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[zamaxis]

Basic Character Information:
Name:Zamaxis raidon
Age:23
Gender:Male
Clan:Raidon

Looks:. Has a black tattoo on his cheek of a dragon wrapping around a lighting bolt. Wheres black and gray, And his pupils are light gray.

Personality:He has a smooth, calm temper but can get wild in battle.He loves to have a good time and is real easy to get along with but when he is made angry he can explode and go nuts. In battle he looks for the upper hand and never gives up. He will try his hardest until it kills him and he will never back down. He believes that mercy should only be given to those who deserve it and that justice should always prevail. He likes to play jokes and mess around to. When he is not on a mission, he plays pranks and gags on people in the village. He is a real friendly person and loves attention. He hates when people are taking advantage of or when people are used for evil purposes.


Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei:Has the Kekkei Gekkei of the Raidon clan.The ability to change the weather conditions in a certain area. Can make the weather status change no matter what it already is within a 5 mile diameter.
Description:The Raidon clan is known for its ability to control the weather.Raidon meaning thunder, is the symbol of the clan.They often use lighting based jutsus in battle.They weer also known for being able to cause confusion in battle by changing to weather.
Special Effect:Can control many aspects of the weather in a space. No matter what it is, it can be changed based on need.
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Skill and Rank Information
Village:leaf
Rank:jounin

Special Characteristics:He has metal plates implanted in his hands and feet which allow him to channel his lighting attacks at specific targets. The metal rods also channel other lighting up his arms and the body transfers it into chakra.
Special Effects:Can channel lighting in his arms and legs and use it for chakra. can save up static energy in his arms to be used later with his water jutsu.

Elements:Lighting and Water
Skills Specialties:Ninjutsu and Taijutsu

He has two swords that he carries on his shoulders. they are both black and gold and were given to him by his grandfather.They allow him to better channel his lighting and allow him to move static energy around freely, so he can control lighting.

Jutsus-

Name:Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.


Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name:Tornado Lightning (Toruneedo Raitoningu)
Rank:B
Element:Lighting
Description: Using some form of hand seals, He can generate lightning from his palms which he can whip around to destroy his surroundings.

Name:Ikadzuchi no Kiba - Lightning Bolt Fang
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing together his two swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. A plume of of an electrified chakra-like essence will rise into the clouds above to activate the lightning to come crashing down on his target.

Name:Ikadzuchi no Utage - Lightning Bolt Feast
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing together his two swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. He will then implant his swords into the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack each target individually

Name:Raigeki no Yoroi - Lightning Strike Armor
Rank:C
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing his two swords together, he spin the blades to generate a disk of lightning which will then pour down to cover his body and his swords. This electricity will envelope his body in a protective armor which will harm anyone who dares strike him directly.

Name:Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Rank:C
Element:lighting
Description: this technique is used in conjunction with his two swords. Drawing his two swords together, he will form a ball of electricity which he can hurl at his opponent.

Name:Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description:Drawing his two swords together, he will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon his body. The current will be contained within and around his form. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against his opponent. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Name:Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank:B
Element:water
Description:Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, he will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name:Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank:C
Element:water
Description:Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Name:Mizu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
Rank:C
Element:water
Description:Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. He will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Name:Mizu Kawarimi - Water Replacement
Rank:B
Element:water
Description:He can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks.

Name:Mizu no Muchi - Whip of Water
Rank:C
Element:water
Description:Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.

Name:Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank:C
Element:water
Description:Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Name:Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank:B
Element:water
Description:Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

Name:Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank:B
Element:water
Description:Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Name:Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank:C
Element:water
Description:Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name:Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Rank:B
Element:water
Description:Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. he does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

Name:Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip
Rank:B
Element:water
Description: he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target.

