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[Nazkar]

Basic Character Information:
Name:Nazkar
Age:20
Gender:Male
Clan:Uchiha

Looks:

Personality:Nazkar likes to have a laugh sometimes, he likes to chill out with friends when not busy, he takes his work very serious and likes to do the best for the AS. Nazkar likes to do missions with friends when not doing things, he is very friendly at times and sometimes he cant keep his anger in. He is cares for girls and friedns he likes to flirt with girls sometimes.


Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei:Sharinagn
Description:UChiha withhold the sharingan
Special Effect:Dodge things
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Skill and Rank Information
Village:Leaf
Rank:Jounin

Special Characteristics:
Special Effects:

Elements:Earth Liaghting
Skills Specialties:Ninjutsu and Taijutsu


Jutsus

Name: Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Lighting
Description:Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Name: Chidori Senbon - Thousand Birds Needles
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Lighting
Description:Chidori Senbon is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. Though unstated, these needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.

Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Name: Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Rank: Unknown
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Name:Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Iwa Yado Kuzushi - Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

Name:Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element:None
Description:A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature.Nazkar summons tigers, Nazkar's tigers has no jutsus its just a basicattacking tiger and one to ride on.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: None
Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

History and RP Sample
History:Beginning Arc:
Nazkar was born when the 2nd war was taking place, as a little kid he had to flee village to village and escaping ninja all his life. Nazkar did not remember his parents as they dies after he was born. Nazkar was safe with ninja from his old village(Rain) Nazkar climbed up trees for cover. They use to live in houses that was abanned from other people. Nazkar saw lots of blood and dead bodies when he was young, soo after Nazkar got lost and could not find the other ninja. Nazkar carried on travilling and he found his way to a village called Leaf.

The AS Arc:
After a few years after when he joined Leaf village, he joined the academy to become a ninja and bring glory to them, Nazkar never knew he was a Uchiha and did not want to find out either. Nazkar found his own place and used the money he got from working at the ramen shop. Nazkar went to the lessons and did really good, he came top of the class one time. When it came to graduation day, he did not make it time to the teat due to working at the ramen shop. Nazkar got there a minute after it ended the teacher did not let him do it because he was late. Nazkar had to stay on another year. 1 year later it was graduation day again and this time he graduated to Genin.

The Genin Arc
1 year after becoming genin he was known throughout kohona for his bravery. Nazkar did many missions and got money for doing them. When it came to the chunnin exams, Nazkar and the team he was in did not particapate becuase the sensei did not want them to. Next year Nazkar particapated and they got through to the chunnin exam part 2 and they was in the tower. Nazkar was the only one to win his fight in his team and was praised for it. When it came to the chunnin exam part 3 he did not win his match and the chunnin rank was given to some one else.

Lucky Brake
Instead of being chunnin the hokage offered him academy teacher, Nazkar took the rank and ever since his been one.

Rp Sample:Nazkar walked out the village gates and turned around, Nazkar waved"goodbye" Nazkar turned back around and disappered. Nazkar appered on a branch and he began jumping branch to branch. Nazkar began going fast. Nazkar was counted by two ninja from a different village. Nazkar got out his kunai throwing two kunai to one enemy. As 1 of the kunai missied the other hit him. Nazkar jumped out and pulled out his kunai and stabbed the person with the kunai in him, Nazkar then threw the kunai he was holding at the other person which hit him in the head. Nazkar looked at the two dead bodies on the floor, Nazkar ran back to the leaf and warn the hokage that the village is underattack. Nazkar got back and the village walls were broken through. Nazkar ran in and could see most the buildings was on fire. Nazkar jumped building to building as quick as he could, Nazkar reached the Hokage building and he ran into it and ran up the stairs. Nazkar reached the door and he barged in, Nazkar looked around the room and the Hokage was sitting there"Hokage where being attacked"

[Lady Tsunade]

Please RP sample longer with COMPLETE SENTENCES

[Nazkar]

edited

[Last Temptation]

If you're intending on actually teaching Academy Students I will ask for your RP sample to be even longer. Also, you didn't add what form of the sharingan you have. I would most likley guess it would be 3 Tomoe.

'Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique'

When you added this, you simply put, Nazkar summons tigars. If that's the case, that summoning would be probably a B ranked. Also, If you could, write down all and any abilities the tiger might have such as jutsu and other things in that nature.

I will remind you, anything 'forgotten' on an application will not be usuable in RP.

[Nazkar]

i have edited it and i put myself as jounin know, and my person has not realised he is uchiha so he hasnt got the sharingan and i know that anyhting not mentioned i will not be allowed to use

[xoxKitKat]

I know I'm no mod; but I just wanted to give a little bit of advice.

When applying for a position, try to spell check as well as check the grammar before sending. It doesn't look very good if its all spelling errors.~

[Josh]

I know I'm not a mod, I'm also VERY sorry for posting here Lady T, but I thought this had to be said. I don't think his RPing skills are even nearly level to being able to teach academy students. I've seen him RP and he mostly posted 1-2 liners, and occasional 3 liners. Also, for instance his grammar, and English are not up to par. His RP sample is all wrong, and the most noticable thing is how he repeatidly says "Nazkar" and he isn't descriptive. It's just not right for him to be teaching Academy Students how to "RP" when he can barely RP himself. I'm not insulting anyone, I'm only saying that there are those who have yet to learn how to RP, those who need to learn, those who are learning, those who know how, those who are good, and those who are great.

But Nazkar is balancing between "who needs to learn how" and "who are learning" I think it would be in the site's nest interest if all high ranks, especially Academy Teachers, are good at RPing. Not just allow some random person to apply and get the rank no matter how good or bad he RPs. But once again I have seen Nazkar RP before and his RPing skills are dreadful, and I personally think the rank best suited for him would be Academy Student, or maybe Genin to help him learn the ropes before he is able to go around summoning tigers and RPing like a Banshee. What I'm saying is...ANYONE who even ASKS to be Chunin or above has to be a good RPer.

Not some random person who only wants the rank for the jutsus. I chose the rank of Jounin because I thought I was ready, and I wanted to teach Genin and raise them almost as my own. Not for the high ranked jutsus, because some people can't RP. Sorry, if I'm being harsh but I'm sure there are a lot of people who agree that high ranks need to be GOOD RPers. Which includes having good Grammar, and English.

More Problems...
Name: Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Lighting
Description:Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Name: Chidori Senbon - Thousand Birds Needles
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Nin
Element: Lighting
Description:Chidori Senbon is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. Though unstated, these needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.
These both are S rank.

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