Raito Wareru, Akatsuki -[Approved]- ZK

[Getsugakure]

Basic Character Information:
Name: Raito Wareru
Nickname: Eternal Phoenix, which is what he is known by in the Bingo Book.
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Clan: None

Appearance:

Raito, standing at a full 5 feet 3 inches, has long black hair tied into a pony tail, his face completely unblemished. His eyes are as cold and black as coal, with a long lanky figure. He wears ninja gear at all times, unless specifically told otherwise. He also wears a tattered black cape, that once belonged to his grandfather. Below his waist he wore a thin rope with a scroll attached to it. Strapped to his back, he has a longsword that looks like ~this~, with a serrated cutting side and a strong cord attached to the end of the hilt. Over his eys, he wears a black strip of cloth, covering his eyes completely.

Personality: In battle, he is a cold killing soldier, doing what ever his Raikage commands. He has the upmost respect for him and will do anything to protect him. He has no mercy for any of his enemies, but will do anything to save one of his comrades. Out of battle, he usually goes out to either patrol the Village or converse with fellow ANBU. Once in a while, however, he will go out and have a couple of drinks. He doesn't have any family, but he does have a boyfriend, Joe, who lives with him. It's a strained relationship sometimes, as Joe doesn't fully understand what it means to be a shinobi.

Special Characteristics: Raito is blind. He lost his sense of sight at a very young age, and because of it, his other senses are heighted, the most being his senses of hearing, touch, and smell. Because of his hearing, almost no one can sneak up on him. Because of his sense of smell, almost no one can escape from him. And, because of his sense of touch, his reflexes are amazing, so that if he was standing still and someone threw a kunai at his back, when it connected, he would be able to turn around without it making a fatal blow only a scratch could be seen.

Pet: He has a pet pheonix, Faowls. He found Faowls on an extensive trip to Mountain Country. He was scouting the Heat Devil Village when he found a cave (will be explained in History). Faowls is the keeper of the Pheonix Contract, who is immortal in our world. He has two prominent abilities. One being that his tears have healing capabilities beyond anything imaginable. Those can cure any sickness or disease, however, it cannot stop aging, or dying because of old age. Finally, they can mentally connect, so that Faowls can be Raito's eyes.

Elementals: Raiton, Fuuton

History:

Early History:

Raito was born into poverty, his mother and father living on the streets at the time. He was born in an alley, with his mother, Harmony, depleted of all her energy. Needless to say, she died, leaving him and his father, Higaru, alone. For seven long years, they got by on only will power, very limited visits to food kitchens, and stories told by his father of the shinobi of the village. He was born with a very unique disease, which made his eyes deterriorate at a very fast pace. By the age of three, he was blind, and for some unexplained reason, his other senses were heightened.

One story was prominent in Raito's mind, the story of their clan's contract. The Wareru Clan, now destroyed, all remnants lost, was once prominent, with one special technique reserved for only the head of the clan. It was an animal contract for phoenixs. There was a story that his grandfather was ninja and knew that he could not let the contract fall into the hands of the unworthy, so he hid them away, where only a Wareru could find and open the seal he placed upon it. Those stories fueled Raito in his childhood, and when his father died of sickness, he decided to enroll in the Academy.

When the teachers found out about his homelessness, they immediately set up an apartment for him. It was then that he found something his grandfather had put away for the next ninja in their family. It was old ninja gear and a serrated sword with a black scabbard. He learned much in the academy and practiced Kenjutsu on his own, making a few powerful techniques.

He still occasionally went to the food kitchens, because of his lack of income. It was there he met Joe, just another tattered child. Raito had decided to approach him and make friends. It worked. Soon, they were inseperable. A friendship had started and lasted for three long years. When they were 11, puberty started and hormones kicked in. A relationship started and then they were even more inseperable. Unfortunately, Joe was studying to become a blacksmith, while Raito was being educated in the Shinobi Arts. Things are strained sometimes between them, but most of the time, they were a great couple. When they were 12, Raito passed the Academy and went on to be a Genin.