History and RP Sample
History:zamaxis was born in the raidon clan under a famous Shinobi. He was given the chance to study under the clan leader in the secret arts of the Raidon clan, But his father refused and wanted to train him on his own. His mother was a skilled medical ninja and was always out working, that Zamaxis almost never got to see her at home. It was soon time to join the academy when his grandfather told him how he was a great Shinobi in the past and that he wanted Zamaxis to have his two lighting swords. He told him that they were able to channel lighting, which made the clan so strong.
ACADEMY STUDENT ARCH-He began at the academy not knowing many people because he never really got out much. All of his time was devoted to studying and in the library. Often times he would sleep and stay in the library, looking up information and learning how to be a great ninja. The academy was not really a challenge for him. He had always had a gift for fighting and his dads training just helped. he made a couple of friends and hung out with them on occasions. Many people thought that he was shy, which was not the case. He never got into any trouble and was thought to be the teachers pet.
GENIN ARCH- He graduated from the academy and quickly changed pace. He became real popular and started to make a lot of friends. He still studied, but less often. Now he was off doing missions and hanging with his friends. He loved the dumpling bar and was a regular customer there. One day he meet a girl at the dumpling bar and began to date her. They could not be separated and always hung out. While on a mission he discovred that his kekkie gekkie was growing and getting stronger, but this feared his girl friend. she broke his heart and ran with his rival.It did not bother him much but showed him that trust was not a easy thing to find. Then the village was attacked and Zamaxis lost his dad and mom. This made him angry and he left the village. Mistaking him for a rouge ninja, Anbu chased him and tried to kill him. Finally he was able to tell them that he was a genin from Konoha. he returned with a desire to become stronger. as the chunin exams approched, he started to prepare. He entered the exams with his squad and made it to the end. In the final round he had to face his ex-girl friend. So much anger came from him that he beat her an inch from her life.He finally passed and became a chunin.
CHUNIN ARCH-As a chunin he was given a squad of academy students to teach. he thought them well but teaching was not really his thing. So he asked to work on missions with a genin squad. His request was ansrewed and he was given a genin squad that he trained well. On a B ranked mission his squad was attacked and killed, him and one genin survived. This devistated him and he locked himself in solitud for weeks. he than came out ready to face the world, knowing that things happened and the only way to stop them is to beat them. he finally mastered the styles of his clan that he mastered all of his lighting based jutsus. He proved himself by killing two of Konohas most wanted ninja. The Hokage was proud and shocked in one. He was promoted to jounin and was glad to become one.

Rp Sample:Zamaxis stood on the roof of the academy, holding his two swords in his hand."Come on, hit my knees, it will knock me to the ground" He was trying to teach a Genin some Taijutsu. this boy was not that great, but wanted to enter the chunin exams. so Zamaxis volunteered to train the boy on his free time." come on you have to move faster that that." Said zamaxis as he quickly dodged the genins attacks."lets go, you want to be a great shinobi and you cant even touch me?' the genins hand landed smack on his jaw."Ok...i asked for that, good job, now..lets get some Ramen." zamaxis smiled and put his sword away, as he walked with the boy down to the ramen bar."its ok, you will get better, it just takes time and practice." said Zamaxis as he put hand on the genins shoulder. They walked off the building and landed in front of the ramen bar."So....you up for a big bowl of nice ramen?" zamaxis walked in and took a seat." so you ready for the exams?" asked zamaxis. he wanted this child to do great but knew that work was needed. He looked out the door and saw it was getting darker. "maybe its time for you to go... ill see you tomorrow, ok?" zamaxis stood and paid for the boys ramen.

[Saruno Kazura]

Name:chidori-thousand birds
Rank:A
Element:lighting
Description: Chidori allows him to cut through any foe. Later, It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Chidori is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, his hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is his chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.
After concentrating all the chakra into the arm, use his quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Because their opponent can easily counter the attack, Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name. Because of the great amount of chakra needed to utilize the technique, the technique can only be used so many times during the day

Name:Chidori Eisou - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear
Rank:A
Element:lighting
Description:He is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

Name:Chidori Nagashi - Thousand Birds Current
Rank:A
Element:lighting
Description: Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, he is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Name:Ikadzuchi no Kiba - Lightning Bolt Fang
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing together his two swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. A plume of of an electrified chakra-like essence will rise into the clouds above to activate the lightning to come crashing down on his target.

