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Yuki Kaguya[WiP]
by Yuki Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:10 am
Basic Character Information:
Name: Kaguya, Yuki [Last, First]
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Clan:Kaguya: The Kaguya clan hailed from Hidden Mist and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure, this ability is called Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways). They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their abilty to spurn the creation of new bones.
Looks: Unlike most Kaguya's, he doesnt resemble them at all. He doesnt have the perpendicualr dots on his head or their barbaric apearance. He has a strong built, from years of work on Taijutsu. He has a sweet and calm appeareance.Yuki is slightly tanned because he lives in the desert of Sunagakure. He has silvery white hair that reaches to his neck. His hair is kind of crazy so it just settles anywhere on his face. It slightly covers his slivery-white eyes. He is tall but not the tallest of them all. He is 6'2, a pretty big size. He wears a silver earing on his left ear. The earing isnt anything special it is just a simple silver earing that doesnt have any loops or anything. He wears white robes, kind of like Sasuke in the 2nd part. He uses a rose because of his Kaguya techniche's can rip thru his shirt. He wears a Sunagakure headband on his head and they are normal sized not anything big. He has bandages covering his hands.
Personality: Yuki is those kind of guys that are misunderstood most of the time. He is thought as disgusting, vile or a demon. He doesnt like being with anyone except his students. he has a nice, attracting aura that could make the evilest person smile. Dont be fooled by the aura! He is actually a quiet, foul-mouthed and lonely person. he seldomly smiles or talks. he usually just nods. He really hates annoyong people, he usually tells them to butt off or say something mean for they can go away. But under his tough exterior there is a nice person that enjoys to be with people, laughing, and smiles. It is a person that takes time to get thru. Unlike the Kaguya's he is not barbaric he mostly enjoys peace and tranquility.
Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei:Shikotsu Myaku - Corpse Bone Pathways: Shikotsu Myaku is the blood inheritance limit of the Kaguya Clan. The Kaguya clan hailed from the Water Country and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure. They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their ability to spurn the creation of new bones. Kaguya Kimimaro would utilize dances which took advantage of this ability. These taijutsu techniques would mix body movement with his ability to extend bones. Kimimaro would also use his Earth Seal to expand these dance forms, granting him the ability to use his bloodline to its ultimate limit.
Description:
Special Effect:
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Skill and Rank Information
Village:Sunagakure no Sato
Rank:Jounin
Special Characteristics: -
Special Effects: -
Elements: Raiton/Suiton
Skills Specialties: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Name: Kaguya, Yuki [Last, First]
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Clan:Kaguya: The Kaguya clan hailed from Hidden Mist and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure, this ability is called Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways). They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their abilty to spurn the creation of new bones.
Looks: Unlike most Kaguya's, he doesnt resemble them at all. He doesnt have the perpendicualr dots on his head or their barbaric apearance. He has a strong built, from years of work on Taijutsu. He has a sweet and calm appeareance.Yuki is slightly tanned because he lives in the desert of Sunagakure. He has silvery white hair that reaches to his neck. His hair is kind of crazy so it just settles anywhere on his face. It slightly covers his slivery-white eyes. He is tall but not the tallest of them all. He is 6'2, a pretty big size. He wears a silver earing on his left ear. The earing isnt anything special it is just a simple silver earing that doesnt have any loops or anything. He wears white robes, kind of like Sasuke in the 2nd part. He uses a rose because of his Kaguya techniche's can rip thru his shirt. He wears a Sunagakure headband on his head and they are normal sized not anything big. He has bandages covering his hands.
Personality: Yuki is those kind of guys that are misunderstood most of the time. He is thought as disgusting, vile or a demon. He doesnt like being with anyone except his students. he has a nice, attracting aura that could make the evilest person smile. Dont be fooled by the aura! He is actually a quiet, foul-mouthed and lonely person. he seldomly smiles or talks. he usually just nods. He really hates annoyong people, he usually tells them to butt off or say something mean for they can go away. But under his tough exterior there is a nice person that enjoys to be with people, laughing, and smiles. It is a person that takes time to get thru. Unlike the Kaguya's he is not barbaric he mostly enjoys peace and tranquility.
Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei:Shikotsu Myaku - Corpse Bone Pathways: Shikotsu Myaku is the blood inheritance limit of the Kaguya Clan. The Kaguya clan hailed from the Water Country and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure. They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their ability to spurn the creation of new bones. Kaguya Kimimaro would utilize dances which took advantage of this ability. These taijutsu techniques would mix body movement with his ability to extend bones. Kimimaro would also use his Earth Seal to expand these dance forms, granting him the ability to use his bloodline to its ultimate limit.
Description:
Special Effect:
Link: [url=][/url]
Skill and Rank Information
Village:Sunagakure no Sato
Rank:Jounin
Special Characteristics: -
Special Effects: -
Elements: Raiton/Suiton
Skills Specialties: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Last edited by Yuki on Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:05 pm; edited 3 times in total
Yuki- Not Approved
- Number of posts : 18
Age : 27
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Lightning
Element #2 : Water
Registration date : 2008-10-21
Re: Yuki Kaguya[WiP]
by Yuki Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:55 pm
E Rank
C Rank!
B Rank
A Rank
S Rank
- Spoiler:
- Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
CC:5
Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Kaibyaku[Creation]
Rank: E
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: N/A
Description: This is the basic technique for Kaguya Clan members. This allows the user to start giving calcium to their bones, preparing them for battle. This is optional, but highly recommended.
Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
CC: 5
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
CC:5
Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
CC:5
Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
- Spoiler:
- Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
CC: 20
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
CC: 20
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.
Kai - Release
CC: 20+
Rank: D+
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Bone Claws
CC: 25
Rank: D
Range: Close
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Yuki being a Kaguya has the ability to create and extend his bones. He then manipulates his hand bones to cover his hands.He then manipulates it further and makes the fingers bones into claws. Since he has bone poison on his bones he can cut the opponent and poison them. He can also block small weaponry with his hands like shurikens, kunais and senbons.
Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets
Character Use: Kimimaro
Rank: -
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Teshi Sendan is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Sound ninja Kimimaro. Using his bloodline abilities unique Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways) ability, Kimimaro will use his fingers to fire his distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.
Lightning Pulse
CC: 35
Range: Close
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu
Element:Raiton
Yuki simply emits a wave of electricity around his body. He keeps the lightning around his body for about ten post. If he makes contact with a person he can paralyse them.
Partial Skeletal Film
CC: 35
Range: Close
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Yuki covers only 3 limbs on his body with a thin bone film. The armor is strong enough to withstand taijutsu attacks and projectiles.
Bone Capture
CC: 35
Range: Close to Long
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Yuki creates the forearm and the hand bones. He then launches it towards his opponent. There is a thin bone thread following it. Yuki can then manipulate the bone hand to open or close. Once it captures the opponent. The bone grips it really thight. With the bone thread he then pulls it back towards him for he can use his close range attacks.
C Rank!
- Spoiler:
- Lightning Rod
CC: 45
Range: Close
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Yuki creates a pointed forearm bone and takes it out thru his hand. He doesnt take it out, it just stays on his palm. When a lightning attack is coming he will then point it up and charge lightning thru it. It attracts the other lightning attack and the attack is traveling thru his body. He then does the same thing with his other hand but this time he points it towards his opponent. It is then thrown as a huge lightning bolt.
Bone Combo
CC: 55
Range: Close
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Yuki, in conjunction with his Bone Claw techniche, focuses chakra on his feet. He starts rotating quickly and because of the rotation and bone claws, they stop all small projectiles from landing. He also starts shooting fingertips while rotating towards his opponent. He can throw up to a 100 with each usage.
Byakurai- White Lightning
CC: 50
Range: Close to Long
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Yuki focuses chakra to his fingers. He then changes that chakra to the lightning affinity. He then shoots out white lightning from the tip of his index and middle fingers.
Second Skeletal Film
CC: 55
Range: Close
Rank: C
Type: Ninjustu/Taijutsu
Yuki, being able to manipulate bones, he makes a second bone structure under his skin. It makes his hits more stronger and harder and it works as a defence. Weapons wont be able to hit his major arteries or organs. It is also able to withstand the blows of taijutsu.
Bone Dagger
Range: Close
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu
Yuki takes out his forearm from his palm. He then pulls it out and uses it as a dagger. Its density is so thick that it can cut thru weapons. It is dense like steel.
Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Yahiko will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent
Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Character Use: Kamizuki Izumo
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
B Rank
- Spoiler:
- Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.
Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Lightning Current
Rank: B
Range: Mid to Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Yuki forces lightning currents underground. The currents travel underground in a 400 meter radius and if the opponent is on top of where the currents are traveling they will be shocked to death. The only weakness of this techniche is that the 10 meters around Yuki does not have currents have underground.
Bone Sword
Rank: B
Range: Close
Type: Taijutsu
Like Bone Dagger, he pulls out his whole arm and manipulates it to a sword point. It is denser than steel. it can cut thru most weapons.
Bone Storm
Rank: B
Range: Close to Long
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Yuki opens his mouth and creates teeth and also manipulates them to a point. he can then throw them towars his opponent. He throws them at a speed that can go right thru them
A Rank
- Spoiler:
- Aka Bara no Mai- Dance of the Bloody Rose
Rank: A
Range: Close to long
Type: KG
Yuki makes a huge bone the size of a large spear and makes it come out of his hand. He then manipulates the point of the bone into a spiral point. The point is the size of an average dog. He then opens up the point and then it resembles like rose petals. A huge point sticks out from the middle. He then takes it out of his hand and then bone spikes ,which resemble thorns, come out of the spear. He then thrust chakra into his hand and throws it. He attaches a chakra string to it for he can move it. The spear has enough force to go thru a metal wall. The force after the impact can then destroy a whole building. It is harder than steel.
Rasen Bara no Mai- Dance of the Spiral rose
Rank: A
Range: close to mid
Type: KG
Yuki takes out his spinal cord and behind it both of his 4 of his shoulder blades. They are on the tip of the spine cord. He then forces chakra into it and makes the shoulder blades spiraling. They are spiraling so fast they could tear a metal wall apart. He then whips the 'flower' towards his opponent. It is harder then steel
Odaku Bara no Mai- Dance of the Dirty Rose
Rank: A
Range:Close to Long
Type: KG
Yuki takes out his 6 ribs and throws them at his opponent. They are spiraling at a speed that they look like white frizbies. Yuki then has chakra strings on them to control them to attack his opponents. It can shred thru metal walls. it is harder than steel.
Shiro Bara no Mai - Dance of the White Rose
Rank: A
Range: Close to Long
Type: KG
Yuki takes out spiked bones all long his body that are about 5 inches. He then focuses then shoots them out of his body at extreme speeds. They are as hard as steel and can break thru metal walls.
S Rank
- Spoiler:
- Takai Bara no Mai- Dance of the Death Rose
Rank: S
Range: Close to Long
Type:KG
Using his chakra he creates bones thru out his whole body. With his own chakra he will polverize the bones and make them to dust. He then opens his mouth and the bone dust comes out. If you lay the bone dust down, it is enough to fill a 50 foot crater. With the chakra infused bone dust, he picks it up and starts surrounding the opponent. He can either move the bone dust so fast around the opponent that it eather cuts the opponent into pieces or by closing his hand he couls crush the opponent like 'Saba Kyuu.'
Bone Demon
Rank: S
Range: Close
Type: KG
Yuki covers his whole body with bones, it acts like a second film. He develops a mask on his face made out of bone. The mask resembles 'Haku's mask' but without the color. It is pure white. he develops talons, claws and a tail. He then has a perfect armor against projectiles and taijutsu attacks. The defense is so strong that not even an elephant or tsunade's stenght can break thru it instead they would break their limb. It not only works as a defense but he can also launch normal bone weaponry like finger bullets, bone daggers, and bone claws. he can also whip his tail, the force is so strong that he can break a bone with it.
Last edited by Yuki on Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:48 am; edited 1 time in total
Yuki- Not Approved
- Number of posts : 18
Age : 27
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Lightning
Element #2 : Water
Registration date : 2008-10-21
Re: Yuki Kaguya[WiP]
by Yun Disukai Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:05 am
1st things 1st. You can't Have Poisoned Bones.
The Main Problem isn't that the Bones are poisoned, ITs that Well Poison is an Element in itself so by having it you couldn't have bone. Aka The Phasing Element. So Poisoned Bones has g2g.
The Main Problem isn't that the Bones are poisoned, ITs that Well Poison is an Element in itself so by having it you couldn't have bone. Aka The Phasing Element. So Poisoned Bones has g2g.