Genin Arc:

Raito was placed on a three man team under the jounin named Hizashi Zakuru. Hizashi was always strict, but fair and always had this aura about his that displayed a cool and collected demeanor. His team was a lot more advanced than the others, allowing them to only complete 10 D ranked missions before going onto C ranked missions. In the end, the completed 20 D Ranked, 14 C Ranked, and 4 B Ranked Missions, as Hizashi waited for a year before applying his team to the Chunin Exams. During their Genin days, they learned a lot, from teamwork to water walking. Constantly, they sparred against each other, and teaming up against their sensei. During this time, Raito and Joe's relationship had grown. Even though Joe was still training to become a blacksmith, he was sympathetic towards Raito and he tried to understand little by little on what it means to be a shinobi. Soon, it was time to take the Chunin Exams.

The first of test of the Chunin Exam was the written test. His team went in with an aura of self confidence that could even belittle an Akatsuki's killing intent. They passed with flying colors, each having their own method of passing. For Raito, he listened to the strokes of a person writing the answers. Thankfully, that was the hidden Chunin in the Exam. They passed without a hitch. However, with the Forest of Death, things got complicated. His team had recieved the Earth Scroll, and ten minutes into the Exam they found their first opponent team. They won easily, but Raito misjudged the proportions of his opponent and accidently killed him. The opponent team was from Konoha. He felt terrible. It took all his willpower not to break down there. Thankfully, they made it to the twoer in time, and only three teams had passed, allowing them to progress to the Third Exam without a preliminary. That day, at home, Raito cried into Joe the whole night.

For the next month, Raito trained solely on honing his senses. By the time of the exam, he was able to sense every single living being on a crowded street. He also worked on his aim and accuracy, increasing it successfully. During the Third Exam there was a plot, but not a plot to destroy Konoha, but a plot to destroy the sacred tradition of gambling. One of the villages, Kirigakure concealed one of their Chunin and entered them into the Exam. Raito overheard the plan with his sensitive hearing. He was the one that took down the Chunin. In the end, all three of them were promoted and Hizashi was proud.

Chunin Arc:

After the Chunin Exam, Team Zakuru was the talk of the Village. For the next six years, they trained and grew together, all at Jounin level by the time they were done. In the space of this time, they completed 16 C Ranked, 10 B Ranked, and 2 A Ranked Missions. It was during this time, that they had a mission to the Heat Devil Village. There was a rumor that there was an item of value there, a summon contract. Raito perked at the idea, the stories told by his father coming back to him. They found the summon scroll in a cave, guarded by a Phoenix named Faowls. Raito told his teammates he preferred to go alone to retrieve it, as it once belonged to his Grandfather. He had to pass three trials, the trial of will, the trial of faith, and the trial of fire. The trial of will tested his will to live, which was incredible. The trial of faith tested his faith in his abilities and those around him. He passed barely. The trial of fire was his loyalty, his loyalty to himself and his village. He failed this test. He didn't prove that he could wield the summon, however, Faowls owed a debt to Raito's grandfather, one he would not reveal, so Faowls decided to go with Raito.

From then on, where ever Raito was, Faowls was there too. Faowls was very useful in all of their missions, as he was a perfect scout. During his time as a Chunin, Raito and Joe became more intimate, their love for each other increasing. Joe had just taken over his mentor's shop and was slowly gaining recognition as a blacksmith. He fully supported Raito, especially by giving him weapons and customizing them for him. When he was 22, his team was promoted to Jounin.

Jounin:

After becoming a Jounin, Raito and Joe decided it was time to marry. And a wedding they had, with all their friends. The Village surprisingly supported them and only a few homophobics showed themselves. All in all, Raito's life was going splendidly. Now, at 26, he's been married for five years and has been a Jounin for four. Also, during this time, he set up a successful spy network in over twenty lands, including the Lands of Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, and Snow.