Name:Ikadzuchi no Utage - Lightning Bolt Feast
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing together his two swords, electrical energy will begin to crackle. He will then implant his swords into the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack each target individually

Name:Raigeki no Yoroi - Lightning Strike Armor
Rank:C
Element:lighting
Description: Drawing his two swords together, he spin the blades to generate a disk of lightning which will then pour down to cover his body and his swords. This electricity will envelope his body in a protective armor which will harm anyone who dares strike him directly.

Name:Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Rank:C
Element:lighting
Description: this technique is used in conjunction with his two swords. Drawing his two swords together, he will form a ball of electricity which he can hurl at his opponent.

Name:Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank:B
Element:lighting
Description:Drawing his two swords together, he will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon his body. The current will be contained within and around his form. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against his opponent. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Remove these, The Chidori require a blood of a Uchiha, not any other clan. Also, the lightning Feast-Dragon tornado requires Raiga's twin lightning blades, no exception.

[zamaxis]

ok, ill remove chidori but the ligting fest can be an exceotion, and i have two swords that chanle lighting any way

[Saruno Kazura]

Basic Clan Information
[Optional, may not apply]
Kekkei Gekkei:Has the kekkei gekkei of the Raidon clan.Tha ability to change the weather conditions in a certian area. Can make the weather status change no matter what it already is within a 5 mile diameter.
Description:The raidon clan is known for its ablity to control the weather.Raidon meaning thunder, is the symbol of the clan.They often use lighting based jutsus in battle.They weer also known for being able to cause confusion in battle by changing to wheather.
Special Effect:Can control many aspects of the wheather in a space. Nomatter what it is, it can be changed based on need.

Is this even approved?

And the sword thing is fine if you can channel Raiton chakra through your chakra network and into your swords. >.>

Make the Rp sample and History a bit more, readable. History needs to be more detailed.

[zamaxis]

it was on the old site, do i have to get it reapproved?

[Saruno Kazura]

Probably, all clans have to be approved.

[zamaxis]

but it was already approved before, ok ill post it

[xoxKitKat]

Also, maybe spell check everything before posting. Its not very professional to have multiple spelling errors.~

[Saruno Kazura]

Very True. ~

[Last Temptation]

Let me post a few recommendations.

To be a Jounin, I would say that your rp sample needs to be more detailed then it is. If you could add more detail, That'd be great. Do the best you can and we will work around it.

Also, I recommend you post all of the Academy Jutsu instead of simply putting 'Can do all academy jutsu' Trust me, if you ever need to use them it would be best that you have them written on your application for descriptions and such.

Also, it isn't just spelling errors you need to fix, I would also like to see better puncuation as well.

[zamaxis]

ok, i think im done down. fixed what you asked

[Last Temptation]

Please remove the Chidori jutsu, All ends of those techniques are gone as far as I'm concerned. Kakashi and Sasuke whom where the only ones that could use them have been long sense dead on this site.

[zamaxis]

ok, done, anything else?

[Last Temptation]

Approved, ~

[Saruno Kazura]

Name: static arrows

Rank:B

Element(s):lighting

Description: The user dose the needed hand signs and static electricty flows from the users arm(comes from the built up static in the metal rod) and wraps around there arm. the lighting can be fired and shoot in any direction at speeds of 60 mph. the arrows can cut through almost anything and leave a singe mark. the more static that is built up in the users arm, the more stronger the attack is.

Effects:The arrows will cut targets, can not go completly threw them but can embed in the body, causing damage to internal organs. The arrows can also singe, burn and paralyze the body. Tha arrows are not bright enough to blind. it can pirce wood and earth, but can be blown off track by high speed wind jutsu


Name: static barrage

Rank:B

Element(s):lighting

Description: after the needed hand signs are done, 10 to 15 orbs of static electricty will flow from the arm and surrond the body. They can be used to ram, tackle or rush targets. they can also detach and be thrown or held. they can go up to 40mph and are very bright, if looked at directly can cause temporary blindness.

Effects: The orbs can stun, paralyze, and shock the target. they can cause temporary blindness and can be channled through metal.

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