Yun Disukai- A Ranked Missing-Ninja
- Number of posts : 534
Age : 31
Location : over the Horizon
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Wind
Registration date : 2008-10-09
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Re: Yuki Kaguya[WiP]
by Yuki Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:30 pm
History and RP Sample
History:
Rp Sample:
There was once a graceful hero. Her name was Hana, she was elegant, smart and brave. It was a time when clan wars broke out all of a sudden. She was part of the Minato clan. They had a kekeigenkai that no other had. The powerful doujutsu, the Rinnengan. She had 7 bodies each one having different abilities.Everyone feared this clan but there was the Uchiha clan who had the Sharingan. They were sworn enemies.
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There was a brave, heroic hero. His name was Sora, he was smart, galiant and handsome. It was a time when clan wars broke out all of a sudden. He was part of the Uchiha clan. They had a kekeigenkai that no other had. The powerful doujutsu, the Sharingan. He has aquired the Mangekyo Sharingan. Everyone feared this clan but there was the Minato clan who had the Rinnengan. They were sworn enemies
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Now we can start the story, that will unravel true love and tough decisions. Between love and their clan.Hana and Sora were both love birds. They loved each other very much. They were planing to get married after all the craziness has stopped. Their allies, the Senju, would help them make a peace treaty with the Uchiha. They would always have to sneak out of their headquarters to meet. They would meet on this river that was hidden by mountains and trees. One twilight, Hana's best friend, Saki,followed her out of the headquartes with her special cloaking techniche. Saki kept following her until she saw Hana stop at a river. She then saw the sacred Sora Uchiha.
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Sora left the headquartes at the brink of twilight. He was followed by his friend, Yuki, he used his stealth skill's to stay hidden. Yuki kept following until he saw him stop at a river. He saw the sacred Hana Minato.
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The two stalkers managed to stay hidden from each other and the lovers.
---
"We meet again my love," said Sora. "It seems so my angel," said Hana. Sora grabbed her from behind and puller her close to his face and kissed her tenderly on the lips. They hugged each other tightly. "Were you followed, Hana-chan?" He said as he put his hand on her slender hip. "No, my love. What about you?" She said as she moved his hand to his thight stomach. "Of course not, my angel." They hugged and kissed each other passionetly. "So, how is the baby?" He smiled ackwardly. "You know its only been a week... since we shared our love. I am not sure about having thi-" Her words were stopped when he kissed her on the lips. "Hana-chan you speak to much!" He took off his shirt, showing his musceled chest and hard stomach. She touched his chest but the moment was ruined when a sudden noise happened.
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"Shi-", Saki and Yuki said simeoltaneously. They both speeded off towards their headquarters to report there news.
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Sora had his shirt back on and he whispered loudly, "Hana you must run back to your headquarters!" She looked at him in the eyes, "Take care, my love...." She left quickly.
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Hana and Sora made it back to headquarters and their clan were dissapointed. They both entered the leaders room.
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"The great Hana Minato!! With an Uchiha," screamed the leader of the Minato clan. "What will the Senju's think!!?" He too out a kunai and put it on Hana's neck. "You kill him tomorrow with this poison and we will not kill you. Understand!!" She cried, "Yes Zero-sama!" She left quickly to her bed. She couldnt sleep the whole night.
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"The great Sora Uchiha!! With a Minato," screamed the leader of the Uchiha clan. "You shouldnt have those eyes!" He handed him a bottle of poison, "Kill her with this!! Or we kill you..."
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It was twilight yet again, and as always they met by the river. "How did it go!?" Sighed Sora. "It was fi..ne...." Lied Hana. Sora saw the sadness in her eyes and asked, "They want you to kill me right??" She looked in his eyes, she hesitated, "Yes, Sora-kun." They hugged each other. Hana started crying and Sora hugged her thighter. "Its okay, you kill me...." Hana screamed, "Are you mad!!!! You kill me!" Sora smiled, "We kill each other, we will finally be happy in heaven." Hana smiled, "Your right..." They each kissed each other tenderly on the lips, and said their goodbyes. They drank the poison and died. They fell in the river and were swept away.
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Yuki and Saki both said the same words, "We will call this river the Lover's Creek."
The End
OT: To lazy to write it myself i just posted this in the academy on onegoo. Also the names here are no one related on any site or w/e.
