and is usually the last to act in a situation he is forced to kill someone, unless he as full knowledge that he must do what is asked of him. Pray believes if someone is guilty, they should die, he would take his own life if the case was that he had done something horribly wrong. Pray's mind runs on percentages, he calculates everything within moments of though before making a single action, unless he already knows what to do. He is slightly backstabbing in cases where, if one of his allies does something wrong, he may try and stop them with any neccessary use of force.
Skill and Rank Information
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Special Characteristics:
Musical Genius:
Pray is good with instruments, his father taught him about music since he was born, while coping with the blacksmith duties. Pray is still learning many things about music but is becomming grown to it.
Elements: Wind.
Skills Specialties:
Ninjutsu and Medical.
Equipment
Violin:
A violin that can be used with the bloodline sound abilities. The violin can be used to block or strike with in close range, though it may break.
Jutsus
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: Wind
Description: Pray clones himself using this E rank Jutsu, allowing him to distract his enemies with it and possibly save himself if used correctly or trick the enemy by a chance.
Name: Illusionary Technique
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: Using basic ninja skills, Pray can hide using sheets of cloth or shrubery in the area. He is able to blend in by finding the correct places and items to use in the situation.
Name: Basic Healing
Rank: D
Element: Wind
Description: After performing hand signs with one hand Pray is able to place the selected hand onto the injury and mend it over the coarse of a few seconds, he is able to perform other basic actions while doing this.
Name:: High Note Pierce
Rank: D
Element: Wind (sound)
Description: The user plays a high note frequency on their instrument to send out a sharpened kunai at their target.
Name: Low Note Crush
Rank: D
Element: Wind (sound)
Description: The user plays a low note frequency on their instrument to send out a blunt stone of half a metre in width at their target.
History and RP Sample
History: Pray was born into the family at the now late stages of Konoha's development. He grew up surrounded by hundreds of his fellow clan members, each one questing to make themselves better then the rest. This idea was gross to Pray, but he did enjoy competition on the occassion, so he would tend to accept challenges from clan mates or otherwise, less likely characters. Pray first began his training using a Violin at age 6, his father especially made him a Violin the right size for him to carry. Pray began learning about medicine from his mother whom was a practiced nurse, he started at age 6. Although he wasn't able to retain too much information at that age, every year he would start learning the same stuff again, so he came to memorize it. At age 8 he began learning in the local Ninja School, while undertaking advanced medical training at age 9 from the Moonlight Clan Hospital. Many in the clan found it amusing, since the only people who worked in the Moonlight Clan Hospital were women. Although this pressure was put onto him, he accelled in the classes and learnt quickly from his teachers in both Ninja and Hospital Schooling. At age 10 he began correcting other students in his medical training. His parents remained strong in their relationship for him, ensuring he would have a better future then the rest of the people in the Clan. Pray came to the age of 14 and was given his first test, he was challenged by another student who took classes in Rapiers. Pray picked up his customized Violin made by his father when he was 13. Enterring the battle, everything fogging his mind, the Violin's musical tune perfect, Pray was out done and the rapier lunged into his intestine before he could finish. The other students being afraid of someone finding out, ran into the distance leaving him to die. Using his knowledge of medicine, Pray saved himself and carried himself home, his first lesson in taking care of himself without someone supporting him. The next year at age 15 he was given a team of two other students and a Jounin, they were instructed to do missions.
Rp Sample:
Pray began moving his right hand down, slowly creasing his uniform as each finger had it's own crease. The clothing made a slight brushing sound, not an annoying or strange one either, it was slightly calming. Pray's hand reached his waist as he gripped his belt tightly, his left hand already resting on the handle of his Violin. Pray drew the violin slashing his bow accross the strings. His body swayed to the left slightly as he made the attack, becomming overbalanced as he created a stone. His target was a three metre thick stone infront of him, it was hard rock, very dense. The stone collided with a crashing sound as it sparked and smashed through into the stone by one and a half metres. The violin being gripped tightly now by Pray as he panted and sweat dripped from his hair down onto the blade. He stood straight, allowing the cool breeze to brush past his sweating skin. Raising his head to the sky, Pray began stumbling back slightly as he dropped backwards into a patch of grass. He lay still for a few moments before drifting into a deep sleep, resting for the missions to come.
