Fijek of konoha -[Approved]- SK

[Fijek]

Basic Character Information:
Name:Fijek
Age:17
Gender:Male
Clan:Nara


Looks:

Personality:He is a weird twisted guy. As a child he loved to watch people in pain and it pleased him to get on others nerves. He is a real annoying kid and dose not care what people think. He dose make some friends but he is hard to get along with and is very stubborn. In daily life he spends his time training and practicing. He has a extreme hate for his village but stays to train and master his skill. In a fight he unleashes his rage and gos crazy on his enemies. he always finds a way to kill his enemies and never backs down.


Basic Clan Information
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Kekkei Gekkei:
Description:The Nara Clan (奈良一族, Nara Ichizoku) is known for their manipulation of shadows and tending of deer, which graze in a large area of Nara clan forest. Nara was the capital of Japan in the tenth century. Shika means "deer" in Japanese. They have kept a book with medicine preparations and effects for generations which imply they are skilled in the area of medicine. Among the medicine described in this book are the secret pills used by the Akimichi clan. The men from this family are very lazy, tend to be attracted to overbearing women and are apparently genius's . The Nara members are the Shika in the "Ino-Shika-Cho" trio.
Special Effect:This clan from Konoha Village is known for its ability to manipulate their shadow. Utilizing this ability the clan member can attach their shadow to the shadow of another individual, and then take control of the user. Resulting in the affected person replicating or "shadowing" the exact movements in mirror form of the clan member.
Link:http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Nara


Skill and Rank Information
Village:Leaf
Rank:Chuunin

Special Characteristics:He studies in the art of traps and tricks. He knows how to expertly set a trap and how to take one apart with ease. He knows all the types of traps and can identify them in a heartbeat.
Special Effects:Trap master, can undo traps and reset them. He can tell what kind of traps are used and can tell how they are placed. He is very good at metal work and making weapons. He makes his own weapons and traps and is always able to take them apart.

Elements:water earth
Skills Specialties:ninjutsu and weaponary
Weapon: He has a bow and arrow set. The bow is silver and is bladed at the ends. He has many arrows that are ultra sharp and even laced with posion. The arrows are attached to wires that he wraps on his finger just before he shoots. This allows his to yank the arrow back.

Jutsus

Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, he can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his bow sword above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Doryuu Jouheki - Earth Style Rampart
Rank: B
Doton • Doryuu Jouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals. Then a large earthen wall will erupt from the ground.

Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Character Use: General Skill
Rank: E
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu - Shadow Neck Bind Technique
Rank: -
Note: Secret Clan
Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique the clan member will first bind their target using the Kage Mane no Jutsu technique. Once the target can no longer move, they form the needed hand seal to initiate this technique. The clan member uses their shadow to form a hand which will creep up their opponents body to their neck. Once the hand reaches the neck, it will constrict in such a manner so as to strangle the opponent. However, the clan member will need to be careful. If their target has a lot of chakra, they can turn back the shadow hand and prevent it from binding their neck.

Kage Mane no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Technique
Rank: -
Note: Secret Clan Technique
Kage Mane no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. It's original purpose was as a skill to help delay any pursuers. After forming the needed hand seals, the clan member is able to manipulate their shadow along any surface. By using other nearby shadows they can further extend the reach of their shadow, however they are limited to the surface area of the original cast shadow. Once the clan members shadow reaches the target shadow, it will attach itself. While attached the target will be frozen, only able to replicate in mirror form the actions of the clan member. If the clan member is low on chakra, the Kage Mane will falter and the shadow will return to its normal form.

Kage Nui - Shadow Sewing
Rank: -
Note: Secret Clan Technique
Ninpou: Kage Nui is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique Shikamaru will first form the needed handseal to extend his shadow. Shikamaru will then change the handseal to cause the shadow to emerge from the ground in tendrils. The tendrils can extend and whip about and are strong enough to pierce nearby targets.

Kai - Release
Character Use: Higher Level General Skill
Rank: Unknown
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Character Use: Basic Ninja Skill
Rank: E
Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Mizu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
Rank: -
Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. He will slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Mizu Kawarimi - Water Replacement
Rank: -
He can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks.

Mizu no Muchi - Whip of Water
Rank: Unknown
Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.

Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank: Unknown
Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

History and RP Sample
History:He was born into the nara clan. He was always starnge and people could not except him. He got picked on and tormented so much it hurt. His father notiched a strange behavoir, he liked to kill things for fun. His mother was never around and his dad did not like to take care of him. He never liked his parents because they were never there. He got his uncle to teach him the art of the nara clan, which always intrigued him.