He soon got fed up with how the Village was being run. They simply were being lazy, not caring how people were faring in the Ninja World. They were promoting people when they weren't ready, and all in all they didn't have the will of fire, in Raito's opinion. He was scared for Joe mostly, so he left, with no warning.

Missing Ninja Arc:

After he and Joe settled in another no name Village, he became a missing-nin, dedicated to himself and to Joe, going on any and all missions. He soon became known as the Eternal Phoenix in the Bingo book, for both his Phoenix Summons and that he would just not die. Soon, he got the Akatsuki's attention, and their leader approached him. Raito, to say the least, was intrigued by his offer.

Role Playing Sample: The air was wrought with fear, silence engulfing the area. No one moved. The ground was splattered with blood and sweat, all sets of eyes gazing at one enemy. A blow of sweet wind passed by, rustling leaves and bodies into motion. Raito was the wind. His sword was unsheathed. Not even so much as making a sound, two more of the four remaining ninja went down in a crumpled heap, their lives extinguished. One of the other shinobi got up a defense in time, and the other was quick enough to block his sword completely, but did not account for the serrated edges. The blade, always dipped in oil, ingnited in flames. "Homura Dama!" He cut the enemy with a smile as his opponent was babtised in fire.

Raito, using his heightened senses, turned around. "If you think you can win, you're mistaken."

"If you think I'll die laying down, you're even stupider than the reports said," the enemy jounin said.

"It's more stupid... idiot," replied Raito, half-heartedly. "Just promise me one thing. Don't die regretting anything." With that he became a blur, using his own spped. He appeared above the enemy, his leg extended forth, charged with chakra. He yelled, "Tsutenkyaku!" His leg was brought down on the opponent, not even registering that Raito was above him. With barely a scream, the last life was extinguished. Raito was the wind.

"Eternal Pheonix, eh?" mumbled a man to himself. "If I engage him now, I'll die. But let's see how he reacts to a summon." The man bit his hand, and after the required hand seals, he shouted, "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" After a puff of smoke, a large plain hawk stood next to him. "Engage him. See what he can do."

The hawk bowed its head low. "As you wish." The hawk took flight, screeching as it went. Raito immediately turned his head to the direction which the screech came from. He had sensed a power surge of chakra and knew it was an animal summon. He decided to not waste time and, after the required hand seals and a cut of blood, he shouted, "Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Boufuu!" A small femal pheonix came out. I take it you need this obliterated.

Raito's veiled eyes stared at Boufuu. "Yes," he replied. Bofuu nodded, not that Raito could see, and took off. She wasted no time, as she wasn't known for her patience, and screeched, "Reppuu!" Her body turned into flames and surged forward, engulfing the hawk. After a minute, the hawk burst out of existence, as he could not get the flames off him in time. Boufuu yelled, It is done! And poofed out of existence, not even waiting for Raito to respond. "Always the cheeky one," he muttered. He sped off, leaving the carnage behind. He had to report to his Hokage.

[Getsugakure]

Jutsu

Name: Hirazuki - Ishiki
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: The First Stance (Ishiki) is the standard, shoulder-level ground attack. He prepares by dropping into a partial crouch, both knees bent, left arm drawn back and right extended forward; he grasps the hilt of his sword with his left hand and rests the tips of the fingers of his right hand (usually the thumb) on the blade near its tip.

Name: Hirazuki - Nishiki
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: The Second Stance (Nishiki) is a downward-striking attack. The direction of the Nishiki thrust is narrower, as well.

Name: Hirazuki - Sanshiki
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: The Third Stance (Sanshiki) is an upward-striking attack. Prepared identically to the Ishiki, he uses it to intercept an opponent assaulting him from above, directing his blade into the air instead of immediately forward.

Name: Hirazuki - Zeroshiki
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: Zeroshiki is an attack performed at point-blank range using all his upper body strength. This stance, unlike the first three, requires no prior preparation or footwork.

