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Post by .Kira Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:24 pm

Basic Character Information:
Name: Anaboko Kira
Age: 18
Gender: Male

Looks: Click for the handsome .Kira
Kira is a cyborg, but his appearance is like a normal human. He has pale skin and black eyes, and carries almost all the time a smile on his face. His hair is the same color as the eyes, black, and the hair is going straight up with some hairs down on the forehead. He has a normal body, except that he is a cyborg, with some muscles visible, but not big. He's wearing a black thin shirt with a white shirt above. His pants is brown and he has no belt, and is not having socks on. One the picture he has socks on, but he does not really have it.

Personality:
He is a cyborg, but he has a brain, and also a heart, and therefore, a personality. Kira can sometimes be very brave, but also a coward. He is almost everything, because he is afraid sometimes and sometimes not. Sometimes smart and sometimes stupid. In battle, Kira uses his brain, and while not in battle, he is a complete idiot who is... a complete idiot. He usually doesn't do much other then walking, training and relaxing. He likes what he does; Relaxing and Training, and likes to eat... alot. Kira wants to do all the five boxes, but can only do three of them (Read Jutsu for more information). And that's all Kira wants, his dream, it's to do all the five boxes, and be the best cyborg ever made. But, he is also the only one, so that goal is already done.


Skill and Rank Information
Village: Amegakure
Rank: A-rank Criminal

Special Characteristics:
1. A cyborg w/chakra

Special Effects:
1. Steel Body
2. Weapons inside him

Elements:
1. Katon
2. Suiton
3. Raiton

Skills Specialties:
1. Taijutsu


Cyborg Weapons:

Mouth: All the Elements can be used trough here when the different boxes is in use. If the second box is in use, he can't use Katon which is the first box.

Fingers: He can break his fingers backwards and you can see the inside of the finger which is steel. Inside each finger, there is twenty senbons. Even when he bends the fingers, the senbons would not break.

Hand: Kira can also break his hand backwards and open a whole which contains, again, steel. Inside there, there each hand there is three Kunais each. They can't break when their inside there.

Shoulders: The shoulderplates on Kira will be lifted up, and out from the shoulders it can be shot shurikens, in each shoulder, there is six shuriken. As the others, it can't be broken while inside.

Feets: Kira is always going barefoot, and if he kicks an opponent, three spikes, about four centimeters long, can come out on will. Which, will hurt the enemy more then just a normal kick.

Whole Body: Kira's body is build by an hard steel, which is actually not steel, it's much harder. The steel can't be cut by regular swords, but can be hurt from all other non Taijutsu and Weapon moves. Not all his body is covered by this hard metal, some places are normal, and these places are; His neck, Stomach and the thing we pee with. Under the metal, there is his organs, blood and all the thing he needs to live with. Over the steel, there is normal skin, which can be cut, but doesn't hurt him. Since he is so hard, his puches hurt much more then a regular punch.


Jutsus

Name: Ichi Box: Katon
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description:
Kira mixes his chakra together with the blood to create his body harder and faster. His strength goes up aswell, and he also opens the first box in his body which contain Fire. When he does this, he can easily spit fire, make his arm on fire for punches. He can aslo heat up his body to make it warm and melt trough other metals. He can't turn into the element itself.

Name: Ni Box: Suiton
Rank: B
Element: Suiton
Description:
Again, Kira mixes his chakra together with the blood to create his body even harder and faster then the first one. His strength goes up higer also then the first one, and he also opens the second box in his body which contain Water. When he does this, he can easily spit water. He can't much more then that, but he can stay under water as much as he likes. He can't turn into the element itself.

Name: San Box: Raiton
Rank: A
Element: Raiton
Description:
Again, Kira mixes his chakra together with the blood to create his body even harder and faster then the second one. His strength goes up higer also then the second one, and he also opens the second box in his body which contain Lightning. When he does this, he can easily send electricity out from his mouth and arms. As fire, the lighting can get hot so he can heat the body up and melt trough other metals. He can't turn into the element itself.


There are 2 more boxes in his body which contain; Earth and Wind, but he haven't managed to open them yet, and the boxes goes from weakest to strongest. So, the order will be; Katon, Suiton, Raiton and Fuuton/Doton.


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Post by .Kira Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:20 pm

History

Before a Ninja Arc.
Kira were born in Konohagakure no Sato, and was raised by his mom and dad, where his mom were a cook, and his father were a Chuunin ranked ninja. His father were very busy as his job was mostly working outside the Fire Country, so they met once week or less. He lived a normal life as a cute baby until he became six years old, and his mom signed him in to the Academy.

Academy Student Arc.
As he became a Academy Student as a six year old was completely normal. He gained a few friends at the Academy, and didn't become the popular kid, but didn't care about that. He had friends and he listened to everything the teacher said, so he would grew up as a professional ninja someday. As the time went while he was at the Academy, his dad were more and more home then out on job, and the reason was that he quit. He joined the Academy as a teacher instead, but didn't become the teacher of Kira. As Kira became eleven years old, he was good at Taijutsu mostly, and that was the only thing he trained in. After some months after he became eleven, he became also a Genin.