History:
Rp Sample:
Last Twilight
There was once a graceful hero. Her name was Hana, she was elegant, smart and brave. It was a time when clan wars broke out all of a sudden. She was part of the Minato clan. They had a kekeigenkai that no other had. The powerful doujutsu, the Rinnengan. She had 7 bodies each one having different abilities.Everyone feared this clan but there was the Uchiha clan who had the Sharingan. They were sworn enemies.
----
There was a brave, heroic hero. His name was Sora, he was smart, galiant and handsome. It was a time when clan wars broke out all of a sudden. He was part of the Uchiha clan. They had a kekeigenkai that no other had. The powerful doujutsu, the Sharingan. He has aquired the Mangekyo Sharingan. Everyone feared this clan but there was the Minato clan who had the Rinnengan. They were sworn enemies
----
Now we can start the story, that will unravel true love and tough decisions. Between love and their clan.Hana and Sora were both love birds. They loved each other very much. They were planing to get married after all the craziness has stopped. Their allies, the Senju, would help them make a peace treaty with the Uchiha. They would always have to sneak out of their headquarters to meet. They would meet on this river that was hidden by mountains and trees. One twilight, Hana's best friend, Saki,followed her out of the headquartes with her special cloaking techniche. Saki kept following her until she saw Hana stop at a river. She then saw the sacred Sora Uchiha.
---
Sora left the headquartes at the brink of twilight. He was followed by his friend, Yuki, he used his stealth skill's to stay hidden. Yuki kept following until he saw him stop at a river. He saw the sacred Hana Minato.
---
The two stalkers managed to stay hidden from each other and the lovers.
---
"We meet again my love," said Sora. "It seems so my angel," said Hana. Sora grabbed her from behind and puller her close to his face and kissed her tenderly on the lips. They hugged each other tightly. "Were you followed, Hana-chan?" He said as he put his hand on her slender hip. "No, my love. What about you?" She said as she moved his hand to his thight stomach. "Of course not, my angel." They hugged and kissed each other passionetly. "So, how is the baby?" He smiled ackwardly. "You know its only been a week... since we shared our love. I am not sure about having thi-" Her words were stopped when he kissed her on the lips. "Hana-chan you speak to much!" He took off his shirt, showing his musceled chest and hard stomach. She touched his chest but the moment was ruined when a sudden noise happened.
---
"Shi-", Saki and Yuki said simeoltaneously. They both speeded off towards their headquarters to report there news.
----
Sora had his shirt back on and he whispered loudly, "Hana you must run back to your headquarters!" She looked at him in the eyes, "Take care, my love...." She left quickly.
-----
Hana and Sora made it back to headquarters and their clan were dissapointed. They both entered the leaders room.
---
"The great Hana Minato!! With an Uchiha," screamed the leader of the Minato clan. "What will the Senju's think!!?" He too out a kunai and put it on Hana's neck. "You kill him tomorrow with this poison and we will not kill you. Understand!!" She cried, "Yes Zero-sama!" She left quickly to her bed. She couldnt sleep the whole night.
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"The great Sora Uchiha!! With a Minato," screamed the leader of the Uchiha clan. "You shouldnt have those eyes!" He handed him a bottle of poison, "Kill her with this!! Or we kill you..."
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It was twilight yet again, and as always they met by the river. "How did it go!?" Sighed Sora. "It was fi..ne...." Lied Hana. Sora saw the sadness in her eyes and asked, "They want you to kill me right??" She looked in his eyes, she hesitated, "Yes, Sora-kun." They hugged each other. Hana started crying and Sora hugged her thighter. "Its okay, you kill me...." Hana screamed, "Are you mad!!!! You kill me!" Sora smiled, "We kill each other, we will finally be happy in heaven." Hana smiled, "Your right..." They each kissed each other tenderly on the lips, and said their goodbyes. They drank the poison and died. They fell in the river and were swept away.
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Yuki and Saki both said the same words, "We will call this river the Lover's Creek."
The End
OT: To lazy to write it myself i just posted this in the academy on onegoo. Also the names here are no one related on any site or w/e.
Yuki- Not Approved
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Age : 27
Country : Sunagakure no Sato
Element : Lightning
Element #2 : Water
Registration date : 2008-10-21
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