Name: Homura Dama
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Fire
Description: This is the technique that Raito uses often. Using friction to ignite the oils that have soaked into his sword over time, his blade goes on fire, this serves to distract the opponent from his swings.

Name: Kaguzuchi
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Fire
Description: The Kaguzuchi is one of the best techniques in Raito's sword technique arsenal. He activates it by scraping his blade from the base to the tip on the end of the scabbard, creating a miniature fiery cyclone around the blade. Raito starts the fire and then slashes at the enemy, thus he can incinerate them entirely while still cutting them.

Name: Shugeki Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: Raito kicks the back edge of his blade to increase the speed and force of the strike when he swings his sword upward. The power of this sword attack is so powerful it can sever tree trunks with ease.

Name: Kaishi Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: Raito blocks his opponent's attack with the hilt of his sword and spins around his enemy's defense on one foot, leaving him a complete opening in which to attack his opponent.

Name: Shoha Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: Much like the Shugeki Tosei, Raito uses his palm to push the sword during a downward strike, increasing its speed and force.

Name: Choten Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: A follow-up to the Shoha Tosei, where the sword has been stabbed into the ground. Raito steps on the pommel of his sword and jumps into the air, and then retrieves his sword by pulling on the cord attached at the hilt. This is followed by an upward whip-like slash at the overhead enemy.

Name: Gotsui Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 2-7 M
Element: None
Description: Using the sword to stab his opponent, Raito then proceeds to lift him in an arc over his head and slam him into the ground. To do this, the sword and the arm must have enough power to support the opponent's weight.

Name: Shikku Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: One of Raito's most visually impressive techniques. First, Raito jumps normally by holding the sword at the perfect position (generally behind his back, gathering power for the slash). When he reaches his maximum height from the ground, Raito uses the fact that his jump has exactly canceled gravity, giving him a split second to make a second jump. Thus, this makes him appear as if he is walking in the air.

Name: Senran Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: An attack in which Raito ducks in a manner like a tiger's crouch, and slashes upwards by spinning around. Afterward Raito will rush towards his target with his Wato like an extension of his arm.

Name: Kinobori no Waza
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: 0-15 M
Element: None
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: Allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: Creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the clone gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up. It's rather unknown of how the users get out of their ropes.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range:No Range
Element: None
Description: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.

Name: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 0-10 M
Element: None
Description: The Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique allows the user to create shadow clones of a shuriken to attack a opponent. The user throws a single shuriken and use the technique to create multiple shadows clones of it.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-15 M
Element: None
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person.

Name: Kai
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: No Range
Element: None
Description: A jutsu that destroys/cancels out an illusionary jutsu attempted on the user. Only shinobi with strong chakra control can perform this. The user releases a large amount of chakra then quickly halts it. The genjutsu is usually dispelled after that, depending on how strong the skill is.

Name: Bunshin Daibakuha no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 0-10 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.

[Getsugakure]

Name: Raiting Nami
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-8 M
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a lighting jutsu that comes out of Raito's mouth. The lighting is rushed out at a high speed and goes straight for the target that it’s aimed at. It can also change direction. Depending on how much chakra is put into it, the blast can be thick or thin.

Name: Raiton Ori
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 10 Feet
Element: Lightning
Description: Using his lightning chakra, Raito is able to make a cage out of lightning around an opponent. This is done by using his natural lightning and luanching it forward around an opponent a good 10ft in either direction. This barrier will show any who touch it and can be destroyed by equal or greater lightning energy form the inside or a disruption caused by two strong jutsus hitting the shield from the inside and outside at the same time. Otherwise this jutsu lasts 3 posts. The user is unable to enter the barrier as well.

Name: Raiton Kobushi
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Lightning
Description: Raito's entire arm is covered in lightning and the force of the lightning is delivered to an opponent upon contact stunning them slightly, aside form that just a regular punch. Also, if it connects with their heart or head, they will most likely die. And, if it hits in the back of their neck, the opponents nerves will be disrupted for two posts.