ACADEMY ARCH-As a student he trained and studied but never made any friends. he was called names and never allowed to do anything. Many people looked down on him just because of how he acted. He always tried his best and never backed down from a fight.He showed many shinobi that in a fight he would run circles around them. That he could back you into a corner and pull out a trap to catch you. Even though he was not liked he did great in school and surpassed his classmates. he mastered many styles and grew a likeing to card games. He always said that battle is like cards, you may have a good hand, but your enemy may have 4 aces. In battles he toyed with people and was considered to be the wild, crazy student. as it came time to graduate, he grew strong in his skills and found a liking to traps. On graduation day he was awarded top of his class and was told he would make a great shinobi.

GENIN ARCH-As a genin he trained with his squad and went on many missions. His squad did not like him much as a person but was glad to have him for his skill in traps and his ability to always think ahead of his enemy. One day on a mission he meet a missing ninja who knew of him. He was kidnaped by this missing ninja and told that he could make a great enemy of konoha. Knowing just how strong konoha was he decided to stay even though he hated it with a passion. He managed to escape from the missing ninja and tell his squad about the ninja. they didnt believe him and said that he was just begging for attention. So he did something unspeakable. He killed his whole squad in the night and blamed it on the same missing ninja that had kidnaped him. He told of how he only escaped because of his skill and wits when in fact thats the reason they were dead. For months he worked by himself, completing small task around the village, secretly training and getting better. the chuunin exams came around and he was ready. He came out with his new supply of jutsu and easily took the exams by storm. He was the first to rank up in the exams and the hokage saw great skill in him but also great evil.

Rp Sample:fijek sat alone in the park chewing on a pear. It was dark outside and it looked like it was about to rain. Fijek was bored and wanted something to do. It had been boring around the village lately, with not many missions and hardly any attacks on the village left it in a calm mood. He wanted some action and adventure but not many people were allowed out of the village. So there he sat munching on his pear when a young boy ran by. He seemed to be a student but wasent sure. "hey, boy! What are you doing out this late, dont you know a storm is comeing?" Fijek looked at the boy as he stoped. The boy looked at him with a surprised look on his face. The young boy replied,"um..no, i had to go meet my sensai at the dojo, he is going to teach me a new jutsu!" Said the boy with a grin on his face. Fijek smiled, everyone always wanting to get stronger, who needed it. all the training and teaching, thats why he trained himself and worked alone. "well hurry up boy, it would be sad if you got sucked up in the storm." fijek laughed his demonic laugh at the boy. The young boy took off, with a smirk on his face. "i hate little kids." said fijek as he thought back to his younger days. so full of pain and torment. He hated his childhood and was glad it was over. By now his pear was done. He threw the core at a passing bird but missed. "oh well...what to do now?" Fijek stood up and walked over to a tree, he pulled out a kuni knife and carved his name in the tree." fijek the coolist guy was here." He laughed at his own comics and sat at the base of the tree. Within five minutes he was asllep and out.

He awoke an hour later and yawned."crap..i fell asleep now its late, ah and im all wet!" It had started to rain while he was asleep and his vest was all wet. "this day sucks" said fijek as he stood up and stormed off cursing under his breath. He was in a bad mood and despretaly wanted to do something. So he tied a paper bomb to a kuni and threw it into a tree. BOOM! the tree erupted in flames." haha fun." he walked away from the tree as the fire was put out by the falling rain. fijek walked up the stairs of his apartment and layed in his bed. Now for some reading. He took out a copy of advanced water styles and started to read.[b][u]

[Fijek]

done !!

[Saruno Kazura]

Okay:

1) First post: Etchy etchy:

-Remove the Janshin Religion, that is waaaaay too much for a Jounin to handle, and you would be exiled the first mission.

-Trap master, explain it a bit more.

-You must follow the Template. Go and redo the template using the 'Green' words in that section.

-You have to have 'Weaponry' as a Specialty to be a trap mater.

Score: 3/10

2) History: Spread it out a bit more, make it a bit more readable. Put some more detail in it.

Score: 7/10

3) RP sample: Has to be at least 400 words. Sorry, but my standards.

Score: 6/10

4) Techniques: Remove all Janshin techniques, you are not allowed to have the Janshin Religion.

Score: 8/10
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Total Score(At the moment): 6/10
Score needed to pass: 7.5/10
Score for a higher character: 9.5/10

[Fijek]

ok i changed what you asked but what did you mean by i didnt use the right template, i used the one that was under chacter template, so i dont know about that.

[Saruno Kazura]

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This was the intended Template to use, with the bold, font size, the works.

-Anything Else besides this is approved, But please change to the template so it is easier to read.

Zane-Kun. ~

[Fijek]

ok i fixed it!

[Saruno Kazura]

Okay, Completed?


Approved!~

By Zane-kun. ~

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