Last edited by Pray Moonlight on Fri Jan 02, 2009 4:56 am; edited 5 times in total
Pray Moonlight- Genin
- Number of posts : 7
Age : 33
Location : Australia
Country : Konohagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-12-27
Re: Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
Sword Wielder:
Pray is extremely good with broadswords, his father was a blacksmith and always gave him weighted metal pieces to swing around while he was a kid and he grew to the idea of one. The Broadsword he uses best is one with one edge sharp and the other blunt so he can push on the back of the blade.
- I Dont think you could get "Extremely Good" with them in 2 Years.
-Shadow Clone is what you have listed, What your Trying to do is a Bunshin no Jutsu.
Name: Regeneration [Can only be used at Chuunin Rank]
Rank: A
Element: Bloodline
Description: The user of this Jutsu regenerates their damaged body slowly, they may also regenerate any blood they have lost, this takes a few minutes to complete.
-Can't Have A Ranks Til JOUNIN rank, so remove it please.
Name: Spark Fingers
Rank: D
Element: Lightning
Description: Pray performs handsigns and upon the last his fingertips are coated by lightning chakra, allowing him to land up to two hits per hand with lightning damage on his opponent, after which the lightning will fade.
Name: Wind Swirly
Rank: D
Element: Wind
Description: Pray performs handsigns and upon the last wind chakra is focused into his right palm, when he presses it into an opponent they can be forced back up to 3 metres and spun around in circles if successful.
-These are both Ninjutsu Techniques, Please remove.
-Looks good other then that, taking a look at your Clan now.
Pray is extremely good with broadswords, his father was a blacksmith and always gave him weighted metal pieces to swing around while he was a kid and he grew to the idea of one. The Broadsword he uses best is one with one edge sharp and the other blunt so he can push on the back of the blade.
- I Dont think you could get "Extremely Good" with them in 2 Years.
-Shadow Clone is what you have listed, What your Trying to do is a Bunshin no Jutsu.
Name: Regeneration [Can only be used at Chuunin Rank]
Rank: A
Element: Bloodline
Description: The user of this Jutsu regenerates their damaged body slowly, they may also regenerate any blood they have lost, this takes a few minutes to complete.
-Can't Have A Ranks Til JOUNIN rank, so remove it please.
Name: Spark Fingers
Rank: D
Element: Lightning
Description: Pray performs handsigns and upon the last his fingertips are coated by lightning chakra, allowing him to land up to two hits per hand with lightning damage on his opponent, after which the lightning will fade.
Name: Wind Swirly
Rank: D
Element: Wind
Description: Pray performs handsigns and upon the last wind chakra is focused into his right palm, when he presses it into an opponent they can be forced back up to 3 metres and spun around in circles if successful.
-These are both Ninjutsu Techniques, Please remove.
-Looks good other then that, taking a look at your Clan now.
Yun Disukai- A Ranked Missing-Ninja
- Number of posts : 534
Age : 31
Location : over the Horizon
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-10-09
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Re: Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
Sorry about the bad wording, it's been a while since i made a character for an RPG. But i edited the things you asked about and hope it passes this time. =]
Pray Moonlight- Genin
- Number of posts : 7
Age : 33
Location : Australia
Country : Konohagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-12-27
Re: Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
I edited the entire clan setup with my backup clan, I hope this one is to your liking and passes.
Pray Moonlight- Genin
- Number of posts : 7
Age : 33
Location : Australia
Country : Konohagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-12-27
Re: Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
Sound is Wind/Wind element, meaning you can't have Lightning.
Metal Violin, Wouldn't work as you think it would. Since the noise is made off of the hollow wooden frame that is how the sound is produced, if you make it metal, it won't work, (I've been through this stuff >_>)
Metal Violin, Wouldn't work as you think it would. Since the noise is made off of the hollow wooden frame that is how the sound is produced, if you make it metal, it won't work, (I've been through this stuff >_>)
Yun Disukai- A Ranked Missing-Ninja
- Number of posts : 534
Age : 31
Location : over the Horizon
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-10-09
Ninja Profile
Health Bar:
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Re: Pray Moonlight ~{Approved}~ ZK
Okay, Good enough, all problems are fixed. So, anything else, Probably not.
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Saruno Kazura- Kazekage
- Number of posts : 311
Age : 34
Location : .:;:. A place in the Darkness, finding a Purpose in life .:;:.
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Lightning
Element #2 : Wind
Registration date : 2008-10-04
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