Name: Raiton Ya
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 5-15 M
Element: Lightning
Description: Raito draws his arm back, lightning in it. He releases it and then a beam that appears to be an arrow is shot forth. This is extremely fast, and takes time to load, but if the shot is accurate, it's deadly. This is best used for an assassination.

Name: Raiton Bushin
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a clone that is created from lightning. At first the clone will look like a normal clone but if it is hit the lightning will be activated around the clone cause a destructive force.

Name: Fuuton Katto
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Wind
Description: Fires a highspeed blade of wind from a weapon. This is so powerful, it can cut through three trees before it dissipates.

Name: Kaze Bakuha
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Wind
Description: Chakra is forced through the focused part of the body and released as as a blast of wind. This jutsu is mostly used for close combat, but can also be used to deflect some projectile attacks. It doesn't take up much chakra, but requires descent chakra contol.

Name: Boushi Kaze Bakuha
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-8 M
Element: Wind
Description: Chakra is forced through the focused part of the body and released as as blasts of wind. This jutsu is mostly used for close combat and can be used against mutiple enemies. It can also be used to deflect projectile attacks as well as provide as a temparary shield. It takes up quite a bit of chakra, and requires great chakra control.

Name: Kaze Shuriken
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: The user manipulates their chakra into disks of wind, resembling shuriken. The user then launches the disks of wind at their opponent from almost any direction.

Name: Reppushou
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards their target while acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, increasing its power and deadliness.

Name: Kaze Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: The user forces out wind chakra and molds it into a human-like shape. Then the user molds the chakra with further detail to make it resemble them. When this clone is attacked, instead of poofing, it cuts what it touches with the unleashed wind chakra.

Name: Kaze Chisoku
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: Charging his feet with wind chakra it allows Raito to move with increased agility. Making slightly faster movements. It depends on how much chakra is put in to how fast it is.

Name: Hein
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: This technique requires a bladed weapon. By feeding chakra into the weapon, the ninja will increase the length and density of his blade to strike an enemy from several feet out of the physical blade’s rang. This is done by creating an invisible extension of chakra that shape into an edge that functions like the normal blade itself. Seeing the blade, the opponent may misjudge how far they need to move to avoid an incoming strike and thereby still be cut even if they manage to avoid the metal portion of the blade. The chakra-enhanced blades are strong and sharp enough to strike through solid rock or cut through iron. This technique works best with element chakra, especially with wind-type for offensive power.

Name: Leaf Gale
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: With great quickness and agility, Lee performs a full 360 degree low sweeping kick that knocks their opponent off their feet if he does it weakly, and sends them soaring back if it is done strongly. It is said that Lee can create a small whirlwind with this technique. This attack is mostly used to counter an enemy’s attack. Even though it may seem strong, there is a great weakness to this seemingly powerful technique. The opponent can counter by catching the kick and crushing the users leg by putting his elbow and his knee into alignment and when the leg comes in, the opponent can swiftly close his knee and elbow with the opponents leg inside, breaking bones and causing harmful damages.

Name: Konoha Daisenpu
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first. Lee, unfortunately, doesn't shout out the name.

Name: Konoha Shofu
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: A Taijutsu technique similar to Guy's famous Dynamic Entry. The user jumps in the air, while letting their body drop backwards, allowing them to use their full body to power an upwards kick.

Name: Leaf Strong Whirlwind
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is basically the same as the Leaf Great Whirlwind, only more damaging.

Name: Konoha Senpu
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D, C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is a set-up attack for a stronger jutsu. It consists of a simple, but very fast, duck followed by a powerful upward kick, which sends the opponent flying. When Raito uses this attack, he covers his foot in chakra to enhance it, making his version C-ranked.

