Help required please

[The Snake God]

Alright I have my char ready to be created. Every thing is mentaly ready to go. As far as Kekki Genkia (spelling) abilities Im havin a bit of lack in creativity. The clan Im making is going ot be based on controle of posions and a doujutsu that makes people listen to me more so, or giving the ability to create subordinates. This is somthing I want to have to incorperate as being the leader of the aka. Thoughts as to the description of how it is done? Or the doujutsu could influence people in other ways. THoughts?

[Last Temptation]

Well the technique would need to have limits. I would say that it would be cool if it could be upon eye contact of your Doujutsu. When someone stares into your eyes you can completely control them for lets say, a full minute. With that time you would pretty much be completely unstopable. People that don't know your character would never see it coming, and therefore it would be pretty easy to take on a large group of people incase you ever attacked a village. I mean, they look into your eyes and then BAM, they are like your mindless zombies. That way you can use then to attack their friends or kill themselves.

[The Snake God]

INteresting....any way a lasting effect could be placed? A way to create a "subordinate" feel on things?

[Last Temptation]

Anything really over a minute would be like super OP. To completely control someone, Eh. Again there would have to be like alot of limitations. I would say that could be like one of your characters ultimate jutsu and it would be time consuming. Maybe something like, it taking 100 handseals to complete and then you have to touch your opponents head within 5 seconds or you loose it.

[Sosuke Amenori]

Hmmm...The Doujutsu reminds me of something I saw on Bleach. The guy could take away soverignity of something by having one of his eyes (He had 50) just by looking at it. For example: If one of his fifty eyes looked at someone's arm, then he could now control that arm. Also, if he managed to capture the head, then he immediately gained control over that entire person. It was pretty cool. He made Byakuya turn emo and slash his wrist. xD

Although gaining control over something just by looking at it may be a bit OP, so I would suggest that you have to look at that person or object for a certain amount of time before control kicks in.

[The Snake God]

I dont plan on it being somthing I could use in the heat of battle or any thing but somthing that allows more controle over the aka should any thing happen as well as the subbordinate controle. I think your idea is creat John

[Chizu Nakano]

I think if you have this it needs some downside to it, like you go unconcious for a day, you can only try it once, you get really weak after using it. Something of the sort, for a Kekkei Genkai such as this I think you need a negative side effect. And as John said over 1 min would be op, from the idea on the hand signs/etc though, there would need to be more though, Because were talking about someones one and only character. And 100 hand signs isn't too much for a S-rank Ninja, it's a bit, but not like it'll take more than a min at max... Possibly only 10 seconds or 15...

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