Genin Arc.
He became a Genin, and he joined a team with two others and a Jounin Team leader. His time as a Genin were the shortest of all the ranks he had been in. His team was on many missions and did all of them great, he even did a C-rank mission too. He became better at Taijutsu and was better then both his teammate, but not the teamleader, he barely managed to touch him before the fight between them were over. The Chuunin Exam were right around the corner, and his team started to train harder then ever. At this time, Kira could do a Fire jutsu, but only one, and it wasn't so very powerfull. In the Chuunin Exam, his team passed the first and second exam. The third exam, the tournement, both of his teammate failed and only Kira were left. His opponent were a Water user, and he easily defeated Kira, all he had to do was a single jutsu to make Kira fall. Then, he headed over to Kira, and punched him, but Kira didn't gave up. And, because of the spirit of don't give up, and the other fight he had in the tournement, Kira became a Chuunin.

Chuunin Arc.
The Chuunin rank were mostly mission all the time, running to Iwagakure, running back, boring missions almost all the time. Kira wanted to become a Jounin now, because he wanted to see how the A-rank missions was. All the missions Kira did in his rank was C and D, juts like when he was a Genin, sometimes there were B, but those were rare. Kira was around fourteen now, and he still could only do one Katon jutsu, just alittle better then when he was a Genin. And he mostly focused on training his Speed and Taijutsu. He stayed up on nights to train, all he did were; Missions and Training. To see he relaxing at that time was rare. And with all the hard work he did, the Hokage maked him a Jounin just a year after he became Chuunin and was fiveteen years old now.

Jounin Arc.
After he achived the rank Jounin, he started to take it more easier in the training, because this was the highest rank he could achieve. He didn't want to be a Kage, neither a Anbu, so this was the highest rank. His training didn't stop, but it was reduced to three times a week, and the mission became harder. Alot of B rank missions and also A rank missions, where he had to fight other ninjas. One day, he was sent on a mission to the "Land of Waves" to retrieve a letter from a person there. He took this mission with another Jounin, and they headed out to the "Land of Waves. The trip there was long, and those two didn't speak much. Once they arrived to retrieve the letter, the man there suddenly jumped towards them and sent them down in the ground. Kira and the other one had been tricked, and they were now, going to be experimented with. Under the experiment, he put some hard metal inside the body of them, and five boxes of each element, which they could achieve when they connected their chakra together with the blood. He put in alot of different weapons and other stuffs inside the body, and then put them out on the streets, and left them. The two of them woke up a week later, and the other Jounin was almost dying, while Kira was alive, with blood on his hands. After Kira saw the blood on his hand, he thought he had injured his teammate, and some minutes later, he died. This made Kira to not go back to his village, since he had killed one of his own villagers, and Kira ran of to Amegakure.

Missing-Nin Arc.
When Kira entered Amegakure, he trained with his new body, and found out how to use the different weapons, he also unlocked the first and second box fast, and learned how to use them too. Since he never went back to Konoha, he became a Missing-nin, and he stayed and trained for three years in Amegakure. After three years of trainin, he was now eighteen, and had managed to control the three first boxes.


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Post by .Kira Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:30 am

Two different RP-samples


The road was ahead of him, the long path in to town. Every step he took, more blood came out of his wound. The sky began to darken, actually not, it was only the vision of Aisuke that started to blur. "The town... It seems... so far away" he said with a low voice while holding on his wound. The town was only a fifty feets in front of him, but it felt like thousand. A man approached Aisuke and saw the wound; "Hey man, are you okey?" he asked even if he knew the answer. "Y-yes, I'm fine..." Aisuke answered and walked past him grabbing his shoulder to push himself forward. The man got a wierd face-expression while Aisuke answered him, and took the hand of Aisuke around his neck. "I'll help you!" he told Aisuke with a seroius voice that wouldn't stop him by saying; no. He accepted the offer and they went in to the town together.

"Damn, this thing is hot!" Kuma told the others at the academy with his tounge out. "I burned myself, can somebody help me?" he asked while looking towards the teacher. "This tea is HOT!" he said while yelling out the last word. Nobody heard him, and Kuma stood up, and crawled ontop of his desk; "I said; this tea is HOT!" he yelled out so the teacher turned around and told him; "You just have to patience and wait for it to be cold, alright?" the teacher asked with a smile and closed eyes. "This is the worst schoolday ever..." Kuma whispered to himself, taking his arm in a cross and created a angry face. The sky outside was so blue, and it was empty for clouds. "Okey class, freetime!" the teacher told the students while heading over to Kuma; "You can stay inside and wash the desk of yours!" he said with an angry voice nad pointed towards Kuma's desk which was full of mud after he stood on it.
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Post by .Kira Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:22 pm

Done with the Character
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Post by .Kira Fri Dec 12, 2008 11:50 am

Waited some time now...
and changed to just a normal criminal instead of Akatsuki...
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Post by Yun Disukai Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:16 pm

There aren't cyborgs in Naruto Reshape application accordingly.
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Post by Saruno Kazura Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:37 pm

If you make it...non-cyboryish like...It'll be acceptable. Just maybe your arms, legs, or half of your head? Doesn't really matter. You can't have your ENTIRE body encased in steel, or be made of it. Steel is mainly for weaponry or something else. Please follow what Yun said also. xD

Tip: If you just have your arms, feet/legs, and rig them so they can be used and controlled by the chakra in your body, it's acceptable. Cause it's Naruto-like to use that to your advantage, like my clan can freely manipulate it. So it's just a tip by Ol' zane-kun. ~

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