Name: Tsutenkyaku
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is simply a falling axe kick to the ground. Combined with Raito channeling chakra into his leg and foot, this kick results in either a gigantic crater or a deep fracture along the ground, and can kill multiple opponents caught in its immediate strike zone.

Name: Kage Buyo
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: None
Description: The Shadow of the Dancing Leaf is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. Since this is the opponents blind spot, the user can have various ways of executing the dance with a variety of combos in almost any fashion.

Name: Zeus' Doki
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-15m
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique is widely admired as the pinnacle of lightning techniques. With this technique, Raito is a conductor for lightning. When this technique activates, during any type of storm, lightning shoots from the sky and surges at Raito, at his convience. He redirects it, immediately, for any longer on his body and he will die. He can redirect 10 lightning bolts, either consecutively or seperately. Each time he redirects lightning, his finger tips are damaged. After the technique is finished, meaning 10 lightning bolts have been fired, he cannot use chakra again until a medical ninja heals his hands. These lightning bolts have god-like speed and power. However, because of this technique's power, he can only use this once every topic, and he generally uses this as a last resort.

Name: Gouzen Chisoku
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-10m
Element: Fuuton
Description: By coarsing chakra through the arms and the feet, one can propel forwards at phenomenal rates, in any direction. This can be used to go up, however, one must be ready to be susceptible to aerial attacks.

Name: Kaze Bure-do
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-5m
Element: Fuuton
Description: By molding Wind Chakra, one can create an indestructible blade of wind the can be any shape or size. However, there are restrictions. It cannot be a mace or an ax, it must be some sort of sword or lance. This technique cannot pierce metal armor, but can rip through cloth easily.

Name: Kaze Karada
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-5m
Element: Fuuton
Description: Wind Chakra coats the user's body, making him nearly invulnerable, but more susceptible to all Katon techniques. If a hit connects, a physical hit, then th wind chakra moves and subdues the opponent. The chakra slices and cuts the body of the opponent at a rapid rate, because the opponent has foreign chakra. While on the user's body, it damages the user's body little by little each post. Overall, this technique lasts for six posts. This technique can be cancelled only by emitting an equal or powerful Fire Chakra, cancelling the technique. However, this is why this technique is very practical, because usually, the fire that cancels out Kaze Karada will burn the opponent too. S-Ranked techniques can get through, however they are weakened.

Name: Raikou Karada
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-5m
Element: Raiton
Description: Lightning Chakra coats the user's body, making him nearly invulnerable, but more susceptible to all Fuuton techniques. If a hit connects, a physical hit, then th lightning chakra moves and subdues the opponent. The chakra electricutes and disrupts the internal proccesses of the opponent's body at a rapid rate, because the opponent has foreign chakra, making movement nearly impossible and extremely painful. While on the user's body, it restricts the user's body little by little each post. Overall, this technique lasts for six posts. This technique can be cancelled only by emitting an equal or powerful Fuuton Chakra, cancelling the technique. S-Ranked techniques can get through, however they are weakened.

[Yun Disukai]

Were not Accepting ANBU currently.

[Yun Disukai]

Your Pheonix is slightly over-powered, no invisibility.

Your special characteristic is vague, and has weird words in it.

Personality is lacking.

Name: Guren Kaina
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Fire
Description: He uses his gauntlets with explosive powder, and ignites them with the sparks caused by the oils, thus it resulting in an explosion. Guren Kaina yields a lot of force and is usually performed while his opponent is at close range, preferably in his grip.

-your arms = Gone.

Name: Gotsui Tosei
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 2-7 M
Element: None
Description: Using the sword to stab his opponent, Raito then proceeds to lift him in an arc over his head and slam him into the ground. To do this, the sword and the arm must have enough power to support the opponent's weight.

-You couldn't, its impossible with a thin katana or basic sword.

Name: Taju Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 0-15 M
Element: None
Description: This jutsu is basically a massive version of the Shadow Clone Technique. Instead of a few clones, it creates a few hundred clones (or a number of equal grandeur). This is considered a forbidden technique, because it can potentially be dangerous to the person performing it, seeing as how all of the clones are given an equal amount of chakra directly from the user.

