My Sorta Awsome New Jutsu

[Ave Uchiha]

Name:Essence of the Sun
Rank:A
Element:Fire
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:The user will use pheonix flower jutsu at the sky. It goes so high it seems as if the firballs hit the sun. When they come back down they come back in three giant balls of fire about the size of a 2 story house. The jutsu is devastating to the enviroment and it would surly blast apart anything in its way.

Name:Water Tornado
Rank:A
Element:Water
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:The ultimate defense and attack mechanism. Ave starts to spin, getting faster and faster by the second. In another second the user will be enveloped in a massive tornado of water that keeps getting bigger and bigger. The tornado can then drown the target. The tornado can defend against most fire techniques and most weapons. A lightning technique used on the tornado would surly knock out or even kill the user. The user controls the size of the tornado, the bigger the more chakra is used.

Name: Illusion-Burning in Hell
Rank:A
Element:None
Type:Genjutsu
Description: In this Genjutsu, the target goes through intense mental torture that is almost to that of Tsukuyomi. This jutsu makes the target relive their worst memories, but the memories are exaggerated and made even worse to the point where the target is begging for death. It depends on the kind of person to where is they can resist better than others or not.

[Last Temptation]

- 'Essence of the Sun' A technique with range as far as the sun? Do you know how far that is? A maximum of 94.5 million miles. Yea, I don't think so. Remove Please.

- 'Water Tornado' Sounds more like a B ranked to me.

- 'Illusion-Burning in Hell' This technique is too vague. For one, you need to explain how your character catches them in the Genjutsu. Then you need to explain what type of person would have a better chance of escaping. Among alot of other details needed, it's just not cutting it for me. Add ALOT or remove.