-Secret tech, remove.


Name: Raiton Bushin
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a clone that is created from lightning. At first the clone will look like a normal clone but if it is hit the lightning will be activated around the clone cause a destructive force.

-Amount of Chakra used to create would not be worth it, just make normal clones.

Name: Kaze Bunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: The user forces out wind chakra and molds it into a human-like shape. Then the user molds the chakra with further detail to make it resemble them. When this clone is attacked, instead of poofing, it cuts what it touches with the unleashed wind chakra.

-Amount of Chakra used to create would not be worth it, just make normal clones.

Name: Sumiyaka Dageki
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Wind
Description: Charging the user’s weapon with wind chakra it allows for very fast motion, it is a series of 8 slashes, each slash moving at near invisible speeds and creating more power with each successful hit, however if the first attack misses the attack will cease. The greater the level of Sonic Blow the more damage caused by cutting deeper. The maximum level is 10, which will almost cut a person in half. As the blows commence, they will raise the opponent off the ground and the final blow will be a more powerful smash yet slower and fling them far through the air, this final smash however will not cut, only bruise. The Speed of the Arms move at around 40 Mph, making a quick 7 slashes and a slow 8th. The drawback of this technique is that because of the highspeeds, his legs move so fast that if he jumps, or runs or walks fast, before two posts are done, then his legs will cramp up for one post. However, his arms and torso will still be working efficiently.

-I made this Technique on Naruto Reborn, Remove it from your App. Now.

Name: Fuuton Handou
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Wind
Description: Charging the user's body with wind chakra, the user flies a few feet backwards and 8 to 9 feet to a side direction, allowing to dodge.

-I made this Technique on Naruto Reborn, Remove it from your App. Now.


Name: Kotan Hakaisha
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Wind
Description: Charging a weapon with wind chakra he extends her arms in both directions outward, shooting powerful cutting wind from them as well as his torso making a literal wind shockwave erupt that reaches up to 10 meters away from him.

-I made this Technique on Naruto Reborn, Remove it from your App. Now.

[Saruno Kazura]

Name: Raikou Shirudo
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: 0-10 M
Element: Lightning
Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seal and then lightning will be seen forming around the ninja body as a protection against incoming attacks. The shield is a good protection against earth type attacks. The shield can also be extended to around couple meters for a big range protection.

-Waaaaaaaay Too similar to my Raikou Ba-suto Technique. Remove since you already have a protection technique w/ Lightning.

-As for the Phoenix's, either put them in the RIGHT ranking of attack/offense, put their age, abilities, and everything else in that. We need to know ALL detail in the techniques and summons.

-Remember to put in the summoning technique in this, or you cannot even use your phoenix.

-Another mod will finish that part. xD

[Getsugakure]

ok i changed some stuff around, including Faowls and my special characteristics and i edited my phoenix shtuff, I just decided to use an app from another site for this one with some variations. sorry for before, it wont happen again so... please look at it again

[Yun Disukai]

Name: Guren Kaina
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 0-5 M
Element: Fire
Description: He uses his gauntlets with explosive powder, and ignites them with the sparks caused by the oils, thus it resulting in an explosion. Guren Kaina yields a lot of force and is usually performed while his opponent is at close range, preferably in his grip.

Your arms = Exploded now.

You have too many summonings, we have an expert on summonings on the site already, i dislike how you can summon being Nin/Weaponry

your missing parts of the setup.

[Getsugakure]

ok i took out all the summons and changed my shtuff around a bit, but faowls is still w/ me he doesnt have invisibility and i added two jutsu in repleace of summons

[Saruno Kazura]

Eh...

Zeus's doki is a bit sketchy, but i'll allow it on one condition...

You can only use it once, and can only use it again when your hands are healed, no exceptions.

Zane-kun...

STAMP!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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